Need better dialogues! - Page 5

Originally posted by: ltelidevara

At this point of time when this fight happened Virat’s mind is clouded by the thought of Sai’s Yaara Ajinkya and then the pendent thing. May be that is why he didn’t sincerely try to understand Sai’s expression regarding his elders. He was more into other issues. Sai should have apologised yes but she chose to blabber everything else and come What May she can’t get rid of Pakhi from her thoughts or words.She still is far away from realising Virat’s feelings.

Regarding her explanation about pendant like I said in my post sometimes words will flow without much thought or choice. This is one such instance for both as they failed to chose the right words.

Ya but i dont think we can always justify their poor dialogues by saying it was just because they were fighting so they werent thinking. This was not an emotional, charged up fight where hurtful things are often said in the height of emotions. This was just a regular squabble, light hearted even....so in such an argument its important for the dialogue writers to use dialogues effectively to communicate the characters emotions well. It was not a bad scene by any means but it had potential to be excellent if only they had been a little mindful of dialogues. We dont get too many Sairat scenes with no interruptions so they need to maximize it like they did with selfie/hug scene, breakfast scene, pre bhoot story Sairat conversation scene..

Originally posted by: Nja91

Ya but i dont think we can always justify their poor dialogues by saying it was just because they were fighting so they werent thinking. This was not an emotional, charged up fight where hurtful things are often said in the height of emotions. This was just a regular squabble, light hearted even....so in such an argument its important for the dialogue writers to use dialogues effectively to communicate the characters emotions well. It was not a bad scene by any means but it had potential to be excellent if only they had been a little mindful of dialogues. We dont get too many Sairat scenes with no interruptions so they need to maximize it like they did with selfie/hug scene, breakfast scene, pre bhoot story Sairat conversation scene..

Bold..

I agree.

I agree it always seems like one step forward and five steps back in Sairat.

They both did not understand each other’s pain today…Virat with Sai’s pain of being an orphan and Virat’s pain of Sai not understanding how much she means to him.

No comment on the 🤮🤮 make them your family 🤮

Back to the I’m not going stay here forever

Originally posted by: SonuRani

You stated exact points virat is elder than sai but he is expecting she should understand him first and he is not able to understand her. Today as compared to sai virat is more fault.

Yeah, true in a way. Though I don’t agree with the age points many a times, age is a factor for Virat to have more experience, gained some qualities like maturity, patience. I think Virat has learnt living in the house but some people get to learn these qualities only when they age or when they get more exposure. Virat was at fault but I don’t think he was more at fault. My issues with him was the he brushed it off when Sai shared her issues and the last thing that he spoke about jab tak tum is ghar pe ho. He didn’t intend to act this stupid or angry, this guy gets easily carried away by emotions and today it was jealousy which made him do these. Even if Sai got upset that Virat called her insensitive, when she gave him water, she could have also tried to cool down and apologise to him. It was nice to see her trying to explain but the situations turned in such a way that both had probably brought ego in between them. It sometimes can happen but they should introspect and address it again once they cool down. Only that would strengthen relationships. Otherwise it would only remain as a misunderstanding and an unaddressed issue which can later lead to more misunderstandings.

Originally posted by: Shaome

Both are tube lights .There was no harm saying sorry. 🤢

Saving grace was Neil's reaction as he was trying to make it comical.

How the hell it's got to do with Pakhi.

When Sai told what bothers her without paying heed he literally brushed it off saying its Sasural 🤢.

I guess he was sunk into thought about ajinkya 😆

So he won't put it back on that pendent on Sai 😭

Now from tomorrow the most silliest act by Sai. 🤢

@bold I agree.

When Sai realised that Pakhi told the exact same words, she felt bad that they have so much in common. I believe, she started to feel insecured as if they both are made for each other kind and they are meant to be together. Her insecurity, hurt and disappointment that she couldn’t understand him but Pakhi could is like they both have so much understanding, and she has come in between them. It is like if she had never entered his life, may be they both would have got together now that Samrat is also missing. She knows what Pakhi wants anyway, but is always anxious if Virat also would have wanted the same as Pakhi if he had not married her. Virat used to call Pakhi a matured lady, he used to act partial when it comes to Pakhi and had also asked Pakhi to guide Sai or get Pakhi to dress her up too. Sai has always been able to sense that he has very high regards of Pakhi and it is anyway true too. She has only now started to notice the changes in him towards Pakhi and she attributes it to his loyalty, to his morals. But she is not confident that he would think high of her as he thinks of Pakhi. Such instances brings out her doubts and hence she said that Pakhi will cherish his gift so he should get one for her. It is like Virat saying, yeah, why would you listen to me, I am not your Abha. He used to always think that she doesn’t like him or she can never like him, she also feels that way especially after noticing about his views about Pakhi. She feels that Virat is always highly impressed with Pakhi. Listening to the exact same words as that of Pakhi from Virat’s mouth had triggered her.

Tagging you since I thought you were wondering why Sai even brought Pakhi into picture.

they need to build up the important elements of marriage🤦‍♀️they are still lack of it

Originally posted by: Khushidum

I agree it always seems like one step forward and five steps back in Sairat.

They both did not understand each other’s pain today…Virat with Sai’s pain of being an orphan and Virat’s pain of Sai not understanding how much she means to him.

No comment on the 🤮🤮 make them your family 🤮

Back to the I’m not going stay here forever

@bold I think they will keep doing it to delay the confession.

I think they are building all this up for some kind of closure later. Because I have seen a bit of KD, I think these incidents which are unaddressed by both of them will lead to the big confrontation. The story is progressing naturally only...I think the characters are deliberately leaving things, unsolved...and the story just shows that. If you have issues unsolved, they can escalate to a point where you regret...

We should show some patience and wait for the story to progress. The unsettling feeling we are having is induced by the story itself..this is what the characters are feeling right now. :)

The only complaint I have is that CVs should show some detailing on how the scenes end...even if the story demands to leave the tracks hanging. For example: The night when Sai returned pendant is important to show...They should have atleast shown Virat going to bed disappointed and Sai studying and they could not talk..it doesnt add much to the story progression but atleast there is a closure to the scene.

Originally posted by: laksh

@bold I agree.

When Sai realised that Pakhi told the exact same words, she felt bad that they have so much in common. I believe, she started to feel insecured as if they both are made for each other kind and they are meant to be together. Her insecurity, hurt and disappointment that she couldn’t understand him but Pakhi could is like they both have so much understanding, and she has come in between them. It is like if she had never entered his life, may be they both would have got together now that Samrat is also missing. She knows what Pakhi wants anyway, but is always anxious if Virat also would have wanted the same as Pakhi if he had not married her. Virat used to call Pakhi a matured lady, he used to act partial when it comes to Pakhi and had also asked Pakhi to guide Sai or get Pakhi to dress her up too. Sai has always been able to sense that he has very high regards of Pakhi and it is anyway true too. She has only now started to notice the changes in him towards Pakhi and she attributes it to his loyalty, to his morals. But she is not confident that he would think high of her as he thinks of Pakhi. Such instances brings out her doubts and hence she said that Pakhi will cherish his gift so he should get one for her. It is like Virat saying, yeah, why would you listen to me, I am not your Abha. He used to always think that she doesn’t like him or she can never like him, she also feels that way especially after noticing about his views about Pakhi. She feels that Virat is always highly impressed with Pakhi. Listening to the exact same words as that of Pakhi from Virat’s mouth had triggered her.

Tagging you since I thought you were wondering why Sai even brought Pakhi into picture.

Originally posted by: Saichintalli

actually Sai brought pakhi in this before that virat's dialogue only I guess... I have to watch it again to confirm🤣...I really appreciate sai's pure heart to give pendant to Kaku ( she is the same who wants give her jewelry given by her dad to Devi , so no complaints I really loved her pure heart) But still sai should have said sorry when virat mentioned he is hurt because inspite all the history she clearly know that virat brought her this with so much affection. Instead of that she just said then don't gift me is so hurting...

I have brought why she brought in Pakhi before. It was to tell that his family can never accept her because she is not Patralekha Mohit Patel. I have written about it in the 2nd or 3rd page in this same thread.