SS - Pre - Mission Rituals _ pt 3(C) pg 23_updt 07 July - Page 2

Originally posted by: cheekukabeej

Beautiful as always Appu.

Once again you brought those moments alive in front of my eyes through your words. I still don't know how you do that. Maybe you have some hidden magical powers😆

So realistic and so heartwarming. Pata hai. When I read your stories na, it feels like Slices of Life. Zindagi ke chhote chhote tukde prism ki tarah. Aur wo prism charon taraf rang birangi roshni bikherta hua lagta hai. Unnatural, artificial light nahi, jaise dhoop ke andar se uski khoobsurati nikaal kar dikha di ho. Indradhanush ki tarah. Theek waise hi. You do have some magical powers❤️

Your words kill me as always!

"Zindagi ke chhote chhote tukde prism ki tarah.

Aur wo prism charon taraf rang birangi roshni bikherta hua lagta hai.

Unnatural, artificial light nahi, jaise dhoop ke andar se uski khoobsurati nikaal kar dikha di ho.

Indradhanush ki tarah."

This is pure poetry, Cheeku, my darling... I'm truly moved to tears reading this!

Thank you so much for the love you shower on what I write ❤️

Originally posted by: KashishSingh27

Beautiful chapter 🥰🥰

“Aise kaise? Aapki biwi ke hote hue aap kyu karenge?”

Just loved how Sai claimed her right as his wife here 😘😘

You very beautifully described the concern Sairat have for each other 🤗🤗

Thanks so much! I loved writing it, as I missed the continuity they could have showed by adding just 2 scenes extra... toh khud likh liya 😳

Thanks you for your sweet words!

Will update soon... but it will be just one or two parts at the maximum... 😳

Thank Soujanya dear 🤗

thanks dear! 🤗

I am outlining the OSs you requested, but pehle ek do aur hai jo plan kiya tha maine... so they will come out first, like this one here

Wow, amazing. Loved it ❤

Going through the hug scene in your words was beautiful. Thank god, we got a closure of that scene. The Ashwini Sai Virat scene was too good. So, no more pillow walls 😲and look at what is Sai doing 🤣.

Will wait for the next part. Thanks for tagging me 😍.

Originally posted by: AparnaRenu

Your words kill me as always!

"Zindagi ke chhote chhote tukde prism ki tarah.

Aur wo prism charon taraf rang birangi roshni bikherta hua lagta hai.

Unnatural, artificial light nahi, jaise dhoop ke andar se uski khoobsurati nikaal kar dikha di ho.

Indradhanush ki tarah."

This is pure poetry, Cheeku, my darling... I'm truly moved to tears reading this!

Thank you so much for the love you shower on what I write ❤️

this was so heartbreakingly beautiful ❤️ please do tag me in your stories :)

So so beautiful 😍😍

Loved it, waiting for next🤗🤗

Update soon ❤️❤️

It's so beautiful and lovely 😍😍😍😍. And I really really loved this continuation of the bed room scene coz it adds a sense of completion to the whole story. My fav part was the very last bit. I couldn't stop myself from smiling like an idiot when she poked him 🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭 And tracing his face while sleeping.......LOVE😍😍😍❤❤❤❤

Loved it to the bits Aparna. Simply loved it 🤩