MiNeil story-"One-Night-Stand"(Do Read Ch-14 on pg-72) - Page 56

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Krithzz

Khushi..this is still hanging 😆

yeah yeah i remember 🤣🤣 It's been really long and before u guys turn ur maya mode on...I should better update it🤣
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Posted: 4 years ago
Will see....if I get time ....will update it this weekend...
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Khushi1311

Will see....if I get time ....will update it this weekend...


You are updating this🥳


My sexy doc is gonna be back😎☺️


I am dying in anticipation☺️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Khushi1311

yeah yeah i remember 🤣🤣 It's been really long and before u guys turn ur maya mode on...I should better update it🤣

Yeah😈 complete it atleast in one shot

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Bechain_Bulbul


You are updating this🥳


My sexy doc is gonna be back😎☺️


I am dying in anticipation☺️❤️

already🤣

Let's see if i can manage to steal some time from my office🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Krithzz

Yeah😈 complete it atleast in one shot

sure...wase bhi ye story 80% complete hi h....it won't take more than 5 chapters....
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Posted: 4 years ago

CHAPTER-14


One month passed. Babita and Hanuman Singh had already left after Minni’s surgery. Minni moved in with Neil when he insisted to take care of her during post surgery stages.


Neil received a message and forwarded the same to someone.Minni was doing her hair still wrapped in just a white towel when Neil came from behind and hugged her tightly...


“Omg! Someone is still thinking about the last night.”“Noooooo!”, Minni retorted.


“Don’t lie. I know I was amazing last night ....And how can someone resist thinking about it"Minni’s cheeks turned red.


“No ...not at all", she replied.


“then may I know why my precious is blushing”he turned her around to face him.


“Nothing. I was just thinking about us.”


“Yeah. That’s what I said isn’t it?“


"No. Not that. I mean about our journey.”He gave a weird look.


“Whatever. By the way Why are you smiling continuously all of a sudden? ,she noticed.



“Yeah. That’s what I’d come to tell you about but your smile made me forget”, Neil pouted.


.“What?”, Minni asked confused.


“I said I forgot”,he teased.


“Stop being Over smart Dr.Oberoi ", Minni raised her index finger.


Neil kissed her finger and his grip tighter over her




.“Okay okay ....lioness easy...”, he laughed.


Minni glared.


“Umm...I finally told mom about us.”

For a second Minni couldn’t believe her ears.


Everytime Neil had suggested to take a step ahead her heart feared?

How would be Neil’s family?

Will they like her or not?

How will it go? Will she able to manage it after all barely she has started to know Neil? Isn't it too fast?

Several questions have kept her dreaded since they have confessed their feelings to each other after Minni’s accident.


“She was really happy and is dying to meet you", Neil continued.

“really?”


“Yes Precious. And why wouldn’t she ? I guess you are the first girl I've ever told her about.....

Something mom has been waiting to happen since ages",


Minni couldn’t content her happiness. It may seeem strange but hearing her to be his something 'first' gave her butterflies.For the first time she was going to meet someone from Neil’s life.


“I have one more surprise. ”, Neil made faces.


“What??”Mini’s eyes sparkled.Neil took out something from his pocket and waved it in front of her glowing eyes.


“What’s this?” Minni snatched it from him and her eyes began moving left to right over those piece of paper.


“Tickets?”, she gave a confused look


.“Yeah....I have already booked our tickets and we are going to meet mom or say on a pre-honeymoon", Neil giggled already dreaming about their vacation.


“Oh shut....there is nothing called prehoneymoon Dr. Oberoi", Minni brought him back.


“why? If there can pre wedding rituals...pre wedding photoshoot then why not pre-wedding honeymoon?”, Neil suggested.



“Ah...kitne besharam ho tm Dr. Oberoi"


“It’s your karma my Precious....Now bear with it", Neil tried to catch her lips.


“Tmhara kuch nahi ho sakta", she placed a light slap over his cheeks..


.“Hayeeee ...”, he responded in a dramatic manner...

..............................................................................


Babita and Hanuman were having tea while discussing about Neil and Minni.

Hanuman Singh suggested to meet Neil’s parents soon. Babita was extremely happy that finally her eccentric daughter has decided to settle down with someone. Finally her daughter has found the love of her love. While it was still hard for Hanuman Singh to engulf the fact that now her daughter would no longer be just theirs. Now she has chosen someone to have right over her...to share her pain and happiness ...to be with her in every odds. That her little daughter is going to step into a totally new beautiful phase of life. He was happy. They were still down the memory lane when a knock approached their door.


“Isha tum.....”, Babita opened the door when her heart sank seeing Isha’s rheumy red eyes, meesy hair and her suitcase.


“What happened Beta. Are you okay?”, Babita asked worried.Isha hugged her tightly and started weeping uncontrollably.


“Are you okay...mya hua...tu aise...ess waqt...suitcase lekar...sab thik to hai na?”, asked Babita.Isha narrated them the entire tale how Ritwik had been abusing her and today he left no choice she left his house and even filed a divorce agreement against him.


“I don’t want to be with that pathetic man anymore “, she said shivering .Babita and Hanuman Singh made her sit, gave some water and calmed her down.They tried to convince her to reconsider her decision but seemed like Isha is at no cost gonna back out now. She was stubborn for a divorce. Hanuman Singh and Babita's voice froze in their their throat. They couldn’t engulf the fact that a while ago they were planning the wedding of their daughter and now they are witnessing the burning of their other daughter's house. Life is so ironical sometimes.

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The desire to make love to Minni was irresistible. She was looking so smoking hot in that piece of towel. Neil wanted to undress her and laminate her naked body against him .

He was craving her, deeply and It was too late to go back to normal. Her lips were already swirling inside his mouth, dangerously.They were kissing so passionately. He lost himself into her lovely arms. He was dying to make love to this girl.


“Goddamn! “,he moaned.


"I tried my best to keep my hands to myself but you know what..." he choked the center of her neck until she was out of air. "


I failed..." he let go gently as he flew his right hand under her pink dress and whispered.


"You're mine forever... I'd like to use your thighs as earmuffs..." he flew his head between her legs as I pulled her.


“I wanted to devour your meat.”, he moaned


“Then what are you waiting for", she giggled and soon they got into action


...................... ..................... .....................


“I love you cupid", Minni kissed him.


“ I know...”, he said.“And?”, she arched her eyebrows.


“I love you too", he kissed her back.Minni raised her eyebrows again seeing his cold reactions.


“Nothing", he responded.



“you know we are stepping ahead in our relationship but I was just thinking maybe we have rushed to it...I mean I wanna tell you...I mean you should know....there are things "


“you mean you are yet not sure about us?”, she questioned before he could finish.


“No...no precious...I’m very sure about us...But you know sometimes love is not enough to sustain a relationship. “he paused.


“U doubt that we will not work out?”, asked confused Minni.


“No no precious....I didn’t meant it. But you know relationship only works when you understand each other, love each other and most importantly trust each other. They are other pillars of a relationship “, he concluded.


“And I love you, understand you and trust you too", Minni pouted her face and said in dramatic kiddish tone.


“Ah....you are not getting me Precious. You know we are not like some normal couple who first meet , develops a bonding, falls in love and then rush to bed. But we are totally contrary who directly landed on bed first“


“You mean we should get into the basics first",she asked.


“May be", he responded unsure of what destiny is holding next for them.



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Edited by A_Cosmic_Dust - 3 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
Omg!!! IF is not taking up the txt edits nor is the title chnging in this thread...?
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Khushi1311

Omg!!! IF is not taking up the txt edits nor is the title chnging in this thread...?

Not able to hit like button here smiley24 may be because of gap .

Its ok if title is not changing. We know it .

Atleast one can comment .that's good 👍🏼

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: su_94

Not able to hit like button here smiley24 may be because of gap .

Its ok if title is not changing. We know it .

Atleast one can comment .that's good 👍🏼

ye kya musibat h yr😭

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