RaghVi FF : Nightmare - Page 7

Originally posted by: Trista101

Oh! Thanks a ton for your appreciation! 😊💙

Hehe no, this imagination would be a better story only if you execute it in your mystical words❤❤

Thanx but thoda sa bahut thoda sa zyada ho gya. There r way better writer here then me.

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

No offense taken. I usually take care of that based on where I m sharing my writing.

So you don't find us worthy of that care?

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

So you don't find us worthy of that care?

U's are you and y's are why in fourth chapter. I just saw this more as informal space thus ignored it. And u havn't given feedback of 4th chapter. Tried that in ur preferred way mashed with mine.

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

Thanx but thoda sa bahut thoda sa zyada ho gya. There r way better writer here then me.

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

U's are you and y's are why in fourth chapter. I just saw this more as informal space thus ignored it. And u havn't given feedback of 4th chapter. Tried that in ur preferred way mashed with mine.

Just noticed. Thanks. I'm glad that you took my suggestion and applied it.

Will give a feedback soon.

You prefer that way of writing or just using it for this informal space?

Originally posted by: Trista101

I disagree. Har ek writer ki apni alag khoobi hoti hai. And as far as my opinion is concerned, no one can weave this poignant plot into a story better than you😊❤❤

Thnx I guess. just give ur theory to if not a lot to ask as priyam shared of where the story is nd heading till now. Seems intriguing to read other versions.

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

Just noticed. Thanks. I'm glad that you took my suggestion and applied it.

Will give a feedback soon.

You prefer that way of writing or just using it for this informal space?

Not sure. All my old writings were descriptive but kind off shifted to this style not sure y. but yes, find this better for faster flow of story then that style. Still for monologues I switch to those descriptive style.

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

Thanx.

I think of few ways it can be thought of but its always good to hear what others interpreted till that point. Thanks for sharing that. Do share going forward too. Its good to know all the alternatives.

I can't wait long on incomplete story. Hectic schedule still trying. Lets see till when I can maintain it.

It is like trying to run a race with the story, to see if we read just the words or more than what it conveys.

In effect, can we read between the lines! And it gets challenging when the author places red-herrings knowingly; or like in this case, divulge what is necessary.

A step by step reveal. In every step, all the prior assumptions goes for a toss, unless, one is shrewd and picking on the bits that lay here and there.

Is it ok to share, if you have a crux defined (which will not change) and working around it by layering it? In other words, you are not trying to outsmart yourself by adding a spin every time and then seeing what you can do with it?

Originally posted by: Prriyam

It is like trying to run a race with the story, to see if we read just the words or more than what it conveys.

In effect, can we read between the lines! And it gets challenging when the author places red-herrings knowingly; or like in this case, divulge what is necessary.

A step by step reveal. In every step, all the prior assumptions goes for a toss, unless, one is shrewd and picking on the bits that lay here and there.

Is it ok to share, if you have a crux defined (which will not change) and working around it by layering it? In other words, you are not trying to outsmart yourself by adding a spin every time and then seeing what you can do with it?

Just a point. Whole story was pre planned before chapter 1. No changes. I usually like to keep stories for myself just post a small part as OS due to time constrains. But this seemed like story to give it a go. So here it is.

I loved this line. "the unspoken words are the reason for various ruins in the museum of life known as world." and so true.

Raghav is the ruin of life so as Pallavi since there is no communication. I liked how you added her that confession after this. I doubt if Pallavi believes this though. If she does then she wouldn't have gone nervous after her confession. She was apprehensive of her unspoken becoming spoken.

I still believe that something happened to Pallavi, and Raghav is responsible or are you playing an amnesia card? Why a Sarika entered?

"You will be free from this life of captivity"

I found this line so fascinating when I think about the previous chapters. If I'm right then, in present Raghav is emotionally kept captive by Pallavi and in past she was kept captive by Raghav physically. Wow! I'm waiting to see how this unfolds.

And thank you so much for taking my suggestion and for giving this mostly in descriptive way.

Now I'm wondering why Onion is your favorite, tears or mystery? Or was that you being sarcastic?