Raghvi OS : Mercy or Hope - Page 29

Originally posted by: Trista101

Exactly. It's normal for bestestestestest friends right?😔

Gif ws for u. Defame ws for Amnnaa.

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

Gif ws for u. Defame ws for Amnnaa.

Originally posted by: SRKian

OH MY GOSH, Kee🥺😭

This is...idk what to say tbh😭

While I don't have the heart to see something like this onscreen, I'm so so so glad that you've written it❤️ idk why but I've got a thing for such endings when it comes to FFs.💔

Even tho, my heart broke for raghav here, I loved it❤️

Keep up the good work, bud🤗

Ani... 🤗

Why people would like this kind of ending is beyond me, I hate such things. 😕

Thank you. Means alot when the emotions are conveyed. ❤️

Originally posted by: Prriyam

Not wanting to give more pain, by showing pain. 👌🏼

On a different note, It has left me wondering - how will Raghav handle it post that day. What would Sai think then, and later when she grows. As she was told that Pallavi could hear them all.

As to the disclaimer; yeah, get what you are saying. It is like starting with some clues; but, that is just a personal opinion. Yes, I would've felt sad/upset after finishing the read. But reading has to evoke adomeemotion. I have seen on other stories too, this warning message - so seem ok.

ps: was delayed here, due to Eurocup. Typing in peak sleep. 😴 morning

I may will write a second part to this but don't know when.

How you want this to continue? A future after a couple of years?

I think I will change the warning a bit.

Originally posted by: nooriex

first of all, i want to say that i loved this oneshot! i like the plot and your description of raghav's feelings felt very real. honestly, the last paragraph made me tear up a bit. just reading about a child losing their parent at a young age is so difficult and the fact that history kind of repeated itself (since pallavi is an orphan) is heartbreaking. but, despite the angst-filled plot, your narration was superb! kudos to you! 🤗

Thanks alot. 🤗

A child was not in the plot when I first thought about this but I wanted this to be emotional, felt at the core kind so, thought to add the kid as you said, a baby loosing her mother at a young age is heartbreaking.

Originally posted by: MissWiseUnicorn

I don’t know what to say... I’m in tears 😭

You should add a note for readers to read at their own discretion because I was not prepared to cry like this before reading this!

Jokes apart, it was very well written! You have portrayed Raghav’s dilemma beautifully! 👏

Hugs for the tears. 🤗🤗

There was a note but I was told that it acted as a spoiler so removed it. Added a small one now. 😳

Thank you..

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

persnl reasns.

I failed to understand what personal reasons could be there to not to believe me when I said I sing well.

Note : I was joking when I said I sing well.. But I think I dont sing badly.

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

Yes... now sleep... I need to complete elite before sleeping today...

Elite was more important than me. 🥺

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

Elite was more important than me. 🥺

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Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

I failed to understand what personal reasons could be there to not to believe me when I said I sing well.

Note : I was joking when I said I sing well.. But I think I dont sing badly.

Personal reason of not believing anything being said on forum altogether.