Raghvi OS : The twist of the law. - Page 5

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❤️ For the tag!

will be back. Running to read now.

That was amazing keechu!!! 👏

Loved the shot with the whole laws and everything but the ending was bang on with her asking for divorce!!! 😎

And thankyou for tagging me!!! 🥳

I missed your writing so much

Originally posted by: ReemShah

Loved Pallavi here--she did what she wanted not what others expected of her--I hope if such point ever arises in the show--she should do the same

and this was written so beautifully and loved how you included law and Raghav's feelings....that he was in love with Pallavi Sawant as an individual neither his wife nor Mandaar's supposed widow

Yep. She must put herself before everyone and everything. She needs to learn that, the first priority should be herself.

Thank you for reading. Means alot. ❤️

Originally posted by: Mihika

Loved it...dedo dedo talaak karwa do ....Madaar is a blunder...usko zyada time aur space ni denge humlog 😆

Thanks Mihika. 🤗

Let's see if he will eat more footage in future. 😆

Originally posted by: Innocentlove96

That's amazing start!!👏🏻👏🏻

And end too. 😆

Thank you.

Originally posted by: Prriyam

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❤️ For the tag!

will be back. Running to read now.

OK. I will be waiting for your comment.

Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart

That was amazing keechu!!! 👏

Loved the shot with the whole laws and everything but the ending was bang on with her asking for divorce!!! 😎

And thankyou for tagging me!!! 🥳

I missed your writing so much

Thank you Dishi. 🤗

Yep. Had a different ending in mind when I started but then, this felt too apt so choose this.

I actually forgot to tag you, but suddenly remembered. 😆

I miss reading yours, lots to catch up.

Done reading. 👍🏼 Weekends fly in a jiffy with a million things to be done; all, except some me-time.

Keeping aside the discussion of, if I am in the minority who would like to see this happening, I loved how you showed the calm before the storm. ⚡️

RR trying to remain awake, not to waste the pending few hours, is such a natural reaction and emotion that you have captured.

I like the lingering emotions and extended moments in your stories. For instance, ‘Baffled he was with the strange comfort she had on her face seeing him.’ Without this, the story would still flow ok. But adding this at the right place, elevates the scene; adds depth. 👌🏼 And makes us realise and travel with the characters.

Some doubts
- why did Raghav look for ‘punishment to bigamy in India’? Is it to show that he cannot do anything other than stand and watch, as it will end up against Pallavi?
- why did Pallavi wait for 1 month?
- what does the ‘twist’ of the law specify? - meant the Divorce?

Thank you Prriyam. It's a joy to read your comments. You make me feel that I wrote something worth reading.

And that RR staying awake, that is a common human emotion. I'm like that, if I have a few hours to spend somewhere or with someone I will refuse to sleep for obvious reasons.

It's that comfort on her face, which broke that last thread. If she was startled seeing him there, he wouldn't have taken that step.

About your doubts, I would like to clear it, but I'm thinking to convert this to a SS. Haven't decided anything yet, if I get a good plot I will try. So no explanation right now. If I drop the plan, I will explain to you.

Thank you once again.

This is very beautiful❤️.

I love your writing style..It's is so crisp and impactful..and for me I find it difficult to write this way and hence I easily get attracted to your style ⭐️

Regarding the story..I loved the plot...Raghav being the impatient person is capable of doing this. Beautifully written👏

I hardly request os makers to write a second part..I would be glad to read if you come up with another part.