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The Mr and Mrs Jealous episode! Though it was mainly focused on the jealousy, insecurity and possessiveness of Virat, we did see a hint of it displayed by Sai as well. Though she keeps throwing Pakhi’s name on his face everytime they argue, it is her insecurity that makes her do it wherein subconsciously she wants Virat to deny it with a finality. And when she pounced on him for saying the same words as Pakhi about Sai disregarding and insulting his feelings, it was out of sheer jealousy. She recalled that Pakhi had said the same lines as Virat instantly, but could not connect it to Ashwini’s words. Because Sai had confidently and proudly said that she knows Virat more than Pakhi and here she was proved wrong. And that was jealousy acting up as she could not stand Pakhi being right wrt to Virat!

Originally posted by: ppnn7191

These Ghum makers and CVs take the audience for granted, they hardly put in any effort to polish their work be it editing or dialogues.. it’s sad Sitara is ok with running a show that’s so shoddy! Other shows at the most are well edited and the actors have reasonably decent costumes! This show runs only on the sairat fan following and absolutely nothing else.. I’m quite sure as they progress this show is bound to lose audience and trp it’s just a matter of time..

also even if you are a low budget show I’m sure If u love your work and are grateful the end product will definitely not be so pathetic! Forget the story atleast the execution should be good, it’s a prime time show for heavens sake!

The low budget can't be an excuse. The other show of same PH gets much much better clothes. Here, the clothes quality, the leads room everything looks cheap.

Actually SP has a few low budget shows right now which are not even doing well in TRPs, but the editing and execution is way better than this.

Originally posted by: Sera-high123

The low budget can't be an excuse. The PHs other shows gets much much better clothes. Here, the clothes quality, the leads room everything looks cheap.

Actually SP has a few low budget shows right now but the editing and execution is way better than this.

Exactly what I’m trying to say!

Thanks Neerja.. This helped me not watch the show.. Wahi bakwaas fir se na ho paayega.😆

The show is also SO inconsistent. One or two episodes or scenes are done in top notch way and then nose dive to mediocrity. And this was there even pre covid related issues with shooting/location etc. Right from get go their episodes are like a yo yo. Some episodes are done well , others fall flat. Some days their dialogue writers deliver, other days they have bad case of Google translate- either forget to edit out the unwanted dialogues or forget the important good dialogues of KD. Editing, scene continuity ki toh bilkul nahi padi inko.

It is only Sairat that salvage this show.

Costumes- there are very few days that we love Sais look, but they immediately change it as if they are allergic to praise. Most of the time its ott, too much bling, not like a college girl. But they did nothing to change it. Terrible make up n costumes for FL.

I dunno why they decided to straighten Sais hair instead of the curls she had before.

Everyday she gets a new mangalautra/choker neck piece which is tacky. Rarely do they give her the simple mangalsutra.

Is it so hard to show some consistency to good quality work?!

Originally posted by: Nja91

The show is also SO inconsistent. One or two episodes or scenes are done in top notch way and then nose dive to mediocrity. And this was there even pre covid related issues with shooting/location etc. Right from get go their episodes are like a yo yo. Some episodes are done well , others fall flat. Some days their dialogue writers deliver, other days they have bad case of Google translate- either forget to edit out the unwanted dialogues or forget the important good dialogues of KD. Editing, scene continuity ki toh bilkul nahi padi inko.

It is only Sairat that salvage this show.

Costumes- there are very few days that we love Sais look, but they immediately change it as if they are allergic to praise. Most of the time its ott, too much bling, not like a college girl. But they did nothing to change it. Terrible make up n costumes for FL.

I dunno why they decided to straighten Sais hair instead of the curls she had before.

Everyday she gets a new mangalautra/choker neck piece which is tacky. Rarely do they give her the simple mangalsutra.

Is it so hard to show some consistency to good quality work?!

I wonder if the creative team or director was replaced. GC episodes had standard - good direction, production values, editing, costume and original dialogues. Somewhere everything nose-dived into mediocrity.

They're getting the numbers whatever they do. That's why they are just not bothered..

But, the moment there's an option to watch, I'm quite sure, the scales will shift. At this point, there's nothing in the 8 pm slot to give competition.

In fact I'm wondering what time will the S2 of the child marriage show come on?

It's beginning in August. Last time,it was at 8 pm. That had great production values, dialogues, powerful acting everything. Let's wait and watch.

Originally posted by: asmi_joya

Thanks Neerja.. This helped me not watch the show.. Wahi bakwaas fir se na ho paayega.😆

I mean i think Sairat is still very much watchable n amazing. They make the nok jhok scenes so real and fantastic. They look like a real married couple. But its just frustrating when such good opportunities are not capitalized on by poor writing. It was a good length scene of Sairat alone with no interruptions but they didn't milk the potential, maximize the opportunity like they did with the past few scenes of Sairat. Humne tareef kya kardi, they are back to screwing up from dialogue standpoint again.

The fight Did not have. A lot of flow.... From ajinkya, he jumps to necklace.... The family taunting is not mentioned well..... Only Pakhi is highlighted..... virat and his ache Ghar wale and u gav to make more efforts hi khatam Nahi hota. Banda Kuch aakh khol ke dekhta bhi Nahi hai Apne Ghar mein....

The whole challenge to get the chakrams to attend the function seems sooo unnecessary

U are a brave soul to sit and watch this show at 6 in the morning!!!!!

21 toopon ki salami aapko 🙏🙏😅😅😅

Originally posted by: MSgayatri

The fight Did not have. A lot of flow.... From ajinkya, he jumps to necklace.... The family taunting is not mentioned well..... Only Pakhi is highlighted..... virat and his ache Ghar wale and u gav to make more efforts hi khatam Nahi hota. Banda Kuch aakh khol ke dekhta bhi Nahi hai Apne Ghar mein....

The whole challenge to get the chakrams to attend the function seems sooo unnecessary

U are a brave soul to sit and watch this show at 6 in the morning!!!!!

21 toopon ki salami aapko 🙏🙏😅😅😅

Kya effort daalna hai usko, ye apan ko samajh nahi aata waise...