fatejo short story - I WANT TO HAVE HER pt 2 updated with climax

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Story on upcoming

I stopped watching the show as current story is annoying till the marriage drama is over. And decided to even take a break from the fiction as well but as i was washing dishes after dinner just now a thought came and to pen it down before going to bed. Not sure if i would want to write more but this one definitely i want to bring it up coz it will be a treat for all fatejo fans . U can leave ur comments after reading


11am university campus cafeteria

Dressed in red shirt and white jeans he sat on his bike watching her through his sunglasses. The very good looking fair well built and tall guy had fallen in love with that sweet innocent looking teacher who works in the college where he delivers electrical appliances .


His staff is called upon for the delivery of items and repairing works at least twice a month and he doesnt miss the single opportunity of watching her beauty and politeness as well as clicking her pictures since he voluntered to do the deed on his staff's behalf

Just a glimpse of her!


The same routine has been going on for four months now and as he was about to confess to her his feelings suddenly he heard the sad news that she was married off to a boxer to save her family from society's humiliation. He was dissapointed . At first he decided to just give up and move on as he is rich handsome and an established businessman who could have any woman that he wanted on the planet but

Damn!

No one is like her!

She's an antic piece!

I want to have her!


She was watching him through her coffee sips. Somehow she was drawn to him especially after receiving his note of love confession passed through to one of her students . She could stll remember the touching lines

Ms tejo singh virk i fall for u at the very first sight of u four months ago even before u were married to that boxer husband of yours. It was saddening to see an innocent soul like u to put up ur life with your sister's ex lover who wont be able to love u for the rest of his life

U are tied in a loveless marriage. Dont u want ur husband to love u . Dont u want him to touch or feel u

Dont u have any desires of ur own. Think about what i say. Will wait for ur answer

Rohan verma


His words were simple yet carried a strong weightage

I am a woman and i have desires. He was absolutely right!

Why am i tied in a loveless marriage in the first place. A husband who could never be mine


A mixture of feelings that she could not understand for the first time in her life and that is

She was affected with his confession!

An attraction!

A better word

Infactuation!

Was she attracted to his physique or confession or

Both !


Rohan walked up to tejo and sat right in front of her

Stated his love verbally and that he wants to marry her to release her from that loveless marriage. Give her a better life . And his family will accept her openly as well


Tejo remained silent but deep imside she was affected with his words. She said politely that i do not know what to say to which he replied take ur time and give me the answer

I am waiting!


The next two days was very difficult for her that she could hardly think straight . His confession affected her deeply that she could not concentrate

Married to a man who doesnt love me!

Today i may not feel the pinch but what about the future!

It's my whole life!

Though he has moved on but he still loves my little sister!

Then a sudden thought came into her mind

Jasu also regretted for not marrying him!

Will she be happy with anyone else!

I came in between them and what if i withdraw and patch them up again!

Fateh and jasmin will get their love!

And i can move on!

Whom to speak to !

Viraj!


She rang her cousin's number and spill the details of rohan and his confession and asked for a piece of advise to which the latter stated calmly

So what!

He's right anyway!

For what are u sacrificing!

Just release urself ftom that bond and move on !


Tejo requested him to keep it as a secret but viraj thought quietly to himself

She's done a lot !

Not now!

He approached rupi about the matter who later discussed with the family durimg jasmin's absence

The sandhus felt that if a good lookimg rich guy out there wants to marry tejo and dearly loves her .why not!

Why does she need to be tied to a loveless marriage !

Release her !


A few days later rupi spoke to kushbeer who was disappointed with sandhus decision but felt that they were right somehow

Tejo has a life!

Why does she need to sacrifice!

Kushbeer consulted his parents who agreed to the same

No matter how annoying jasmin is fateh loves her and wont accept tejo as a wife but only a friend!

Will be life long!

We are talking about two lives here!

Fateh and tejo!

Let fateh get his love and tejo gets someone who loves her!

Tejo upon consulted stated that she doesnt want to come between fateh and jasmin any longer

They should be united!

But now the decision was in fateh's hands

Before anyone could consult him rohan's letter reached him at the acadeny the very next day


Mr fateh singh virk

Hi

My name is rohan verma

I am an entrepreneur

I own a business of electrical appliances

Let me just be straightforward

I am in love with ur wife and she is also attracted to me

In fact we have met for coffe treats at the university cafeteria thrice and i feel she likes me as well

I can understand ur pain

But dont worry

I have been sent to release u from this loveless marriage that was thrown upon u

I can feel ur sorrow

Please treat me as ur friend

And i come with a solution

U treat her as a best friend

I will treat her as a wife

U love her sibling

I love her instead

Do us both a favour

U release her and marry her sister

And i promise to u that i will marry her only after ur marriage takes place

And if u would like to save cost

We can get married to our lady loves

At the same mandap


Seconds later fateh singh virk was lying on the ground

Unconscious!


Part 2 - updated


That night fateh was very restless and could not surrender to his slumber. On the other hand tejo was fast asleep with sweet dreams of the new man in her life

A gentleman!

Soft spoken!

Good looking!

Never seen anyone like him before!


The next few days

Tejo was attracted to Rohan and was meeting him regularly for coffee breaks outside of the campus instead of the regular breaks at the cafeteria of the college. It was a secret that she only shared with viraj her cousin. Viraj on the other hand had his own plans up his sleeves and instigated her to see rohan more often. Viraj wanted his sister to be happy at least and not a goat to be sacrificed all the time to pleasure others

Its time she should please herself instead


Fateh was unaware of tejo rohan coffee dates. Neither tejo was aware of rohan's confession's made to fateh as the latter never spoke about it to anyone and kept is to himself thinking someone played a prank on him. At first he decided to meet up with rohan but buzo advised to let it be as it could be a joke played upon him


There was a change in tejo . During her lunch hours with fateh she spoke less . Her thoughts were filled with rohan

His handsome face!

Sweet smiles!

The comfort he gave her was so wonderful that she was drawn to him more as hours passed. She started making excuses to fateh that she had extra classes and will be late than usual and not to pick her up as her colleague will drop her home. It was a lie. She was seeing rohan for second coffee breaks in the evenings as the morning ones were not enough


Rohan was an interesting man with full of stories to tell and share with . Their likes and dislikes were similar and many more similarities that tejo could see herself in him already. Rohit was aware that tejo was attracted to him and sarted instigating that

Why u want to carry on with the marriage when i can give u better life!

Come live with me!

If he loves ur sister and she has regretted for her deeds why not bind them together!

Think about it tejo!

I will wait for ur answer


That night for the first time tejo was restless as she reached her bedroom. Fateh was fast asleep

Rohan's words were full of truth that she finally decided the very next morning to speak to fateh which shook him all over

Fateh !

Jasmin sey shadi karogey!

Then she explained that her sister regretted for her deeds and she wanted to give in to their marriage allowing both of them to reunite again. Fateh was taken aback and asked for any other reason behind her sudden decision. Tejo lied that there was no any other reason


The virks still havent spoken about rohan to fateh as they were buying some time to disclose the matter to him still wondering if they would be able to accept jasmin as their DIL. To their horror the scary phone call came that night from sandhus

Rohan's parents met up that afternoon with sandhus !


The latter were having their lunch when a white mercedes was parked at their front gate with a tall gentleman and his pretty wife came for a visit. Who werd they

We are rohan's parents!

We would want ur daughter tejo's hand for our son rohan!

They told that they knew everything about fateh and tejo's marriage and futher advised that tejo should be released and married to their son instead who loved her dearly with promises of them as in laws keeping her happy

Rupi was touched with their gestures that he was in the favour to release tejo and unite jasmin with fateh . Rupi was firm in his decision as tejo was his weakness . His decision was supported by viraj and harman

Fateh loves jasmin!

Rohan loves tejo!

Ok fine !

Will go ahead with it


Virks didnt know how to break the news to fateh but they didnt have to as rohan's parents were at their doorstep the very next morning requesting for tejo's hand informing that they have spoken to sandhus as well

Our son wants to marry ur DIL!

So can we proceed into ur son's divorce and our son's marriage!

The annoyed gurpreet taunted that marriages are not a game to which mrs verma shut her up by saying have u accepted her as ur DIL in the first place. We know how the marriage took place . Ur son loved her sibling instead and our son loves her. Whats the big deal. Just get over it. Surrender her to us and i can guarantee i will be the better MIL for her

Rohan apparantly was their only child and they would go to any extend to keep him happy

Fateh was at his academy the whole day while tejo was at her classes

The virks decided to break the news to both of them at night which tore fateh into pieces with tejo adding up stating she was seeing rohan and decided to give in to their marriage and unite with jasmin as the former is regrettng her deeds and still in love with him

Am i still in love with her!

The question he asked himself

He should be happy that he was getting his lady love finally but somethimg was amiss. Tejo on the other hand was relieved that she will venture into a new life with rohan and released from all sacrifices. The former has allowed her to work and even agreed to sponsor her PHD. What else do i need!

Fateh decided to meet rohan but it was not necessary as Rohan dropped by virks residence the next evening to pas over

The divorce agreement!

Rohan in his excitement to marry tejo asap got the papers ready and to fateh's horror tejo signed on the spot happily and urged fateh to do the same. Fateh didnt sign the papers instead had a face off with rohan that he punched the latter to which the annoyed tejo packed her things and left to her parents place

Fateh and rohan competition started with

Tejo as the gramd prize !


Reason for writing this fiction

We all kmow fatejo is the end game. But how will they get close and their love confession that is what is awaited the most

Why does it have to be the rona dhona way with tejo sacrificing or jasmin and her cheap tactics etc when we can have better ways like a new parallel male lead in love with tejo and wants to marry her. Fateh's jasmin chapter will be closed replaced with tejo chapter

Get back my wife!

Compete with that guy!

Fateh and rohan trying to woo tejo at the same time

In this way jasmin ss will be lesser and story more intrigiung






































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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aniash

Story on upcoming

I stopped watching the show as current story is annoying till the marriage drama is over. And decided to even take a break from the fiction as well but as i was washing dishes after dinner just now a thought came and to pen it down before going to bed. Not sure if i would want to write more but this one definitely i want to bring it up coz it will be a treat for all fatejo fans . U can leave ur comments after reading


11am university campus cafeteria

Dressed in red shirt and white jeans he sat on his bike watching her through his sunglasses. The very good looking fair well built and tall guy had fallen in love with that sweet innocent looking teacher who works in the college where he delivers electrical appliances .


His staff is called upon for the delivery of items and repairing works at least twice a month and he doesnt miss the single opportunity of watching her beauty and politeness as well as clicking her pictures since he voluntered to do the deed on his staff's behalf

Just a glimpse of her!


The same routine has been going on for four months now and as he was about to confess to her his feelings suddenly he heard the sad news that she was married off to a boxer to save her family from society's humiliation. He was dissapointed . At first he decided to just give up and move on as he is rich handsome and an established businessman who could have any woman that he wanted on the planet but

Damn!

No one is like her!

She's an antic piece!

I want to have her!


She was watching him through her coffee sips. Somehow she was drawn to him especially after receiving his note of love confession passed through to one of her students . She could stll remember the touching lines

Ms tejo singh virk i fall for u at the very first sight of u four months ago even before u were married to that boxer husband of yours. It was saddening to see an innocent soul like u to put up ur life with your sister's ex lover who wont be able to love u for the rest of his life

U are tied in a loveless marriage. Dont u want ur husband to love u . Dont u want him to touch or feel u

Dont u have any desires of ur own. Think about what i say. Will wait for ur answer

Rohan verma


His words were simple yet carried a strong weightage

I am a woman and i have desires. He was absolutely right!

Why am i tied in a loveless marriage in the first place. A husband who could never be mine


A mixture of feelings that she could not understand for the first time in her life and that is

She was affected with his confession!

An attraction!

A better word

Infactuation!

Was she attracted to his physique or confession or

Both !


Rohan walked up to tejo and sat right in front of her

Stated his love verbally and that he wants to marry her to release her from that loveless marriage. Give her a better life . And his family will accept her openly as well


Tejo remained silent but deep imside she was affected with his words. She said politely that i do not know what to say to which he replied take ur time and give me the answer

I am waiting!


The next two days was very difficult for her that she coild hardly think straight . His confession affected her deeply that she could not concentrate

Married to a man who doesnt love me!

Today i may not feel the pinch but what about the future!

It's my whole life!

Though he has moved on but he still loves my little sister!

Then a sudden thought came into her mind

Jasu also regretted for not marrying him!

Will she be happy with anyone else!

I came in between them and what if i withdraw and patch them up again!

Fateh and jasmin will get their love!

And i can move on!

Whom to speak to !

Viraj!


She rang her cousin's number and spill the details of rohan and his confession and asked for a piece of advise to which the latter stated calmly

So what!

He's right anyway!

For what are u sacrificing!

Just release urself ftom that bond and move on !


Tejo requested him to keep it as a secret but viraj thought quietly to himself

She's done a lot !

Not now!

He approached rupi about the matter who later discussed with the family durimg jasmin's absence

The sandhus felt that if a good lookimg rich guy out there wants to marry tejo and dearly loves her .why not!

Why does she need to be tied to a loveless marriage !

Release her !


A few days later rupi spoke to kushbeer who was disappointed with sandhus decision but felt that they were right somehow

Tejo has a life!

Why does she need to sacrifice!

Kushbeer consulted his parents who agreed to the same

No matter how annoying jasmin is fateh loves her and wont accept tejo as a wife but only a friend!

Will be life long!

We are talking about two lives here!

Fateh and tejo!

Let fateh get his love and tejo gets someone who loves her!

Tejo upon consulted stated that she doesnt want to come between fateh and jasmin any longer

They shoukd be united!

But now the decision was in fateh's hands

Before anyone could consult him rohan's letter reached him at the acadeny the very next day


Mr fateh singh virk

Hi

My name is rohan verma

I am an entrepreneur

I own a business of electrical appliances

Let me just be straightforward

I am in love with ur wife and she is also attracted to me

In fact we have met for coffe treats at the university cafeteria thrice and i feel she likes me as well

I can understand ur pain

But dont worry

I have been sent to release u from this loveless marriage that was thrown upon u

I can feel ur sorrow

Please treat me as ur friend

And i come with a solution

U treat her as a best friend

I will treat her as a wife

U love her sibling

I love her instead

Do us both a favour

U release her and marry her sister

And i promise to u that i will marry her only after ur marriage takes place

And if u would like to save cost

We can get married to our lady loves

At the same mandap


Seconds later fateh singh virk was lying on the ground

Unconscious!


I for one have surely become a fan of this Rohan Verma. Sorry, but inspite of being a Fatejo fan you ended up converting me into a Tejohan/Tejoro (Man Tejoro reminds me of Totoro😂😂😂 It's a cartoon)

Thanks to your story now I am promoted to Groupbie🥳

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Awesome loved it totally Rohan rocked it😍 OMG I'm already shipping Tejo and Rohan 🥳 but when will you update next Author 🥺

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: TheFluffyCactus


I for one have surely become a fan of this Rohan Verma. Sorry, but inspite of being a Fatejo fan you ended up converting me into a Tejohan/Tejoro (Man Tejoro reminds me of Totoro😂😂😂 It's a cartoon)

Thanks to your story now I am promoted to Groupbie🥳



Hei buddy

Congrats on ur promotion

Yes tejohan or tejoro anytime better to teach fateh a lesson

I will write later why i wrote this fiction in the first place

Updated part coming soon

Another twist

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Posted: 4 years ago
#5

Who is Rohan Verma from television industry

Edited by AnishaPannu - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#6

Please anyone can give their views . Who can be new hero for tejo

Edited by AnishaPannu - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#7

I know most of the fatejo fans are annoyed with the current track ... but don't worry fatejo is gonna be the endgame ... and I am sure fateh is up to something maybe he is trying to expose Jasmin with gippys help cause their convo was on mute ......

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Oh how cute. Been reading your stories Ani but there are so many I forget commenting and jump into reading them first!

We all know Fatejo is the endgame but god, Rohan is like the Prince charming I want Tejo to end up with. Thanks again for all the stories you write despite being busy!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#9

How about namish Paul. The guy from ek duje ke vaaste season 1 and also played the role of shiv in ek deewana tha aur let's Manav Aka vikram diwan from chhoti sardarni .

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wonderful story, do we really want Fatejo as end game here?


Tejo deserves better and she should be with Rohan


Fateh and Jasmine shouldn’t be Tejo headache


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