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Posted: 4 years ago

Beautiful updatešŸ‘

Raavi's uncle is so adorable😊

Raavi's tests for Shiva were twisted like heršŸ˜†

Loved Anchu and Shiva's conversationšŸ‘

Shiva got to know about Raavi's feelings regarding the loss of her parents and why she craved for Pandya familyšŸ‘

Shiva's promise to give Raavi everything was beautiful ā¤ļø

Waiting for next

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Posted: 4 years ago

Just read all the parts. It's beautiful. I love it

Continue soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Every update of this story is all ā¤ļø.

Can't help but feel so much of sweetness and happiness seeping into with each word read !

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Posted: 4 years ago

Beautiful,

loved every hatke Idea of RaavišŸ¤£ā¤ļø

Shivi are so adorable ā¤ļø

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Very sweet update! Raavi's crazy ideas and conditions were funny, of course Shiva was able to fulfil them all with ease šŸ˜†

The last part about shiva's dad and raavi's parents was emotional, let's see how Raavi reacts to her parents' memories ā¤ļø

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Posted: 4 years ago

Faha! šŸ¤—Thanks for another wonderful update! I almost missed it because I didn't remember the number of the last part I read. Fortunately, I love reading your parts multiple times and came across a new one. If I may request, could you please update the date on the title as well?


Raavi is Raavi. Haha so she truly went with the idea of testing Shiva. But it was so adorable. Her uncle didn't really want to test him and I guess Shiva already knew who was behind the testing ideas and it was so adorable for him to comply to her wishes in their own ShiVi way by teasing each other. And honestly, both Shiva and Raavi are gadhedas. I am curious how did Raavi manage to convince and how did Shiva not realize that the mandir was 30-35 steps vs 300. There would be a huge gap in height of the temple. 30-35 steps is like 2 stories vs 300 steps is like 20.


Aww the anniversary scene was sweet. Please tell me we will get more of their anniversary minus Mami being kabab main haddi in between.and the last scene with Antoor and Shiva was ā¤ļøā¤ļø. Loved how he opened up to Shiva about everything. What a juxtaposition from their first meeting where it seemed like an interview. Looking forward to see what Shiva's dad wrote about Raavi. It would be really cute for them to read it as Raavi becomes pregnant. But they have yet to get to that level of physical intimacy for her to be pregnant. Hopefully, they'll consummate their marriage on their anniversary. Also looking forward to seeing Raavi getting her mom's memorabilia.

Lovely update! Can't wait to read the next part!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Great šŸ‘šŸ¼ Waiting for next update

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: kayinat

Great šŸ‘šŸ¼ Waiting for next update


Thank you so much ā™„ļøā™„ļø

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Thank you so much ā™„ļøā™„ļø

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Originally posted by: CheerlessIM

Beautiful update ā¤ā™„


Thank you so much ā™„ļøā™„ļø

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