RaghVi FF : Nightmare - Page 66

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

All is well... all is well...

I hope so.

You have made me speechless once again.😳

This chapter made me go on a toll of emotions and I have tears in my eyes. I can visualise Raghav's guilt and anxiety so well.

Loved how you explained Raghav's struggle to save 'his life' and fear of loosing her.

Ved aimed at Raghav but Pallavi took the bullet ; truly killing him in every sense. I can't even imagine what Raghav must have been going through the moment she closed her eyes.😭

Shot fired but ‘The Fire’ engulfed the bullet destined for ‘Ice’. It had to be taken by fire. It had always been taken by fire. - This line has my heart. Pallavi is the 'fire' ; who introduced peace and warmth in 'Ice cold' Raghav's life. The fire engulfed the bullet to protect the ice, not knowing that the ice has already melted and become water ; slowly slipping away as every second passed by.

I have said it before and I will say it again - you are an amazing writer ; with an expert in writing poignant works.💙❤

Btw, you said that you needed a break before posting this chapter. How are you now?

I loved that conversation, but not sure if I apply my theories here. Don't want to spoil the fun.

I have a lot of thoughts about this and I'm having problems to put it in words.

Keep writing Lateuser, more mystery. 😆

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

I hope so.

Was talking about u dere

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

I loved that conversation, but not sure if I apply my theories here. Don't want to spoil the fun.

I have a lot of thoughts about this and I'm having problems to put it in words.

Keep writing Lateuser, more mystery. 😆

Its purely upto u to share ur theory. I would just say don't worry u won't spoil anything. So u can talk freely whatever you like.

Originally posted by: Trista101

You have made me speechless once again.😳

This chapter made me go on a toll of emotions and I have tears in my eyes. I can visualise Raghav's guilt and anxiety so well.

Loved how you explained Raghav's struggle to save 'his life' and fear of loosing her.

Ved aimed at Raghav but Pallavi took the bullet ; truly killing him in every sense. I can't even imagine what Raghav must have been going through the moment she closed her eyes.😭

Shot fired but ‘The Fire’ engulfed the bullet destined for ‘Ice’. It had to be taken by fire. It had always been taken by fire. - This line has my heart. Pallavi is the 'fire' ; who introduced peace and warmth in 'Ice cold' Raghav's life. The fire engulfed the bullet to protect the ice, not knowing that the ice has already melted and become water ; slowly slipping away as every second passed by.

I have said it before and I will say it again - you are an amazing writer ; with an expert in writing poignant works.💙❤

Btw, you said that you needed a break before posting this chapter. How are you now?

Thanx alot.

Dere r many places in story where meaning is set as for both in character and also overarching influence in normal life we see. The line u mentioned was one among those lines. My favourite from chapter was different though.

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

Its purely upto u to share ur theory. I would just say don't worry u won't spoil anything. So u can talk freely whatever you like.

I think I will skip,

It felt like you took a leap.

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

I think I will skip,

It felt like you took a leap.

leap?? didn't get u.

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

Where?

All is well was for u as u looked dizzy.

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

All is well was for u as u looked dizzy.

I was dizzy after reading that.