ShiVi ff : Jhoothi Nafrat

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Posted: 4 years ago
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(Note: everything is same like the show. This will start from the wedding day. N ya nobody knows that dev love rishita)

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Part 1 : wedding bells

Everyone was busy in the Hall arranging the things.

Dhara-bhaiya yeh lights yaha nahi lagani hai (keeping her hand in her head)

Mileye dhara se. Pandya parivaar kisi sabse bari bahu aur gautam ki patni. Yeh ek sushil, sanskari aur achi beti, patni, bahu aur bhabhi hai. Isne hi Pandya parivaar ko sambhala hai.


Then she saw gautam

Dhara-gombi abhi kuch kam nahi huwa hai (stressed)

Gautam- dhara!!! Tu tension mat le mein hoon na!!! Tu yahi ruk mein sab dekhkar ata hoon

Mileye Gautam Pandya se, suman aur darshan Pandya ke sabse bara beta aur dhara ka pati. Papa ke death ke baat isne hi parivaar aur Pandya store ki responsibility li hai. Yeh ek caring n loving beta, pati aur bhai hai


Krish- bhabhi meine hall dekh liya hai sab taiyariya ho gayi hai !!!

Dhara- finally!!! Krish ja aur jakar dekh toh dev taiyar huwa ki nahi ??

Krish-thik hai (while going) ek baat bolu bhabhi

Dhara-ha bol!!

Krish-I love u!!! (Smiling)

Dhara- I love u more!!

Krish Pandya, suman aur darshan ka sabse chota beta. Woh chota hone ke sath sath bohot jyada naughty aur sarcastic hai. Ghar ka sabse pyaara aur cute baby

Krish enter the room to see a panicking dev

Dev was very restless, he was not even ready!!!

Krish-dev!!! (Dev turn back) Tu abhi tak ready bhi nahi huwa baraat half hour mein nikalne wale hai!!!

Dev-mujhe ready nahi hona (telling this he sits on the bed looking too dull)

Dev Pandya - suman aur darshan Pandya ke dusre bete. Yeh ek bohot intelligent, smart aur mature ladka hai. Apne family se bohot pyaar karta hai.

Dhara - kyu ready nahi hona hai??? Teri shadi hai!!!

Dhara enter the room

Dhara-ajj teri shadi hai dev!! (Caring his cheeks) aur tune hi kaha tha na ki tujhe shadi se koyi problem nahi hai!!

Dev-bhabhi mujhe kuch kena hai (holding her hand)

Dhara- dev abhi baat karne ka time nahi hai hum mein thodi der mein nikalna hai!!! Ready ho ja. Krish shiva kaha hai????

Krish- nahi pata

Dhara-nahi pata toh jakar pata kar!!

Then krish leave, dhara carelessness dev cheeks n was leaving when dev hold her hand.

Dhara -(turn back) kya huwa???

Dev-bhabhi Mujhe yeh shadi nahi karni!! (Tens)

Dhara was shock with his sudden statement

Dhara-kya huwa dev!!!(shock) Tu nervous hai??? It's k sabhi nervous hote hai. Bt shadi ke baat sab thik ho jayega!!! (Caring his cheeks)

Dev-bhabhi Mujhe sach mein shadi nahi karna chata !!!

Dhara- chup ab bohot hogaya dev. Mazak ki bhi ek hat hoti hai!!(angry n scolding)

Dev-par bha......

Gautam-dhara jaldi aa yaha par

Dhara- mein ja rahi hu. Tu ready ho jana (wiping her tears)

Dhara went

Dev-bhabhi kaise kahu app se ki mein sach mein ye shadi nahi karna chahta

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Meanwhile

A boy was shown laying in his bed, staring his phone n smiling

Shiva POV

Y is life so unfair with me??? Jisse sabse zyada pyaar kiya woh toh kabhi bhi mujhse pyaar hi nahi karti thi.

Then I close my eyes n remember the first time I saw her

She was a cute little girl looking adorable in pink lehenge. That was the best day of my life, her smile was so pure that it stay forever in my heart.

I open my eyes hearing krish calling me

Krish-shiva shiva!!! Open the door!!! (Shouting)

I got up n open the door

Shiva-kya huwa (rudely)

Krish-bhabhi bula rahi hai tujhe. Jaldi aa

Telling this he went.

I dont want to attend this wedding. I won't have attend if this was not my own brother's wedding

Shiva pandya- suman aur darshan ka teesra beta. Gussa humesha nakh (nose) pad reta hai, parivaar se bohot pyaar karta hai specially dhara se. Aur baki story parna

POV end

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Dhara n suman were talking

Dhara-maa baraat 10 minutes main nikal jayenge!!!

Suman-thik hai. Ajj mein bohot kush hu mere dev ji wajah se mere bhai ke saath mera rishita acha hogaya hai !!

Dhara-ji maa

Suman - dhara shadi ache se ho jaye yeh tere zimmedaari hai

Dhara-maa abb chinta mat karo sabh thik ho jayega. Ab hardik bhai ke saath car mein jaye hum baraat leke aate hai

Suman-thik hai

Telling this suman went with hardik.

Dhara-yeh shiva kaha hai???

Shiva-mein yaha hoon !!!

Shiva comes

Dhara-itni der se kaha tha!!!

Shiva-bhabhi apko toh pata hi hai na....

Dhara-ki Tu iss shadi se khush nahi hai.

Shiva-ha!!!! (Moody)

Dhara - par Shiva woh dono ek dusre se pyaar karte hai

Shiva-wohi toh agar pyaar na karte na toh kabhi bhi yeh shadi nahi hone deta!!

Dhara-tu na ekdam budu hai. Jab tujhe bhi pyaar hoga na tab Tu samjhega. Tab tak ke liye tu yaha bet mein dev ko le aati hu

Telling this dhara went

Shiva- pyaar woh bhi mein na samjhu!!! Agar pyaar nahi hota toh yeh nahi hone deta

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On the other side

A girl was getting ready. She was looking very preety in her bridal lehenge n her beautiful jewellery

Anita- raavi thik se toh bet!!! Kitna heel rahi hai!!!

Raavi-di ajj mein itni kush hu ki finally meri shadi hone wali hai woh bhi mere pyaar se

Raavi narayan- prafulla niece. Raavi ke maa baap bachpan main hi maar gaye the aur uske baat prafulla aur jagat ne hi raavi ko pala hai aur apni real beti ki tara pyaar karte hain. She is cute, cheerful n full of live.
Somnath ki sabse achi aur sundar ladki hai.

Prafulla -woh bhi uss dev se (irritatingly)

Prafulla enter

Prafulla-dekh raavi agar Tu abb bhi yeh shadi nahi karna chati mein tere saath hu tujhe koyi kuch nahi kahega
(Caring her cheeks)

Jagat-yeh kya ke rahi ho prafulla (jagat enter) raavi Tu iski baat mat sun

Raavi-masa paa shadi toh mein dev se hi karungi so dont worry (hugging him )

Then after some seconds she break the hug

Raavi-masi maa mein dev ko bachpan se pyaar karti hu. Aur uske bina nahi reh sakti (Then she hugs her) . Dev bohot acha hai woh mera humesha dhyan rakhega don't worry..

Prafull-thik hai thik hai!!!!

Telling this she went jagat too went after her.

Raavi continue with her makeup.

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Baraati nikal gaye hai, dulhan bhi ready hai!!!

Kya shadi hogi

That's it

The end

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Amazing start…

Cant wait to read more.

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I love the way u have kick started this work

Would love to witness how the events unfold

Pls do continue soon

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interesting start.....

m sure dev isnt going to marry her

shiva loves her 😭 he is hurting

raavi is gonna get hurt💔

waiting for next update

superb hai

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