Raghvi OS : Mercy or Hope

LoveHopeMagic

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Posted: 4 years ago

#151

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

A way to make me speechless even if i plan anything.

That's so true..

I'm amazing. 🥳

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Trista101

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Posted: 4 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

Forrest Gump or Paan singh tomar???

Paan Singh Tomar. I'd rather prefer a single paan than an entire forest.😆

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Prriyam

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Posted: 4 years ago

#153

Keechu, thats lovely writing.

I should start with a mention that, I wouldnt have expected this from you (see that you mention it yourself at the end). I am wondering what made you choose this topic. Euthanasia reminds of ‘Me, Before you’. But you had it completely different here, with ‘who’ is choosing it.

Frankly, on first read I was left confused, Raghav stormed off the room when doctor suggested it; and next morning he is talking to Pallavi, having made the decision. I wanted to know more; on why he chose to do - wanted to know the decision making point. A second read, I had the answer in the first paragraph. A goodbye!

I am on the fence with Euthanasia that the story covers. I also understand that for those around, its painful to let go. While for the one who is enduring it, its painful to live. But you chose otherwise. By referring that Pallavi, if she was in pain, wasnt showing it on her face. To me, it looked like she was living for others!

Liked your choice of words! Liked the flow. Little Sai.

‘but his own pink flower was calling for him.’ - his pain in not chasing her down; his hope!

I liked how you referred to those around him on her final day as just ‘voices’.

And I loved how in the midst of all this, you ended with hope. ❤️

PS- you started with a warning. But it acts like a spoiler. I was anticipating what is going to come. I personally feel, without it, the mood to read and receive would've been different. That would've been raw emotion.