RaghVi OS: Strumming in Silence - Page 7

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Posted: 4 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Trist5xx

It's a good. I really love your stories so much that I cant help but comment on them

thanks a lot❤

I am happy that you love them

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Posted: 4 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: ReemShah

I am sorry Trista...wasn't meaning to tag you..but did it accidentally

it just that your usernames are similar

Arre thank you so much for tagging me! Tbh if you didn't tag me, I wouldn't even know that there was an OS written, and I owe you one for that😃❤️

This OS is truly beautiful and alluring! I am falling short of words to describe how meticulous it was! The reference of Raghav being rain and Pallavi being sunshine just made everything 10 times more fascinating!


And yeah, (please) do not forget to tag me on your every masterpiece, Ardhamaindha?😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: Trista101

Arre thank you so much for tagging me! Tbh if you didn't tag me, I wouldn't even know that there was an OS written, and I owe you one for that😃❤️

This OS is truly beautiful and alluring! I am falling short of words to describe how meticulous it was! The reference of Raghav being rain and Pallavi being sunshine just made everything 10 times more fascinating!


And yeah, (please) do not forget to tag me on your every masterpiece, Ardhamaindha?😆

You definitely don't owe me---so it's all right--and you're welcome for accidental tagging😆

Thank you so much Trista❤ ...I believe that details can make the reader live the scene...hence the descriptive writing...


Ardhamaindi....I will definitely not forget..😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: ReemShah

You definitely don't owe me---so it's all right--and you're welcome for accidental tagging😆

Thank you so much Trista❤ ...I believe that details can make the reader live the scene...hence the descriptive writing...


Ardhamaindi....I will definitely not forget..😆

Haha no I definitely owe you one 😆

True. The story just went with the flow and had such a beautiful ending

Thanks!❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: Trista101

Haha no I definitely owe you one 😆

True. The story just went with the flow and had such a beautiful ending

Thanks!❤️

You don't need to..😆

I am glad you enjoyed the story❤

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Posted: 4 years ago
#66

Its beautiful

The contrasting comparison of characters with the sun and rainfall love it!❤️

The emotions between them are very well written👏

Thanks for the pm Reem🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pallavi_Rao

Its beautiful

The contrasting comparison of characters with the sun and rainfall love it!❤️

The emotions between them are very well written👏

Thanks for the pm Reem🤗

Thank you so much

Glad you liked it❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#68

I had kept this oneshot for the day when I would have nothing else to do. I wanted to read this in peace. I did it today.

This is beautiful and very different.

I find it different because you have described one single scene with great transition of emotions. The two characters remained calm but their thoughts, surroundings and minimal conversation depicted the entire chaos inside them. Within one scene your words sailed me from them being strangers to soulmates.

I love to read soft romance where gestures and silence speak more than words. This was one of them.

Loved it.

Keep writing.❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: xerxes12

I had kept this oneshot for the day when I would have nothing else to do. I wanted to read this in peace. I did it today.

This is beautiful and very different.

I find it different because you have described one single scene with great transition of emotions. The two characters remained calm but their thoughts, surroundings and minimal conversation depicted the entire chaos inside them. Within one scene your words sailed me from them being strangers to soulmates.

I love to read soft romance where gestures and silence speak more than words. This was one of them.

Loved it.

Keep writing.❤️

Thank you so much❤

I find it fascinating how everyone interprets the story a little differently and it gives me a new angle to see the story from. I am a sucker for little gestures.

I am glad that you loved it❤

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Posted: 4 years ago
#70

Okay I am superrr late to this, par finally araam se padha😆

This is hella smooth and expressive, you've painted a beautiful picture with words 👍🏼

The sensory details are a treat, it always intrigues me as to how several people perceive the same natural wonders so differently.

Silence is quite rare in our day and age, but when it's quiet, it's beautiful, stunningly so.

You've portrayed that wonderfully ❤️

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