ShiVi OS- Stages (Epilogue updated on page 19) - Page 8

Masterpiece!!!no words to say.... I'm continuously crying.....it touched my soul..... it's really a masterpiece.....loved it

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

No no no dont cry!

If all of u cry

IF will flood...

Thank you soo much.

And yes I will be writing an OS with happy ending soon. I had already decided that before posting this🖤

It has already been flooded🥺🥺🥺

Anyways Yayy waiting for ur one shot🥰🤩

Originally posted by: Scribbled_tales

I have been crying whole time reading it. Didn't expected it to be this emotional.

Shiva's death and Raavi's pain was so heart breaking🥺. totally an emotional ride😭

Thank you so muchhh🖤

Dont cry!!

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

I just finished reading this, and I did not read the ending first.. and oh my God, this broke my heart!

This was a real tearjerker Maahi.. I cried! Raavi went mad in her grief and love 💔

This line is my fav: Teri masoomiyat ki wajah se tera har gunah maaf aur mere gusse ki wajah se mera dard bhi ghalat

This is so so true and suits ShiVi so well 💔

Amazing job 👏❤️

U wanted his accident and her feelings

Did u find it ok??

Originally posted by: Fah_huq

One of those stories those you crave to read again and again no matter how much they make you cry

being lifted on his brothers shoulders - these 6 words are enough to break my heart.

You did great. Job well done👏❤️

Thank you so much Faha🖤

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

Aww Kia!

Be strong🖤🖤🖤

Trying 😭

But truly Maahi! It was beautifully written!!❤️

When I first read " no tomatoes potatoes eggs shoes and heavy objects allowed," I hesitated, knowing this might end up deeply hurting me but I continued (without peeking till the end) and to say that I felt like bawling is an understatement 💔 dil toot gaya, but this piece is a work of art, beautifully written. Your words really have a way of connecting with the audience.

And with that, I'll try to go mend my broken heart now 😭

Originally posted by: Faithaboveall

Oh man😭😭😭😭😭

My first story that I've read here and this jad to be it😭

I loved it,loved the emotions,her feelings everything but but 😭

Hi Harshi!!!

Glad u loved it🖤🖤

😆sorry!

Originally posted by: raindropsroses

Kaise aise? How? 💔

Raavi crying ✅

Shiva crying✅

Shiva finding a groom for her✅

Raavi almost marrying him✅

Shiva meets with an accident ✅

Shiva dies✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅✅

Raavi mourns✅

Raavi goes mad✅

Are you okay, Mahi? Did anyone say anything to you? Are you mad at something? Whose gussa are you taking out on ShiVi?

Humne kya guna ki hai? 😭😭

I felt Shivas grief and pain didn’t get the recognition it deserves🤷🏻‍♀️Everyone understood Raavi and sympathised with her. But Shiva’s pain is much deeper.

So I wrote this

Originally posted by: Sugarcanes_AC

Masterpiece!!!no words to say.... I'm continuously crying.....it touched my soul..... it's really a masterpiece.....loved it

Thank you so muchhh🌺🌺