RaghVi FF : I WARS I *Update Chapter 4 - Page 30* - Page 2

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

You have interest in spy and spying. 🤪

She won't be obsessed with his death anymore.

I really would like to read this further because this looks so different. Pallavi is so conflicted here. Raghav, Mandhaar, the last call and what did you mean by "Sana out" ?

As I know about the time, won't be pressing much.

That is weird statement to make. I take offence.

I thought of editing it but it has to be their for story. It is something which can be inferred from whatever I hv already written.

Thnx for understanding. Will see if cn write a chapter each weekend but don't quote me on that.

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

That is weird statement to make. I take offence.

I thought of editing it but it has to be their for story. It is something which can be inferred from whatever I hv already written.

Thnx for understanding. Will see if cn write a chapter each weekend but don't quote me on that.

You are offended because I was right.

Really? I didnt find anything that could be connected to Sana. Is that a name?

Will read again later.

I'm always understanding.

Will not.

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

You are offended because I was right.

Really? I didnt find anything that could be connected to Sana. Is that a name?

Will read again later.

I'm always understanding.

Will not.

right? spying wt?

There is clear thing. That is y didnt removed dt last line.

thnx.

Wow a mystery....Pallavi playing a double whammy on Raghav...better not...but will not ...so what is the story...and why one short...it deserves your full attention as to be turned into FF...so please continue...

Originally posted by: Joyness

Wow a mystery....Pallavi playing a double whammy on Raghav...better not...but will not ...so what is the story...and why one short...it deserves your full attention as to be turned into FF...so please continue...

Thnx. Ya another mystery.

One shot because many ppl asked for open ended plot so that they can write there own stories. So kept it like this. Do complete the story.

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

right? spying wt?

There is clear thing. That is y didnt removed dt last line.

thnx.

How would I know? It's called spying for a reason.

When we search for one thing we will find many things other than the exact thing.

wow u pen down very beautifully , the story looks intresting but ur words are wow

This line how beautifully u describe ❤️

P - Some water are stagnant for so long that it freezes in the darkness of wait. It weighs down the mind and heart and for the survival, its flow has to be stopped. The warmth of hope and the light of truth do melt the ice but that weight flows down through the eyes to relief the heart. In past few days, we both have been to war and back.

JUST LOVE IT

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

How would I know? It's called spying for a reason.

When we search for one thing we will find many things other than the exact thing.

I m getting feel less of spy nd more of stalker by dt statement.

Can't help with that. But No lies from my end. If I say it is clear from what I hv written then its there.

Originally posted by: asethetic

wow u pen down very beautifully , the story looks intresting but ur words are wow

This line how beautifully u describe ❤️

P - Some water are stagnant for so long that it freezes in the darkness of wait. It weighs down the mind and heart and for the survival, its flow has to be stopped. The warmth of hope and the light of truth do melt the ice but that weight flows down through the eyes to relief the heart. In past few days, we both have been to war and back.

JUST LOVE IT

Thnx.

I do loved those lines. Its inspired by dialogues Pallavi used in this same situation. So credit to those writers for idea.

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

I m getting feel less of spy nd more of stalker by dt statement.

Can't help with that. But No lies from my end. If I say it is clear from what I hv written then its there.

And that's why you said it's weird thing to say.

Can't help with that though. I didn't say anything about stalking.

I will read tomorrow again with a fresh mind, right now I have too many crazy options that first a second I thought she is pregnant and Sana is the child. 🤪