CONFESSIONS & CONVERSATIONS OVER COFFEE.-IV pg 3

Hi

I am a novice in writing OS /FF/SS and not great at creative stuff.Iam making an attempt.Honest reviews are welcome.It shall be three or four shot.

Intro:After reception party ShaKhi were finally in their room after kicking out Shagun who pretended to be drunk.I always hoped that Shaurya and Anokhi had a long conversation and their opinions about each other.Here it goes hope you enioy.

Shaurya decided to make coffee for both of them after changing into comfortable clothes.After entering their room Anokhi sat on his chair observing some painting on the wall.Shaurya for a moment felt he was dreaming just like he imagined Anokhi in his room during holi.

SHAURYA:This painting is made by a boy who sells paintings for his livelihood near our college.He came near Anokhi offering the hot cup of coffee and his warm embrace.

ANOKHI: Thanking for the coffee she leaned on to his shoulders.It's Beautiful PS.This painting depicts how we are supposed to win over our insecurities to usher forward in life.

SHAURYA:You remember the day we bumped into each other for first time?My shirt was stained with your lipstick.You mumbled sorry and ran away.You have not stained my shirt but marked your presence in my life.

I just broke my engagement with Shagun and was terribly in a bad mood that she chose her career over me.Anokhi the moment you bumped into me i forgot that angst for few seconds got lost in your eyes.Your eyes are honest and that s why there beautiful.

ANOKHI: I remember that day very well. I read about your achievements in articles on the Internet previous day and was inspired by you.When i bumped into you i was shocked and surprised as well.Happy to see my idol.

I was upset too on that day as someone was coming to see me for marriage and i have undergone a torturous bridal photoshoot.

SHAURYA:Later I saw you dancing happily on the stage and i was watching only you dressed in bright clothes wearing a maang tika and enjoying your dance.It was then I observed your smile and frankly i found it refreshing to see a genuine smile unlike plastic smiles i see everyday.Fantastic was the word for your dance performance.

ANOKHI:I missed few steps when i saw you in audience.Flustered to have everyone's attention on me.I was anxious about the debate competition results and me timely reaching home.

SHAURYA:When I gave you the trophy I was genuinely impressed but the moment I saw you with mom years of pain burried deep in my heart started to resurface.I was the most insecure person because i held a grudge on my mother for her absence in my life when I needed her the most.Dad was always aloof with so much of sadness that he was drunk most of the times.

Anokhi:(caressing his hand)My father too never encouraged me and my mother and Babli di acted as a bridge between me and papaji.They were afraid to open their mouth in front of him and i always spoke my mind.

SHAURYA:When i saw you in the college library after that i was pleasantly surprised that i got to see you again.For me your assosiation with my mom and dad was an unbearable thing.I wanted you out of the college but secretly wanted to see you shine.For a little monent i was lost in your eyes again.

ANOKHI:I was clueless regarding your hatred towards me.I was secretly hoping too that you would talk to me nicely.

SHAURYA:When you aced the interview after answering the question password ko Hindi mein kya kehte hai ,I was amazed by your confidence and academic exellence.Dad and me had a unspoken conversation about your intelligence .You sang a song and i was mesneised by your voice.My insecurities were not letting me to appreciate you.I gave you the deadline for fee and form submission.

ANOKHI:I was on the moon to crack the interview successfully.I managed to find my shelter at Babli di s place.Then cane the fees hurdle.

SHAURYA:When you said main haar maanti hoon I felt i have dampened your spirits.I was internally fighting a battle with myselves that how can i deny education to someone so deserving.But finally you got admission into college and made a step to enter my heart without my knowledge.

ANOKHI:PS those days were tough for me too as i ran from my parents and came into this city to persue my dreams.I was on the verge of breaking down when you refused to accept my admission.

Fortunately Aastha mam I mean Aastha maa reached on time and i crossed that hurdle too.

SOMEWHERE WE ENTERED INTO EACH OTHER'S LIFE AND HAD LONG WAY TO GO....

NB:Ignore typos. Tried writing i hope i shall be excused for average writing skills.

really nice convo

loved them

Originally posted by: deepsea_27

Hi

I am a novice in writing OS /FF/SS and not great at creative stuff.Iam making an attempt.Honest reviews are welcome.It shall be three or four shot.

Intro:After reception party ShaKhi were finally in their room after kicking out Shagun who pretended to be drunk.I always hoped that Shaurya and Anokhi had a long conversation and their opinions about each other.Here it goes hope you enioy.

Shaurya decided to make coffee for both of them after changing into comfortable clothes.After entering their room Anokhi sat on his chair observing some painting on the wall.Shaurya for a moment felt he was dreaming just like he imagined Anokhi in his room during holi.

SHAURYA:This painting is made by a boy who sells paintings for his livelihood near our college.He came near Anokhi offering the hot cup of coffee and his warm embrace.

ANOKHI: Thanking for the coffee she leaned on to his shoulders.It's Beautiful PS.This painting depicts how we are supposed to win over our insecurities to usher forward in life.

SHAURYA:You remember the day we bumped into each other for first time?My shirt was stained with your lipstick.You mumbled sorry and ran away.You have not stained my shirt but marked your presence in my life.

I just broke my engagement with Shagun and was terribly in a bad mood that she chose her career over me.Anokhi the moment you bumped into me i forgot that angst for few seconds got lost in your eyes.Your eyes are honest and that s why there beautiful.

ANOKHI: I remember that day very well. I read about your achievements in articles on the Internet previous day and was inspired by you.When i bumped into you i was shocked and surprised as well.Happy to see my idol.

I was upset too on that day as someone was coming to see me for marriage and i have undergone a torturous bridal photoshoot.

SHAURYA:Later I saw you dancing happily on the stage and i was watching only you dressed in bright clothes wearing a maang tika and enjoying your dance.It was then I observed your smile and frankly i found it refreshing to see a genuine smile unlike plastic smiles i see everyday.Fantastic was the word for your dance performance.

ANOKHI:I missed few steps when i saw you in audience.Flustered to have everyone's attention on me.I was anxious about the debate competition results and me timely reaching home.

SHAURYA:When I gave you the trophy I was genuinely impressed but the moment I saw you with mom years of pain burried deep in my heart started to resurface.I was the most insecure person because i held a grudge on my mother for her absence in my life when I needed her the most.Dad was always aloof with so much of sadness that he was drunk most of the times.

Anokhi:(caressing his hand)My father too never encouraged me and my mother and Babli di acted as a bridge between me and papaji.They were afraid to open their mouth in front of him and i always spoke my mind.

SHAURYA:When i saw you in the college library after that i was pleasantly surprised that i got to see you again.For me your assosiation with my mom and dad was an unbearable thing.I wanted you out of the college but secretly wanted to see you shine.For a little monent i was lost in your eyes again.

ANOKHI:I was clueless regarding your hatred towards me.I was secretly hoping too that you would talk to me nicely.

SHAURYA:When you aced the interview after answering the question password ko Hindi mein kya kehte hai ,I was amazed by your confidence and academic exellence.Dad and me had a unspoken conversation about your intelligence .You sang a song and i was mesneised by your voice.My insecurities were not letting me to appreciate you.I gave you the deadline for fee and form submission.

ANOKHI:I was on the moon to crack the interview successfully.I managed to find my shelter at Babli di s place.Then cane the fees hurdle.

SHAURYA:When you said main haar maanti hoon I felt i have dampened your spirits.I was internally fighting a battle with myselves that how can i deny education to someone so deserving.But finally you got admission into college and made a step to enter my heart without my knowledge.

ANOKHI:PS those days were tough for me too as i ran from my parents and came into this city to persue my dreams.I was on the verge of breaking down when you refused to accept my admission.

Fortunately Aastha mam I mean Aastha maa reached on time and i crossed that hurdle too.

SOMEWHERE WE ENTERED INTO EACH OTHER'S LIFE AND HAD LONG WAY TO GO....

NB:Ignore typos. Tried writing i hope i shall be excused for average writing skills.

Nicely Written. Love to read it further....🙂

This was very heart touching.

You brought back every key moments that have gone unsaid or not discussed between them. Yet.

It was crisp n to the point.

I loved it. Do write more, luv. Would be a delight reading your work.

I can totally see these two talking to eo about their own story & how they felt about each others presence from the days of yore 😊

This was a sweet read, do continue 👍🏼

Amazing, something we would love to see in the show will wait eagerly to read more stuff from

That was nice...a trip down memory lane over a cup of coffee...nice one

Nice one

Pls update the next part soon

PART-II

Conversation continues.....

SHAURYA:After successfully crossing all hurdles in your way Ms.Bhalla joined SIAC but for me you were Aastha Kashyap's student.The woman whom i craved for since childhood is the woman you idolize.Somewhere that disturbed me more than i could think of.

SHAURYA:Your first day in college and I made a resolution not to get bothered by you.But you came in front of my car.You had panic written all over your face but you did not utter a single word.Later i was intentionally around you to know what was reason for a frown on that flawless face.Your shoes were beyond repair and i had to say caustic words to get back the fighting spirit in you.You thought i did not have belief in you and as expected your fighting spirit was back.

ANOKHI:I was so excited for first day of my college.As soon as i entered college i was ragged by my fellow classmates.They ran away as soon as they saw you.Your disbelief in me bothered me a lot.Your words had potential to bring out the best in me.Your concern behind your rude words is difficult to miss.By the way thanks for arranging my footwear.

SHAURYA:WHAT!!!surprised Shaurya asked.You knew it??

ANOKHI:Shaan s..Papa told me later that you got this trait from Aastha maa.Both of you cannot see their students in trouble... replied fondly.You told Papa about the same and later checked with Ravi.

SHAURYA:And inspite of that you were late to class!Where were you Mam!!!

ANOKHI: One of notorious gang members of VIP stu..

I mean someone tried to prank on me with location of classroom ...professor dearest.

SHAURYA:I wanted all your attention on me to know that you were fine and you were busy making friends.I was about to ask you some tough questions but your lack of attention irritated me.Shaurya complained like a Child.

ANOKHI:My attention was on you only.I was trying to catch up your fast English but no such luck with that.

I was called Kapurthala express by my classmates and you were like Shatabdi express.All the girls of our class were busy drooling over you while you scolded one of boys who slept in class. I was clueless of Micro economics so i asked Reema notes of previous classes and you had to kick me out of class. I was a sincere student who was never kicked out of class .You asking me to get out added to my list of troubles.

SHAURYA:I can see you making notes in my peripheral vision.As i came out of class i saw you lost and there were tears which you were trying to hide from me.You asked me if i was deliberately hostile towards you.I could see you were on the verge of breaking down and i had to send others away so that you show that vulnerability in front of me.Some tough nut you are.

ANOKHI:My struggle for education from teenage was too much to bear and i had to become that tough nut.

SHAURYA:When i was about to go home I heard phone ringing and found your belongings in dustbin.I was initially thought what crazy girl you were but i felt something fishy.I got to know from the gaurd that your sister was searching for you.I came back and broke the lock.The bold courageous tigress i knew from past two days was in front of me like fragile doll.The way you were sobbing your heart out being in my arms clutching and clinging yo me for your life broke my gaurds i ve built in past years.I was afraid even to breathe as my breathing would increase your fear.

ANOKHI:Neither my father nor my brother gave that comfort to me.I was home when you held me in your embrace.Mumma always used to say Girls need to protect themselves and I felt protected for the first time when i was embraced by you.You gave me water and took my control in your hands.My shocked state did not fail my understanding that you are very caring person and i went with Babli di.I turned around and saw your reassuring eyes that promised justice to me.That night i could not sleep and my mother s soothing song has lulled me to sleep.Whenever iam worried my mother sings "Mere ghar aayi ek nanhi pari".She till date feels me and Babli di are her paris.

SHAURYA:I second that.Babli is an angel but you are a Feisty Fairy said professor pinching Anokhi's nose gently.

ANOKHI:You were really true to your promise to punish students who ragged me.A genious plan to make Anmol confess.

SHAURYA:Although you came out clean I was still annoyed for involvement of media.I wanted to believe you that you were not the one to call press to college and i again threw bitter words at you.

ANOKHI:Even i was desperate to thank you and prove myselves innocent regarding calling media.

SHAURYA:I blamed my dad thinking that he called media to college but it was Kitty and Bebo.

ANOKHI:Papa would never do anything to tarnish the repuration of SIAC.I guessed it could be either Bebo or Kitty or Anmol.

We both were sailing in same boat.Both joined their foreheads and enjoyed being there for each other.

I know long conversation right??...Can't help it.

Thank you for your kind words of encouragement.

All the writers and all the members of the Fandom deserve appreciation for the never ending fighting spirit, we might loose a lovely show but what we can do to make that show live forever is to learn and preach the lessons that we have learnt from the show and the characters, in order to make the world a better place to live and aur debvir will always remain our beloveds, i remember we had a show called dahleez it aired only for 3 months, but it taught us something very important, but the sad part was fans couldn't keep it alive with ff, ss and os, jo anjaam hum dekhna chahte the woh ab aaplog khud likhye apne kalam ke zariye aur dikhaye ki hum kitne bade fans hai, All the best!!!