PS|EDT #35|The Curious Case of Shiva's Adbhut Plan and Missing Rishita - Page 40

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: milkcakejamun


Lol, I cracked up laughing with how surprised you were 🤣 But yes, I am trying to write a DevTa fanfic... but let me explain before you think I've gone all crazy...


It's a ShiVi fanfic featuring DevTa where ShiVi are preventing DevTa from falling in love. But in order to write the fanfic, I need to figure out what "lover boy" Dev will do... and the only thing I can think of is sleep 🤣


DevTa have quite a few romantic scenes, you can watch those for inspiration 😆

There are scenes of Devta's almost kiss in the aangan, dev holding her hands, hand kisses and even dev lying on her lap 😆

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Transference

SRK in Fauji. I wonder what happened to ITV shows post the Kekta world 🤬


Saas bahu saazish happened

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: SlytherInMe.


kuch nahi play of words tha 😆

don't mind me, mein dev aur uske constipation ke peeche hi padi rehti hoon 🤣

Okay okay😆

Lagi reh

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese


DevTa have quite a few romantic scenes, you can watch those for inspiration 😆

There are scenes of Devta's almost kiss in the aangan, dev holding her hands, hand kisses and even dev lying on her lap 😆


I wrote one shots about ShiVi, GauRa, RaiTa, shayad ab DevTa ki baari hai 🤣🤣 kya ideas dia hai tune 😆

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: GrilledCheese


ITV doesn't generally do redemption arcs, only redemption scenes at best 😆


Maybe its because I generally binge episodes after they've moved on that it feels like an arc..or maybe my standards are too low lol. But I did like Arshi and 1st Kaira patch-up 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Transference

SRK in Fauji. I wonder what happened to ITV shows post the Kekta world 🤬


Please tell me, since the year 2000, things started going downhill. I was an avid TV show (Hindi and Tamil) watcher back in the 90s when I was in HS and college. Back then it used to be weekly show(episodes used to come once a week, like how they do it here in the US), also each show used to have fixed episodes, infact Fauji was only a 13 episode series. Suddenly in the year 2000 with SP and Ekta's rise daily soaps became popular, since then things went downhill. Daily shows dilutes the content a lot because the makers are constantly under pressure to meet the deadline which leads to poor writing.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Transference

Please do not remind me of that trauma💁‍♀️, soulmate, Dupatta and flying Sindoor. I had a massive heartburn after Mr. Bajaj-Prerna ship sank with KSG leaving the show. 🤪

I swear PS is far better 😆


🤣Flying sindoor.

That was some shitty writing

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: SlytherInMe.


I wrote one shots about ShiVi, GauRa, RaiTa, shayad ab DevTa ki baari hai 🤣🤣 kya ideas dia hai tune 😆


🤣

Ye sab toh ho chuka hai show mein, tune skip kar diya? 🤣

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Transference

Please do not remind me of that trauma💁‍♀️, soulmate, Dupatta and flying Sindoor. I had a massive heartburn after Mr. Bajaj-Prerna ship sank with KSG leaving the show. 🤪

I swear PS is far better 😆


Any show will be better than Ekta's and Gul's shows. You all discussed about manhandling, Gul's show are the worst in that. I used to bash her when I was in IPKKND forum, because of her ASR used to get bashed as well😆

Edited by mpks1 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: Transference

Interesting take! I think Dev, in his heart, knows that he has wronged Raavi, and many times, Shiva has taken him on a guilt trip too.

Maybe, currently, he is in an awkward state as Raavi was about to share with him had not Rishita happened was a relationship which is a sexual, emotional and societal bond.

It can be too much for a man to handle, knowing that now the same woman is his brother's wife and his brother knows what his wife must have felt for Dev at one point in time. It's highly complicated as an emotion. Very similar to what Shiva must have felt looking at that gift.

Of course, PS universe won't explore that as you know , Dev is wiped out of Raavi’s memory

This really needs to be explored! The track has soo much potential.how can they just leave it at that? 😓😓

They were at least shown to be awkward in the initial days, where raavi stares at devta when rishita hugs him after sitting on shiva's bike.

Where she gets awkward when rishita sings a song for Dev and asks the family if they know it is their song?

Shiva rebukes her and says, how can they know? Baaki Sab cheezein bhi 2-3 days pehle pata chali.

At least don't have them singing and hugging in yaadon ki baraat 😞😞😞😞

Keep the awkwardness intact, so that at least builds up to their confrontation.

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