OS- HORIZON

You had me treading the path you wanted your readers to take! I was only reading it as a RR-Pallavi story, 🙈 am sure, as you wished.

So, it was a surprise when you twisted it on its head! 😀

and I loved how you have set the scene and talked about the whole horizon and sunset. ⭐️

Loved your style! 👌🏼

Damn I thought it to be RaghVi story, but okay, I loved it!

These two are my second favorite ship!!!

Beautiful write up!!

This is beautiful. So, beautifully written.❤️❤️❤️

Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart

Damn I thought it to be RaghVi story, but okay, I loved it!

These two are my second favorite ship!!!

Beautiful write up!!

hope you enjoy it.

thank you

I had to read that twice.

In the first read when I reached the last part, I was like, what the hell who Raghav is admiring that too someone who called pallavi didi. 😆

Then saw Farhad, then boom.....

I'm a hard core Harikrishna shipper. So I didn't enjoy this at all. 🤣🤣

BTW nice way of story telling. 👏

Wow....great element of surprise there... 😃

Loved ur writing.. ❤️

Not much of a person for Farhad and Krishna... but ur story your pair 😆

Originally posted by: LoveHopeMagic

I had to read that twice.

In the first read when I reached the last part, I was like, what the hell who Raghav is admiring that too someone who called pallavi didi. 😆

Then saw Farhad, then boom.....

I'm a hard core Harikrishna shipper. So I didn't enjoy this at all. 🤣🤣

BTW nice way of story telling. 👏

Thank you

Hope you enjoyed it

P. S- even I am harikrishna shipper

Originally posted by: monsi08

Wow....great element of surprise there... 😃

Loved ur writing.. ❤️

Not much of a person for Farhad and Krishna... but ur story your pair 😆

Thank you

Even m not shipper of farhad and Krishna

Well characterisation of farhad make me do it. And I don't want kirti to end UP with farhad nor with Deshmukh girls

Its just Raghav amma gave me a job of finding girl for farhad

Farhad has free time to watch the sunset, I didn't know that--I thought he was busy in doing Raghav's work always

I started reading this story, thinking that it was based on RaghVi and in the end it is based on Farhad and Krishna

it was really well written