Bariyan a ShiVi ficton [Completed] - Page 33

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese

Very sweet update! Raavi's crazy ideas and conditions were funny, of course Shiva was able to fulfil them all with ease 😆

The last part about shiva's dad and raavi's parents was emotional, let's see how Raavi reacts to her parents' memories ❤️

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Originally posted by: Foxii

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Shivi are so adorable ❤️

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Originally posted by: RainbowChaser

Every update of this story is all ❤️.

Can't help but feel so much of sweetness and happiness seeping into with each word read !

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Originally posted by: Radhika Shah

Just read all the parts. It's beautiful. I love it

Continue soon

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Originally posted by: Shivi_forever

Beautiful update👏

Raavi's uncle is so adorable😊

Raavi's tests for Shiva were twisted like her😆

Loved Anchu and Shiva's conversation👏

Shiva got to know about Raavi's feelings regarding the loss of her parents and why she craved for Pandya family👏

Shiva's promise to give Raavi everything was beautiful ❤️

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Originally posted by: Scarysea

Amazing ..Raavi's feelings about the loss of her parents . Her craving for such a deep bond and family ..feeling alone despite being in midst of so many others .. Shiva getting to know her and promising to give her everything that she deserves

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Originally posted by: Scribbled_tales

amazing update (:

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HELLOOOS,

Back with an update. Enjoy reading.

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PART 12

Raavi walked into the main door highly tired from such a long day. She was up last night chatting with her cousins as they were coming back today. So they spent the night together gossiping on anything and everything. Then early morning, they started preparation for her send off as per her dadi's wish. To add to that her maasi kept hurrying to leave much to her and Shiva's surprise. She literary made the driver fly the car to Somnath. Raavi felt she would faint the moment her head touch the pillow sleeping to oblivion. If she managed to keep her bhoothnath with her for longer as her cuddling teddy next morning, it would be cherry to the icing. She sighed imagining her pleasant sleepy diary and didn’t notice the step. Shiva wound his hands around her holding her securely to his chest as she was about to fall,

“Sambhal ke chal na chipkali. Gir jati aab. Aur yaha aise andhera kyun kar rakha hai. Kuye ka light bhi nahi jala ke rakha”, Then only Raavi noticed the utter darkness around the house.Where was everyone? Did they sleep already?

“lagta hai sab so gaye. ”,

“itna jaldi?? Hum aane wale hain yeh log jaante hai na. Bhabi toh hum na sone tak nahi soti. Aur yeh Krish toh raat taak phone pe.........”, Shiva's grumblings stopped abruptly as the lights came to life blinding them momentarily. As their sight adjusted, they took in the view in front of them. Their angan was decorated beautifully with a banner of “HAPPY 1ST WEDDING ANNIVERSARY”. The banner had two pictures of them. One from their wedding ceremony and another which they were sure was their first photo together – nearly two years old Shiva looking at a giggling one year old Raavi with a frown. ShiVi looked at each other surprised. Their whole family came out shouting surprise and rushed to hug the astonished duo.

“Saal giramubarak ho mere bacche. Main tere liye itni khush hu. Mujhe toh kitna cinta thake tu baal bramhachari na reh jaye. Par aab toh tera kudka parivar bhi hogajaaldi. Haina!?”, Dhara patted Shiva's cheek affectionately, t

“kya Di saare pyaar aapka favourite bacche par utar do ke kya?”, Raavi pouted making Shiva shook his head. Dhara laughed and cupped both their faces,

“Agar yeh mere favourite hai na toh tu meri khaass baccha hai”,

“matlab Raavi saahi hai yeh Fire storage aapka favourite hai. Not done bhabi”, Dev whacked Shiva who proudly pulled his collars,

“aaj iska itna special din hai. Favourite din hai. Aaj isse banne de. Tere special din mein tu ban jana. Saaru?”,

“isliye mein khullam khulla kehta hu mere favourite bhabi toh yeh hai. No competition”, Krish exclaimed side hugging Raavi, “bhabi maine aap ko kitna miss kiya. Yeh rishita bhabhi ko na gossip kar na nahi aata. Aab mein chain se gossip kar payunga”,

“aee nautanki, roz phone mein do do ghante kya bakta tha tu”,

“bas idhar udhar ke batein”

“matlab chugliyan”,

“Shiva tu mere devar se aise baat nahi kar sakta”,

“pehle mera bhai hai yeh, tere devar ke line baad mein samjhi”,

“lo inka saal gira jhagarke khatam kara raha hai tu Krish”, Rishita said making everyone shake their heads,

“likhke le lo Rishita, inn ka shuruat bhi jhagarke huya hoga”

“tum log apna chapar chapar baad mein kar na pehle cake cut te hai, kyu bhagodi ki beti? Tere bacche thake huye hai, nehi dikh raha tujhe”,

Shiva took a look at the cake and burst out laughing making everyone grin at him minus Raavi. Shiva turned her head downwards to the cake and her eyes literary popped out.There, over the cake, it was written ‘Happy Anniversary Bhooton ka Raaja and Chipkalyon ke beauty queen'. A bhoot that resembled vampire actually and a Chipkali was also drawn there.

“Somnath ke sabse khoobsurat ladki likhni chaiye tha na Krish”,

“aab dekho humare bhi anniversary hai. Iss nathe humne yeh liberty khud li hai”,

“tum logo ke? Woh kaise?”,

“pichle ek saalse Chipkali, Pisach, Bhootnath, Chudail. Bandar, Bandariya, Coohiya, gorilla, sher, sherni - matlab pure ke pure zoo ek hi ghar me jhel ne ka anniversary”,

“Toh phir iss cake mein tujhe chubana banta hai”, Shiva wound his arm around Krish’s neck pinching his cheek who tried to wriggle out of his grip only to have Shiva tighten his hold,

“Arreh nahi nahi Shiva. Mujhe cake khane ka bahot maan hai aaj Aur yeh toh Raavi ka favourite Red Velvet hai. Isske saal aise annya mat kar”,

“sirf aap bol rahi ho bhabi isliye”, Rishita hugged Shiva wishing him more happy anniversaries.

It felt like yesterday when they got to know about Dev and then his mamikibehankebeti declared them to be secret lovers. He looked at Raavi who hada slight twinkle in her eyes. She blushed hearing whatever Rishita whispered to her as they hugged each other. But it didn’t feel strange. He was married to Raavi and loved her. It felt like the most natural thing in the world. As if they had been always like this - like their made up story.

Taking the first piece, both went to Suman and fed her. She too fed them and hugged them. She was happy. She never thought Prafulla's daughter could be a part of her family. Raavi proved her wrong. She was so innocent and naive yet so responsible. Her maasi's harshness never seemed to touch her even. She loved her for that. Suman lovingly kissed their forehead blessing them. They next went to Dhara who made them feed each other first,

“Normally, pati patni ek dusre ko khilate aur wish karte hai”,

“par bhabi yeh dono kaha normal hai”,

Ignoring Krish, ShiVi fed Dhara and kissed her on either of cheek. Gaumbi fed them first and pulled Raavi's cheek lovingly. Dev hugged the two wishing them only to have Krish join them turning it into a group hug. At last they fed Krish and Raavi ruffled his hairs lovingly and Shiva kissed his fore head.

“gift time”, Krish jumped almost shouting loudly as they were finished with feeding each other. Everyone chuckled at his excitement. They settled in the sitting area dumping all the gifts on Raavi's lap. Raavi grinned at all the gifts. She loved gifts Shiva knew that. That didn’t mean he would sit quiet.

“aap log kaise ho? Cake chipkali special, saare gifts bhi. Main kaun!!”,

“Tumere bhoothnath hai. Don't worry. Main karungi nah tere sath share inn mein seek do”, Raavi smiled showing her all teeth as Shiva scowled,

“Tu khol Raavi”,

Raavi opened the first gift that was from Suman. She gave gold bangles to Raavi and a gold locket to Shiva. Dhara and Gaumbi gifted them paired watches. Dev –Rishita gifted them with movie tickets. Rishita also gifted Raavi a windchime that she had wished to buy.

“ab meri bari”, Shiva shook his head at Krish’s antics as he read the card that says ‘to my favourite bhabi and her bhoothnath'. Inside was an album that had ShiVi written on the cover beautifully.

“Khol na Shiva, mujhe tum logo ka bachpan ka photos dekh na hai par yeh Krish suspense create karke rakha hai”,

The first page had a description of the two and their uncountable verbal WW sessions. Next page had a photo of probably 8 years old Shiva and Raavi grinning at the camera with their hands on each others shoulder. But there was a empty spacebeside it.

“Krish, yeh khali kyun hai”,

“isliye bhabi”, Krish showed the photo he had insisted to take before they cut the cake where they were giving somewhat similar pose - only Raavi had her hand around Shiva's waist here, “then and now”,

“tu na bakwas ka fb chalana ban kar. Kya kya idea ata hai”,

Next photo was their individual photo with their respective parents. Both stared at those photos wistfully and glanced at each other. As they kept turning the pages they were suddenly flooded with so many memories. They started narrating the events behind those photos while Rishita listened engrossed fully.

One picture had Shiva scowling at the camera with pure distaste as Dev and Raavi grinned beside him. Gaumbhi shared the memory of that day with them. They had gone to the studio to click photo in their school uniform. Shiva wasn't fond of either school or the uniform. So he created a ruckus about it only to get Raavi's attention to the matter. Raavi then insisted on joining them and forced Shiva to take multiple pictures contrary to what he intended. Older Shiva still made a face seeing the photo.

There was aphoto of both of them with Darshan Pandya - he had Raavi in his arms while Shiva was making face at a giggling Krish. Both of them at GauRa's marriage ceremony glaring at each other as they hugged Dhara. Photo from Dev's 18th birthday where Raavi managed to squeeze in between Shiva and Dev - even though she was standing beside Dev, she and Shiva had their attention on each other as if threatening each other about something. Shiva's 18th birthday where Raavi was rubbing cakes all over his face grinning at the camera while he looked ready to murder someone. A 15 year old Shiva smirking at the camera with his arms encircled around a sulking Raavi's neck – Raavi was in a fowl mood that day and Shiva made her click photo forcibly. Then a photo came where a 19 year old Shiva had his hand fractured and Raavi was writing on his bandage gleefully.

As Dhara narrated the story behind it, Raavi couldn’t but think how different was her memory of that day from that of Dhara's. It was Ankush bhai's wedding day. Whole Pandya and Narayan family was invited. Ankush shared a close bond with both Gautam and Hardik. So Raavi knew the Pandyas was surely going to attend the wedding. She had planned to ask Dev to a date that day. She had worn her best dress and was looking really pretty. They reached before the Pandyas and she waited for Dev's arrival. But when Dev did arrive she could only frown. Reason? That bhoothnath wasn't with him. Neither were Dhara or Krish. Only Gautam, Hardik and Dev came. On inquiry, she got to know Shiva had fractured his hand. Hence he was resting. Dhara and Krish refused to leave his side but forced the other to attend the wedding. Raavi got restless when she heard all this and wanted to go to Pandya Niwas. But her maasi wouldn't allow her that. Raavi faked headache and left for home giving excuses. When her maasi and anita asked if they should accompany, she made them stay by emotional blackmailing with ‘Ankush bhai will feel bad, kaki won't be pleased blah blah'. Then she straight went to Pandya Niwas to fuss over her bhoothnath. When asked the reason behind her visit, she replied saying she had a headache and needed Dhara's magical Kaada. She had stayed with him till Gaumbi and Dev came back and she had to leave. Now that she thought back to that day, she remembered forgetting Dev the moment she heard of Shiva. Then she even drank that awful tasteless Kaada just to stay there. She did actually draw a chipkali and a bandar on his bandage to irritate him some more but didn’t know Krish had that moment captured. Surprisingly she totally forgot about her plan of proposing Dev till Shiva wasn't back to his full health which was after 2 weeks. Once he was fine, she did start her Dev jaap again. She looked at Shiva who was smiling hearing Dhara's story. He too looked up and as their eyes met, he caught on the look in her eyes. He wondered if there was more to the story.

Then there are pictures post there revelation. One with Dhara caught between the two, one from the day their wedding date was fixed, one with both of them trying to pose modestly on Krish's insistence. As they went through all the photos, Raavi realised it was her bhoothnath all her life. She claimed to love Dev but still it was all about Shiva. She did feel heart broken when she had to let go her dream of marrying Dev. But why? Because seeing this pictures, she couldn’t find him in her memories either. There was always Shiva threatening her to leave Dev, forget Dev. While she chased after denying to do whatever he said. She knew Shiva had become important to her now. But had it been always like that?

“Its so fascinating na. Bola jaye toh tum dono apna pura zindagi ek saath guzaro ge. Ek dusre ke saath apna bachpan gujare ho. Apna budapa bhi guzaroge. Ek dusre ka har ehem pal ka hissa ho tum dono. Ghum ki ho yaa khushi ki. This is so different and special. Ek alag hi andaz hai. Isliye itni khas lgati hai tum dono ka story mujhe”,

Rishita was right. If they looked back now, they could clearly see what they were for each other. Despite all his hatred, he cared for her and looked out for her. They had shared every significant, insignificant moments with each other. They were woven around each so intimately that it was impossible to separate. Raavi never celebrated her birthday without Shiva. Again it was Raavi who wished him first after his family. Raavi despite all her cheerfulness used to feel sorrow on her parents anniversary. It was Shiva who would invade her privacy forcefully that day not letting her mope around. Raavi used to hover around Shiva at his father death anniversary making sure he didn’t see her. She knew her maasi was to blame and she was a reminder of her maasi's deeds to him. She would run to himfor her problem only to find them solved magically which she credited to Dev. Now they knew it was destiny's plan to lead them to each other. It was destiny’s way to make Shiva see beyond his meaningless hatred for her and to make Raavi realise what was Shiva for her.