Raghvi OS : The twist of the law. - Page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: AppleOfEye

Kya baat hai Farhad!👏

Kitna accha likhta hai Tu😎

How managed to write such a beautiful shot?

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Law pe kyu likhneka mood hua achanak?😈

SKD ne wo law book udhar diya kya tumko?😡🤪🤣

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Jo bhi hai, Mereko toh bada pasand aya tumhara story!

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You’ve written it beautifully! ❤️

Ab stories likhna hogaya toh kaam pe bhi aajao😡🤣


Your Anna 😆❤️

Thank you so much Anna. Your appreciation means alot to me. 🤗😭

Have been thinking to write something on law since I saw the law book in bhabhi 's hand. 🤣

Will join in the work soon.

Thank you Anna, Tc 🤣🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#12

Sorry not my kapti.

Writing is good though as u clearly have great hold over story flow with a very different central theme.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#13

Ok, this was different 😅

For all my talks of besharmi 🤣 I would definitely prefer if they sorted out their emotional standing before making the physical move. Moments of attraction should be there, and they should acknowledge it, but the mental bond should be the priority. Otherwise this kind of situation would only mess things up for them And I don't like messy situations 😆


Having said that, I loved how you penned this. Very impactful writing 🗝️ 👏

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: lateuser1234

Sorry not my kapti.

Writing is good though as u clearly have great hold over story flow with a very different central theme.

Knew it. 😆

But thanks for reading that.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: Bee222

Ok, this was different 😅

For all my talks of besharmi smiley37 I would definitely prefer if they sorted out their emotional standing before making the physical move. Moments of attraction should be there, and they should acknowledge it, but the mental bond should be the priority. Otherwise this kind of situation would only mess things up for them smiley44 And I don't like messy situations smiley36

Having said that, I loved how you penned this. Very impactful writing 🗝️ smiley32

I completely agree 🐝 but I never said that there wasn't any emotional intimacy between them. smiley2

Thank you 🐝.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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I like the selfish Raghav here. It is how I would expect his mind to work. He can be all the goody goody husband and woo his wife when they have their entire life ahead of them. But when he has just few hours, well the physical intimacy would only make their emotional bond stronger.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wow. I am so overwhelmed 🥺 such powerful writing! Intense.

On a lighter note- Raghav basically put himself out there, everything he had to offer and then let her free to choose. Obviously she couldn’t say no to that 😆


Count me in the minority now, who low key wants this to happen 👏 I mean I would love it either way! Some stories are perfect in their own flawed manner. All what matters is love!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#18

Wow this was such a beautiful OS ! ❤️

Amazing ! 😳

Loved it 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#19

Wow 🤩

This is amazing

This is how it should be if RR got less hours with Pallavi as her husband

This is such an intriguing and powerful fanfic

Because RR is totally in his element here


Pallavi decides to divorce Mandaar after a month ? 😲

A month 😲 wow



Continue with this with possible 😳

I don’t think Pallavi will go back to RR quickly after divorcing Mandaar, rather I don’t want her to 😆


Makers should show something of Pallavi sawant before making her Mrs Rao again


I want them to date 😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: AppleOfEye

Kya baat hai Farhad!👏

Kitna accha likhta hai Tu😎

How managed to write such a beautiful shot?

Image

Law pe kyu likhneka mood hua achanak?😈

SKD ne wo law book udhar diya kya tumko?😡🤪🤣

Image

Jo bhi hai, Mereko toh bada pasand aya tumhara story!

Image

You’ve written it beautifully! ❤️

Ab stories likhna hogaya toh kaam pe bhi aajao😡🤣


Your Anna 😆❤️

Farhad shayari ke baad FF bhi likhta hai 😆

Good you wrote this in English and not Hindi warna tumhare Anna sirf bhool bhool read karte 🤪

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Haan I am giving my devar private tuitions about law these days 😎

Edited by Radiant_Eyes_ - 4 years ago

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