"You Are My Hell" part 4 (Final) page 15 - Page 13

Originally posted by: cheekukabeej

Ruby was a joke😆

Option 3: Forum Nikala😆

Bye 👋😆

Na na, we need you in forum

Try my zeher, chipkali special 🤣

Originally posted by: Shristhi2002

Na na, we need you in forum

Try my zeher, chipkali special 🤣

Yuck🤣

I'm okay with electric shock then🤣

Although I wasn't happy with the ending, but still loved it, since it was different from your other stories. Would have been happy if Virat had reached before Sai's death.

Originally posted by: fatssrilanka

Although I wasn't happy with the ending, but still loved it, since it was different from your other stories. Would have been happy if Virat had reached before Sai's death.

But

Did it really come out like she was dead😳

Omg. I guess everyone would've thought she died. Deepika thought the same and you too😆

She didn't die. He was just torturing her.

But I guess, her death makes up for a better ending 🤔

It's true har Galti ki maafi Nahi Hoti ...this is something I advocate personally

It's a diff take and quite a interesting one

Sometimes we get a chance to learn from our mistakes sometimes from others mistakes

Life has to go on

I'll be honest😆

I didn't like the story itself matlab Sai EMA I can't imagine, never, but ignoring that I'm a big thriller fan and you're writing omg is fab yaar!!!!! Where do u get so much creativity from! Despite not liking the idea, I loved reading it, idk how to explain (I think if it weren't our original Sai nd Virat I'd have loved this with my whole heart but because of my emotional attachment with them there was some reluctance to enjoy it to the fullest depsite it being sooooo wonderful written) but especially the last chapter!!!!! I really loved the ending, smth different 😆

Originally posted by: cheekukabeej

Sorry😒

But kya karun? Main ek hi type ki stories se bore ho jati hu😳

Mujhe kuch different chahiye hota hai.

Isliye kuch different kar diya.

Originally posted by: cheekukabeej

Chipkali

Yuck🤣

I'm okay with electric shock then🤣

Read all the parts in a go

I am staggered

Absolutely speechless

😧😧😧😧😧

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

It's true har Galti ki maafi Nahi Hoti ...this is something I advocate personally

It's a diff take and quite a interesting one

Sometimes we get a chance to learn from our mistakes sometimes from others mistakes

Life has to go on

And it's a different take because I didn't think of them as Sai and Virat and different characters😆

Bold: sometimes, all learning comes to naught and nothing is in our hands, except our reactions.