fatejo ff: kismat connection chapter 3 updated

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My first os on fatejo turned out pretty decently hence I decided to take the plunge again and make another attempt at writing except this time it will be a ff with no context to the plot in the show . Only the characters will be the same . And the Canada wala rishta but don't worry it's not Jas.


Chapter 1

Tejos point of view

She sat their frustrated fidgeting with her dupatta for the upkemt time trying to control her anger .she had enough of her families dominating behavior. She had always been outspoken and rebellious but when it came to her family she always gave in as for her their happiness mattered more, But now she had decided that enough is enough. How could they without her consent agree to a marriage proposal just because the guy was a nri. Did they not know how much she loved Punjab.why did they have to force their obsession with canada on her.

The last six months had anyways been hard for her. Ever since she had returned from the hospital after that fateful accident ,she felt uneasy as if there was a part of her that was missing, a feeling she couldn't decipher but felt each moment. She wondered who or what that was .Was it a person, a cherished memory or a dream that remained unfulfilled. That hollowness killed her , she felt lost in the dark corridor of nightmares that left her scarred. She would often wake up sobbing with a heart wrenching pain that was unknown to her. She felt like a caged bird struggling for freedom knowing probably that it was never coming her way. She slowly got up and walked towards the radio on her bedside and turned it on and a song started playing darr hain tujhe main kho na du mile jo khuda toh bol do, she couldnt bear it anymore she began trembling, she suddenly turned the radio off and winced in pain .Tears started flowing through her eyes ,she tried whipping them away but they refused to stop. What was this feeling, why was it hurting so much and why did a mere song affect her so much.

She took a deep breath and decided to try again maybe it was because of the marriage proposal she said trying to convince her self .what else could trouble her she thought . She now switched the channel some interview of a famous boxer was on air. So now Mr fateh we have asked enough questions about ur boxing career plz tell us something about ur love life and ur views on love The anchor excitedly asked. Fateh she whispered the name as if it was some melody she could listen to on a loop. She did not even realize that she unknowingly had started smiling.

Love for me is a journey of laughter and sadness. An everlasting bond of friendship. A message to my love is that thanks my heart from walking into my life and filling it with happiness I never knew. You have made change the way I look things ,uve given me the belief to blindly trust my instincts .you have instilled in me faith like never before . Helping me to rise above petty things and soar .lve come this far because Uve always been within me. I may not be able to see you as often as I like. I may not get to hold you in my arms all through the night but deep in my heart I truly know , you are the one i love and I can never let you go.

Truly urs and only urs

Lafandar.

She didn't know why but her heart began racing faster, her cheeks reddened and she began to blush . She knew that the confession was not for her but it felt as if it had been made only for her. She began twirling happily forgetting all her worries and slept peacefully that night completely oblivious to the storm that was to come.


To be continued .........

Next chapter will be posted tomorrow till then enjoy .πŸ˜€πŸ§šβ€β™€πŸ§šβ€β™‚πŸ’“πŸ’“πŸ’“

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Posted: 4 years ago
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fantastic start... waiting for the next part!

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All he wanted as he stared at the half moon coursing through the sky in the midst of a blanket of stars was her voice calling out to him Oyy lafandar . The owner of that melodious voice had become the reason of his existence but as they say love is like the summer no matter how much u love it ceases to exist unless October has a different plan. His broken soul was screaming a scream nobody could hear as he drowned in a ocean of anguish and despair .He let his memories emphasize him as somehow he relished it. He wandered if there was an ending to this unbearable pain and that would there ever come a day when she would find him amongst her all forgotten maybe she'd hear him in the words of her favorite song or in the crumpled paper where he had penned his heart felt desires. He promised that until then he would lay there waiting in the pages of those written love letters yearning for their yesterday canvesed with their memories.

After the radio interview he had called his best friends and they sat drinking together at the clifftop which was their usual hangout spot. They knew he was hurt and broken shattered beyond repair but there was nothing they could do to lessen his pain as sometimes the best way to help is by the just letting the wounded fight their own battles .

He suddenly let out a laugh and both of them looked at him worried . Fateh are you OK aabiraaj asked .Ok whats that ? Is that feeling a privilege which I have been deprived of.Ahhh let me see if there are any instances when I have felt this OK of urs ,hmm ohh yeah when I saw her lying there on that hospital bed or when her eyes looked at me as if I was a stranger or when she said excuse me do I know u? Or ohh the best one when the doctor said a part of her memory had been erased and that to her now I was a stranger she'll probably never know ,He sarcastically said .

Fateh abhiraaj didn't mean that we know what ur growing through, No no u don't he exclaimed u don't know what I am going through .I am tired of pretending to smile wiping away the tears that fall showing no sign of weakness at all. I am tired of wearing layers and layers of masks letting the world think they know me well .while I remain broken on the inside. Fateh abhiraaj said I know my sister more than most of the world would ever know. I have seen her fight a battle with her innerself trying to unearth the lost part of her soul, trying to recall what or who she had left behind. I know u are probably not a part of her memory right now but trust me it's not long before she comes back to u as she is urs as much as u are hers. Until then my friend just wait till the rain washes away ur sorrows only for the sun to shine.

To be continued

I will try posting tomorrow at the latest.

Thank u plzzzz enjoy.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hey, I don't know if you know about this or not but you don't have to make a separate topic for each chapter, you can just add next chapters in the single topic by creating new post and add them in the index with page number. This way it would be very easy to find all the updates at one place for the new readers as well..

I hope you find this useful😊...

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Chapter 3


The alarm clock rung loudly causing him to groggily reach out at the bedside and forcefully turn it off and just as he was about to go back to sleeping another alarm began to ring. Yaar Tejo banda Karo na subha subha he calls out to her just to realise what he had just said. He looks up at the ceiling teary eyed and thinks how I wish I could turn back in time to the days u were mine and to the days when our hearts where one ,when our clocks of love had just begun.

How I wish I could turn back time to when ur love seemed a crime, when I held u close for hours dropping kisses on ur head as u nuzzled my neck, when ur voice was my favorite song .but unfortunately the hands of time cannot go back .

He got up and slowly walked towards the photo on the wall across his bed and said while caressing it Happy anniversary wifey, I must accept the fact that u're new life has no place for me yet I can't stop loving u. I want to tell u how badly I miss u with no subtext , no grudge or anger felt. I wish u knew this hurts but then again I don't ,it would be too embarrassing to have u know I cry at night ,wishing u where there ,pretending that I am holding ur hand relating all those mushy sad songs to u. I guess this is where we are meant to be right now me apart from you . My hands a little empty and my heart a little sad how I wish ud know how I love u. I don't know if there would ever come a day when I'll be what u're to me, when u'll cherish our love and the moment we shared as I do but till then I'll hold on and keep loving u with all I have as my love is enough for the both of us ,enough to last us both a lifetime and even beyond if may.

I so wanted to spend the day just with u, just the two of us and our love celebrating the day of our union. The day we proclaimed to love and protect each other till our last breath but I can't as I have to go as a guest lecturer at the new university that has started in our pind. I know this is what u wanted me to be a boxer motivating our youth to play for our nation.

But I promise you that today evening I'm all urs, we'll go to the place our journey began to the place we first met and knew it was meant to last. No matter how much we tried to hide behind those masked expressions of hatred. It was meant to last as our fates were entangled by our kismat connection.


I had decided to stop posting stories about fatejo until their love track begins in the show but today I was impressed with how well fateh dealt with his emotions and feelings. Giving it back to jasmine. Hence I decided to be nice and post a chapter on this story.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Hey continue it soon, loved it❀️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I surely will but after the end of this month as I currently have exams, but till then keep reading the os I post. I've posted quiet a few. Phir subha hogi, meri biwi Ab kisi aur ki, pyar hain kisi aur ki tujhe chata koi aur hain, butejo:thd clown is in love,love beyond measures .hope you enjoy them.

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Originally posted by: Shraddha6789

I surely will but after the end of this month as I currently have exams, but till then keep reading the os I post. I've posted quiet a few. Phir subha hogi, meri biwi Ab kisi aur ki, pyar hain kisi aur ki tujhe chata koi aur hain, butejo:thd clown is in love,love beyond measures .hope you enjoy them.


Yes i have read some of them, loved all of them and yeah best of luck for your exams, hope you ace themπŸ€—

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Thank you so much, I hope I do. It's great that you read my stories.plz give me feedback if any so that I can work on them and improve my upcoming posts. Hope u read all the stories I will post in the future.

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