To Unlove ~ A Fatejo TS - Page 4

Damn!

Wow... I had to re-read that a couple of times to process it all!

Very beautifully written! I loved how you explored all the relationships Tejo came to unlove. You described her hurt and resentment so well that as a reader, I could feel as if I'm standing in her shoes and wondering how to even begin mending my broken heart. Here I thought she'd be unloving Fateh and struggling with that, but in fact, the biggest struggle of all is.to unlove your mother. Despite all the blatant truths and facts right in front of her, how can she possibly come to terms with the fact that her mother wronged her?! Furthermore, how does one mourn the passing of such a mother?!

I'm so glad Tejo moved on and away from the grief her family and Fateh gave her. They simply didn't deserve her and she had to put in A LOT of work to undo the damage they caused her.

Thank you for the tag, I look forward to reading more from you! ❤️

Gosh! 💔

Beautifully written! Last part is the highlight of the story❤️

Loved it.. keep writing🤗

Fabulous piece of writing

Keep it up

I wrote one on how to get rid of jasmin

Pls give ur comments there as well

U are a great writer

Keep writing

This was sad and beautiful, but at the same time I’m not sad because Fateh needed to learn the meaning of love and Satti’s blow to Tejo’s wounds really solidified the state of her relationship with Tejo. Tejo is happy in her new relationship and so I’m happy 🥺

Thank you for tagging me!!💜💜

Oh wow, the ending was unexpected really.

I thought Jasmine was the one who died *accidently exposed my inner desires* 😅😅

But I really liked the TS and the way you wrapped everything up in this story. It was an enjoyable read, thanks for the tag and update. 😊❤️

Amazing yaar ❤️

Wasn't expecting it ... you wrote it so well👍

Do write more :)

Originally posted by: masin

Damn!

Wow... I had to re-read that a couple of times to process it all!

Very beautifully written! I loved how you explored all the relationships Tejo came to unlove. You described her hurt and resentment so well that as a reader, I could feel as if I'm standing in her shoes and wondering how to even begin mending my broken heart. Here I thought she'd be unloving Fateh and struggling with that, but in fact, the biggest struggle of all is.to unlove your mother. Despite all the blatant truths and facts right in front of her, how can she possibly come to terms with the fact that her mother wronged her?! Furthermore, how does one mourn the passing of such a mother?!

I'm so glad Tejo moved on and away from the grief her family and Fateh gave her. They simply didn't deserve her and she had to put in A LOT of work to undo the damage they caused her.

Thank you for the tag, I look forward to reading more from you! ❤️

Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: Tahiti-1

This was sad and beautiful, but at the same time I’m not sad because Fateh needed to learn the meaning of love and Satti’s blow to Tejo’s wounds really solidified the state of her relationship with Tejo. Tejo is happy in her new relationship and so I’m happy 🥺

Thank you for tagging me!!💜💜

Thank you, means a lot !

Originally posted by: I_StanStrongFLs

Oh wow, the ending was unexpected really.

I thought Jasmine was the one who died *accidently exposed my inner desires* 😅😅

But I really liked the TS and the way you wrapped everything up in this story. It was an enjoyable read, thanks for the tag and update. 😊❤️

My inner desires are the same 😆

Thank you!