my story...aftr d promo..*updtd pg5*..!!

heyy ppl..ssup !!
well...aftr lyk watchin d promo loads of tyms..i thot of sumthin..but in my FF..ridz dsnt sit bak on his bike aftr dt minor accident...read on..
dey fall...n den ridz is hurt...n den armaan gets up...n hes lyk "kya hua"..she says "aahh...ouchh..." n holds her leg hard...n den armaans lyk "riddhima...kyaa huaa"..u knw arrogantlyy..n den ridz is lyk "shayd kaafi zor se lagi hai"..n den armaan goes "oh yeah....main shakal se tumhein bevakoof dikhta hoo"..n den ridz is surprised...she makes a confused face...n den says "hUh...armaan main.."...n den armaan goes "plzz ridhima...tumhein kya lagta hai...main nahi jaanta...i verry well knw ki ye tumhara plan hai...taaki main yaha tumhaare saath ruk jaaoo...aur waha rahul race jeet jaaye...sso plzz..ye natak bandh karo...n get up"...ridz is unable 2 xplain herself...n has tears in her eyes...but armaan keeps on taunting at her...n makes her get up..he says "jaldi karo...kyunki ab tumhara plan fail ho chuka hai...n dun wanna wste tym...but dts dffrnt agar tum yahi rehna chahti ho..i cn leave widout u too"...ridz dznt say nethng...n quietly...limps her way 2wrds d bike...n sits...widout utterig a word...usske baad...while dey r on der way...rdix is cryin...cz frstly its paining...n secondly armaan is nt bothered...wen shes weeping..armaan asks her "kya hua"...she jus wipes her tears n says "kuch nhi"..armaan says "gud...kyunki agar kuch hota bhi toh m nt bothered"....dey den reach d finish line...n armaan wins !! every1 congratulates him...n den while ridz is gttin down frm d bike...she almost slips n says "aaahhhh"...n angie cums along wid rahul 2 her rescue...n den angie says "ridzi..r u alryt"..n den armaan takes off his helmet..n turns...hes surprised dt ridz is actually hurt..angie den asks her "kya hau ridz...omg...u r bleeding...tumhari le par toh kaafi scrtches aaye hain...wt hppnd"...armaan is worried,confused,shocked at d sme tym..ridz luks at armaan..n says "kuch nhi...woh..raaste mein..bike se slip kargyi thi"..n den luks away...angie den luks at armaan...n asks him "armaan...ye sab....kaise hua...tumhein dhyan toh rakhna chahiye tha na"...every1 is lukin at armaan...n armaans unable 2 say nething...hes lyk "uh...woh...maine"..n den angie's lyk..."fggt it"..aur fir...sab ridz ko sambhalte hue...dey take her away...but while goin...she luks bak...n stares at armaan...armaans initially luks here n der..but den eventuallyy evn hes confused n he luks at ridhima...hu ws walking away frm him....ridz is den taken 2 sanjeevani..4 miNor dressin n all..while shes sleepin...armaan goes 2 meet her...shes asleep...n he sits near her...jus lyk in kasuali...he puts her hair bak...n remembrs wt all he had sed wen she had fallen down...
hes reellyy sad bout it..n den suddenly...ridz wakes up...for 2 seconds armaan keeps on stairing at her..but den..he takes his hand off her face..ridzz..also luks in odr direction..arman den gets up...n prepares himself...i mean hes lyk "uhh...wohh..tumm..theek toh ho" ridz is flattered wen he asks bout her health...she has a pleasant luk on her face n says "uhh..haan...m f9..btw...main tumhein...uhmm..congratulate karna bhoolgyi...congrats..tum race jeet gaye"..n den armaan jus keeps on stairing at her..den...ridhima says.."aise kya dekh rhe ho armaan"..den armaan woks 2wrds her..n says..."tum chahti kya ho ridhima" ...shes lyk "uh..matlab..."...armaan replies aggressivley "matlab tum achi tarah jaanti ho...wt...wt do u want...kyu kar rhi ho tum ye sab"..ridhima says "tum kya keh reh ho armaan muhe kuch samajh nhi aa rha"..armaan says "yeah rryt...ohhk lisn..maine tumhare kehne par...apne aap ko samjhaya..main apni personal aur professionl lyf alag rakhne ki bohot koshish kar rha hoo..lekin..tum baar baar mujhe ye kyu yaad dilati ho...ki.."...ridhima asks "ki ? "...armaan immediately reacts n says "ki humare beech kabhi kuch tha...".."ridhima tum..tumne hee toh kaha tha...ki humare beech kuch nhi hai...toh fir..kyu tum har baar mujhe...mujhe ye ehsaas karati ho...ki jo kuch bhi hua...uske liye main responsible hoo"...ridhima says "armaan...tum mujhe galat samajh rhe ho"...armaan says "main tumhein galat samajh rha hoo...ridhima tumne..."...pause..."ohhk...main aaj sirf ek baat jaanna chahta hoo"..ridhima asks "kya"...n armaan says "ek baar...sirf ek baar meri aankho mei dekh kar kaho...kya tumne kabhi bhi mujhse pyrr kiya tha"..ridhima has tears in her eyes...armaan goes close 2 her...while shes half sitting n half lying down...she den moves peeche peeche..but armaan keeps on askin her "tumne kabhi bhi..kabhi bhi mujhe chaaha tha"...she says "armaann mmai". n closes her eyes...as tears fall ..armaan keeps his finger on her lips n says "plzz ridhima....ye sune bina main yaha se nhi jaunga"..she den holds his hand...n opens her eyes...n says...while crying "kiya tha armaan..aur aaj bhi karti hoo" pause....."lekin shaydd...hum ek doosre ke liye nahi bane..aur shayd isiliye...hum kabhi saath mei khush nhi reh paaye"..armaan initially keeps on lukin at her...n den says softly "kya tum mere saath khush nhi thi"..."bolo ridhima...kya tum mere saath khush nhi thi"...she replies "aisi baat nhi hai armaan"...arman says "toh fir kya baat hai ridhima...tum kyu humare relation ek aur moka nhi dena chahti"...!!
ohhk noww...i want u 2 continue...cz i cudnt of ridhima's reaction..lol 😉
btw....hw ws it !!

as i said i m totalllyy in love wid it!!!!
really nice yrr
heres wt i think of ur creativity "oye hoyee"!!! LOL
u cudnt gt a bettr response 😉 😛 😛

woooooooooooooow
if only sumin lke dis actual happens
which i highly doubt lol
luvin u story
sounds great
wud luv u 2 continue 👏

that was awsome plezzzz some1 continue

Awesome story Payal!

R - mauka? Armaan, aise muke ka kya faayeda jo hum dono ko sirf taqleef de.

A - tumhe meri taqleef hamaare rishte ke hone ki wajah se dikhti hai par tum kya meri bebesi nahin dekhti jab humaare rishta toot gaya? Bolo Riddhima...

R - Armaan main aur kya bolu? Maine kaha ki main tumse pyaar karti hoon par....

A - Par yeh rishta theek nahin, hai na? Fine Riddhima aaj se humaare beech yeh rishta nahin kyunki main apne jazbaad ki maut seh loonga par tumhe dukhi nahin dekh sakta. Aur agar is dukh ki wajah main hoon, to theek hai riddhima ab main iss dukh ki wajah nahin rahunga.
Ab tum khush reh sakti ho. Bye.

Armaan walks out wiping his eyes, an action not gone unnoticed by Ridz. Her eyes well up with tears as she for once realizes the magnitude of the love Armaan holds for her and she completly breaks down.

hayyyeee !! aisa mat bolo angelteen.. i want a happy ending!!

hey payal nice ff.......
i wished sumthing like datr happens........bt i know it wont
anywayz u r a good writer 😛

i love the beginning part...but i don't like the ending 😭 😭 cuz it doesn't make armaan happy..and i think that the more confusions and all that get in between them the more the relationship is gonna go bad and WE DON'T WANT THAT....it's so funny how sometimes i think what IF the creatives hired someone to go through this forum and stuff and see if they really like some of our stories or predictions or anything...that would be so cool...but i know there's probably nothing like that...stupid me 😆 😆 😆 ..but i hope they have a happy ending..cuz after that the next step is to tell everyone...aur jitna waqt is sab mein laga hai matlab one whole year almost...it's prolly gonna take like four or five months to tell everyone.. 😆 😆 😆 but i mean obviously they can't go fast with everything cuz i want this serial to go on for like 4 or five years and be AWESOME!! 😃 😃

guys its not the ending. You are supposed to make it o on...

Next Day

Ridz is back at Sanjeevani and she's alloting the duties -

R - Dr. Anjali aur Dr. Atul OPD mein
Dr. Rahul, aap Dr. Keerti ko surgey mein assist karenge and then aap special ward mein report karenge.
Dr. Muskaan pathlab aur Dr. Armaan aap General Ward.

All of them leave but suddenly Keerti calls them back.

K - Interns, aap sab ek medical camp mein jaayenga jahan aur hospitals se bhi Docs aayenge. Aap log kal yahan se niklenge aur yeh medical camp lonavla mein ho raha hai. Main aur Dr. Shubhankar aapko accompany karenge. Any questions?

An - Maam phir kal humaari...

K - Kal aapka half day hai aur aap yehi se niklenge.

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Next Day

(After Half Day, they are leaving for lonavla)

Ra - Oye Muskaan chal hat. Main wahan baithoonga!

Mu - Kyon nahin. Chal be Kaankhajure. Yahan se 9-2-11 hoja nahin toh...

K - Yeh kya ho raha hai. You are Docs for god's sake. Thode toh maturely behave kijiye.

Armaan is sitting alone in a two seater. Ridz comes late and theres no seat except the one next to Armaan. (its a mini bus and they have supplies also)

Shubh - Dr. Riddhima aap Dr. Armaan ke saath baith jaayiye.

Ridz sits next to Armaan and feels a bit wierd but they soon get involved in the game of dumb-charades with the others.

They then play Antakshari where Armaan gets the letter p
and he sings :

pyaar hai ya saja, aai mere dil bata
tootata kyon nahi dard ka silsila
is pyaar mein hon kaise kaise imntihaan
ye pyaar likhe kaisi kaisi dastaan
ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar
ho ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar
pyaar hai ya saja, aai mere dil bata
tootata kyon nahi dard ka silsila

kaisa hai safar wafa ki manjil ka
na hai koi hal dilon ki mushkil ka
dhadkan dhadkan bikhri ranjishein
saansein saansein tooti bandishein
kahi to har lamha honton pe fariyaad hai
kisi ki duniya chaahat mein barbaad hai
ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar
ho ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar

koi na sune sisakati aanhon ko
koi na dhare tadapati baahon ko
aadhi aadhi puri khwaishein
tooti footi sab farmaaishein
kahin shak hain kahin nafrat ki deewaar hai
kahin jeet mein bhi shamil palpal haar hain
ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar
ho ya rabba de de koi jaan bhi agar
dilbar pe ho na, dilbar pe ho na koi asar
ho o o pyaar hai ya saja, aai mere dil bata
tootata kyon nahi dard ka silsila
ho o o o ho o o o
na poocho dard bandon se
hansi kaisi khushi kaisi
musibat sar pe rehati hain
kabhi kaisi kabhi kaisi
ho o o o... rabba, rabba ho o o ho
rabba ho o o, ho o ho rabba

Ridz lowers her eyes as they have welled up again. Everyone feels a bit wierd with Armaan's song choice.

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After a while Ridz feels sleepy and falls asleep on Armaan's shoulder. Armaan looks down at her and moves his hand to caress her hair but suddenly stops as he remembers their last meeting....