RaghVi FF : Nightmare Thread 2 - Page 74

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

Then drink less and i m not talking about H to O. if u know what I mean

Originally posted by: Haal-e-Dil

😏😏😏 never had that

good 4 ya

Damn it!

I don't know if flabbergasted can give justice to my reaction after reading this.

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

Damn it!

I don't know if flabbergasted can give justice to my reaction after reading this.

Thnx... i think it said alot

Warning : It's long because I have added a few sentences from the chapter. And lots of space.

I am more than just flabbergasted with what I just read. I hope what I perceived from this chapter is what you intended to do.

A lot of points in this chapter made me think and one of them is this,

the fact that she still owned right to wear her vermilion had put her in peace.

As a woman I have always wondered the depth of this sentence, and I haven't got anything satisfactory as an inference, may be because I am not married (Die as suhagan). It means that the wife wants to die before the husband but here, it meant something more than that, may be the way you arranged those words.

She needed to shine even if it’s the last burst to burn herself because even those few seconds of light will keep him away from his darkness and for her those finite moments of her existence seemed a perfectly fair trade.

I absolutely adore this line.

Her hallucination, her walking out of the OT, stopping the midway seeing him, hearing his prayers, deciding to leave him.

Her ‘life’ was offered for her life.

This whole story you summed up in this 7 words.

The best part of the fiction. It can be read either ways.

After he collapsed, he had a dream of her death.

And the ‘darkness’ finally engulfed the ‘light’.

It was him accepting her death in the dream, Raghav engulfed Pallavi.

When he woke up she was actually there, but he misunderstood that as an illusion, and then that lack of arms, words that attender told him, all together he thought she was dead and he walked away.

That lack of arms, she didn't hug him back because she saw what would happen to him if she really died, and as the doctor said she might die anytime so she wanted to leave him. Or that she had already decided to leave him as light has to cease to exist.

Am I getting it right? 🤔

“Let our love live but in her.”

“We weren’t able to get the bullet.”

“Save her and take me.”

“You have a ticking bomb in your heart.”

“I will go so far that even if I want, I won’t be able to harm her.”

“We don’t know which second will be your last.”

Another favorite part of mine. All made sense. I always thought it was him who pushed her away intentionally to protect her but here, though he pushed her away it was unintentional. And she decided to go to protect him from himself.

Both of them were hurting themselves to protect the other, living up-to the life and beat they consider themselves as.

And in the last she was confused because he walked away even after he saw her.

Damn it. 🥺

When the doctor said "we already lost one patient" I thought why would he say that to another patient who just had an operation but at the end it made sense. The attender misunderstood Raghav as someone related to that dead patient. In 9th chapter when that scene came I had wondered why he said trauma. Now I got it.

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I like the way you assemble the chapters with the clear cut idea of what to add and where and in which chapter.

This nightmare has a problem which is not really a problem. Sometimes I don't really mind a incomplete story but this, I wont be surprised if readers curse you left right and centre because of an incomplete note, anyone will be frustrated with that. It can only be comprehended as a whole.

I once told you, I wouldn't be surprised if all things reveled only in last chapter and I'm not.

Now I'm waiting for the reunion.

I will be saving this fiction for future reads.

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

Thnx... i think it said alot

This chapter said more than that.

No....it hit the right notes...believe me..love is one emotion when written well you can absolutely feel it while reading...and you made it feel...Pallavi's faith in her love is unconquerable...the prayers of both P and R are so real....I am just going to feel your this chapter...and I hope next chapter we get a happy closure...I am for all fairy tale ending...your other story 152 I have read ....so hoping Pallavi gets her faity tale ending happily ever after....

Originally posted by: Joyness

No....it hit the right notes...believe me..love is one emotion when written well you can absolutely feel it while reading...and you made it feel...Pallavi's faith in her love is unconquerable...the prayers of both P and R are so real....I am just going to feel your this chapter...and I hope next chapter we get a happy closure...I am for all fairy tale ending...your other story 152 I have read ....so hoping Pallavi gets her faity tale ending happily ever after....

Thnx... and I shouldn't be afraid of Liam neesam in any case right?

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

This chapter said more than that.

Yes I can see that. So we now have a reason why u were chosen their leader.

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

Yes I can see that. So we now have a reason why u were chosen their leader.

What do you mean by now? I always stood up to my that position.