RaghVi FF : I WARS I *Update Chapter 4 - Page 30* - Page 3

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

Thnx.

I do loved those lines. Its inspired by dialogues Pallavi used in this same situation. So credit to those writers for idea.

I don't remember her dialogues but your these lines reminded me of Raghav.

How he was water once and with wait he turned into ice and with the warmth of hope and light of truth he is melting. ❤️

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

And that's why you said it's weird thing to say.

Can't help with that though. I didn't say anything about stalking.

I will read tomorrow again with a fresh mind, right now I have too many crazy options that first a second I thought she is pregnant and Sana is the child. 🤪

Dn its fine.

I think for sure u need sleep.

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

I don't remember her dialogues but your these lines reminded me of Raghav.

How he was water once and with wait he turned into ice and with the warmth of hope and light of truth he is melting. ❤️

Thats how I hv used in all my writes for Raghav. But I remember she saying on the lines that weight has to melt and come out in tears once its lifted.

Well, thank you! For staying true to a non-promise, that there might be an OS, this weekend. Might have been very difficult, as you dont like the one character, who has taken 75% of your story space. For that, 👍🏼

Now, let me tell a short story. In another life, another time, there was an OS named nightmare. The author thought, it had it all, if we read carefully, we will find it all from that single chapter. But, for me, it took atleast 6-7 chapters, to get in the right direction. So, whatever you say, that the story has it all, I will just pass that statement. Mind you, you know the background; hence the chapter, the sentences, the words, the punctuations, all if it, might be screaming the story to you; like an open book. But, no.

Long prelude. To the story. Intriguing! No lack on the number of queries running in my head. But, for my sanity, will just give whatever answers to those and close it, as I dont handle suspense well. Sorry, back to the story.

You ace with your words and how they are strung together. The silence before the storm is often talked about; you touched on the silence after the storm has passed. Am sure its devastative and eerie.

Her posture was screaming sadness but her eyes didn’t have a thing - thats such an oxymoron, isnt it? Eyes being the windows for the soul; here it is not. A facade? Or just in the zone of feel-nothing, though the body has taken the toll.

A tear left her eye and a surprise danced on her face. Post her long monologue, this statement comes. More like saying the facade drops. The eyes start reflecting the soul. Surprising her. Breaking her resolve.

And then one of my fav sentence. Some realization have far greater effect than comprehended at the time of event.

fire flickers? Changes in the atmosphere making the fire dance, flicker. Her change? I am not sure.

Its again heart vs mind. But, here its for P. Knowing you, and your reading of the character, this is what would have made it difficult for you to write.

Last few lines, turns the story on its head. Cannot be your story, unless it does that. And yes, wide open for wild theories. As I said, unless it will progress further, will fill the blanks in my head!

Loved what I read! 👏

That was the whole reason. One more reason I m not feeling inspired to complete this story.

Not the story but any question u have in this chapter is have the answer in what I hv written for sure. No open ends here. And u have a lot of time as no new chapter in sight to get answers. And I will reiterate it, any question u have. I wrote it specifically like dt so that FF can be avoided. I got ur point about me aware of story but thats y u have a puzzle to play with.

Let's see. Will reply whatever possible.

Thats a perspective.

I loved that line like many others.

Interesting interpretation but not sure regarding what u inferenced dt.

Loved that sentence. A very general line which is true in most life's.

No comments.

Its an interesting journey for both I would say. But yes I hate P's character currently.

U will curse me for sure.

Thnx. I really love the thought u put in the puzzle I like to create. It gives a sense of game of chess which is my favorite too.

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

That was the whole reason. One more reason I m not feeling inspired to complete this story.

Not the story but any question u have in this chapter is have the answer in what I hv written for sure. No open ends here. And u have a lot of time as no new chapter in sight to get answers. And I will reiterate it, any question u have. I wrote it specifically like dt so that FF can be avoided. I got ur point about me aware of story but thats y u have a puzzle to play with.

Let's see. Will reply whatever possible.

Thats a perspective.

I loved that line like many others.

Interesting interpretation but not sure regarding what u inferenced dt.

Loved that sentence. A very general line which is true in most life's.

No comments.

Its an interesting journey for both I would say. But yes I hate P's character currently.

U will curse me for sure.

Thnx. I really love the thought u put in the puzzle I like to create. It gives a sense of game of chess which is my favorite too.

For the moment, the ‘no comments’ stares back at me. Challenging me. Thank you!

Originally posted by: Prriyam

For the moment, the ‘no comments’ stares back at me. Challenging me. Thank you!

It should. Wrote it for that only.

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

Dn its fine.

I think for sure u need sleep.

But do you like spying/ spy? (Seriously important question here, answer after thinking thoroughly.)

Yep. I desperately needed. Now going to give it a couple of reads.

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

Thats how I hv used in all my writes for Raghav. But I remember she saying on the lines that weight has to melt and come out in tears once its lifted.

Yep. May be because of that. Raghav as ice and Pallavi as fire. And here also you added a line, "fire flickers " .

Know I won't be getting answers but still, does he know she is with him for something?

I watched that scene again. She was saying exactly that. The weight has lifted and her heart found solace, not its flowing as tears.

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

But do you like spying/ spy? (Seriously important question here, answer after thinking thoroughly.)

Yep. I desperately needed. Now going to give it a couple of reads.

No. Not interested in ppl. I prefer reading about anything nd everything.

Will see the discussions u guys hv.