RaghVi FF : Nightmare Thread 2 - Page 36

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

‘the present was left without feelings, to honour the past.’ that will be the sentence. Core of that sentence is guilt.

it may not be your favorite task to dissect a sentence. More so, of a fav sentence. But, I swear, last post on this.

Earlier i was in a different tangent with this sentence.

Now, am I reading it right, when I sense ‘without feelings’ as, to go blank? Void of everything? A nothingness?

Yes or no. I stop here.

I really dont know what I should write here. I'm at lose of words. But this deserves more than just words.

You write so damn well, lateuser. The way you instil emotions in a readers heart is laudable. I was there with Raghav, trying hard to stop his pain but, helpless.

He took my heart away.

There are alot of things I loved about the past and the present. When in past he was uncontrollable as it was his Pallavi, his wife and in present, he was forcing himself to be in control since Sarika is his employee. The moment he accepted the truth, everything went down.

Mind knows what it comprehends but heart knows what it knows.

Raghav's mind comprehended that Sarika is not Pallavi the moment he saw her in his office, and his heart knew she was Pallavi at the same moment. I'm enjoying this so much, these conflicts between heart and mind are one of the most realistic human feelings and I'm stunned with the way you played tennis with your words between his heart and mind.

The present was left without feelings to honor the past.

I am not sure what you tried to insinuate here but that tugged my heart. For a moment I was like, the two women are different. Sarika is present and Pallavi is past. And Sarika left the place for Pallavi.

Sarika left without feelings to honor Pallavi, I really liked this sentence.

Originally posted by: Prriyam

it may not be your favorite task to dissect a sentence. More so, of a fav sentence. But, I swear, last post on this.

Earlier i was in a different tangent with this sentence.

Now, am I reading it right, when I sense ‘without feelings’ as, to go blank? Void of everything? A nothingness?

Yes or no. I stop here.

His life was in blood. Leave the reason why. She was in blood. And he was feeling everything and more. But he can't allow himself to feel that because his heart knew who she was but his mind knew otherwise. It was mind over heart. And his mind can't allow any of those feelings for anyone but her. Thus

‘the present was left without feelings, to honour the past.’

He needs to be empty even when everything was falling in and around him cause doing otherwise would meant betraying his breath.

Its Mind's win over Heart. Which has been constant theme from start till now for Raghav's character.

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

I really dont know what I should write here. I'm at lose of words. But this deserves more than just words.

You write so damn well, lateuser. The way you instil emotions in a readers heart is laudable. I was there with Raghav, trying hard to stop his pain but, helpless.

He took my heart away.

There are alot of things I loved about the past and the present. When in past he was uncontrollable as it was his Pallavi, his wife and in present, he was forcing himself to be in control since Sarika is his employee. The moment he accepted the truth, everything went down.

Mind knows what it comprehends but heart knows what it knows.

Raghav's mind comprehended that Sarika is not Pallavi the moment he saw her in his office, and his heart knew she was Pallavi at the same moment. I'm enjoying this so much, these conflicts between heart and mind are one of the most realistic human feelings and I'm stunned with the way you played tennis with your words between his heart and mind.

The present was left without feelings to honor the past.

I am not sure what you tried to insinuate here but that tugged my heart. For a moment I was like, the two women are different. Sarika is present and Pallavi is past. And Sarika left the place for Pallavi.

Sarika left without feelings to honor Pallavi, I really liked this sentence.

U should seriously consider writing more. You have way with words.

And thnx a ton. I also liked those two lines.

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

His life was in blood. Leave the reason why. She was in blood. And he was feeling everything and more. But he can't allow himself to feel that because his heart knew who she was but his mind knew otherwise. It was mind over heart. And his mind can't allow any of those feelings for anyone but her. Thus

‘the present was left without feelings, to honour the past.’

He needs to be empty even when everything was falling in and around him cause doing otherwise would meant betraying his breath.

Its Mind's win over Heart. Which has been constant theme from start till now for Raghav's character.

I think I got what you insinuated with that sentence. That's just brilliant. 👏

That left meant remained not left, right?

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

I think I got what you insinuated with that sentence. That's just brilliant. 👏

That left meant remained not left, right?

u just ruined that sentence for me. It was left right center. U can use any of them.

NOTE : Joke.

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

u just ruined that sentence for me. It was left right center. U can use any of them.

NOTE : Joke.

So I was right.

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

So I was right.

U really think I can even dare to say that u r wrong. U r always right.

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

U really think I can even dare to say that u r wrong. U r always right.

Who are you? 😲

What did you to our Lateuser?

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

U should seriously consider writing more. You have way with words.

And thnx a ton. I also liked those two lines.

You should read your stories more.