FF :PURVIR........ An unbreakable and infinite love ♥️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Index

1 purvi leaves :below

2 purvi's determination : page 2

3 Broken : page 4










1 Purvi leaves 😭😭


This story start from the current situation going on in the show .....

The divorce proceedings are done and sakshi tries asks purvi to remarry someone but purvi insists her she doesn't want to marry again right now but sakshi keeps on convincing her..... finally purvi tells that she wants to look for her career and also wants to do a job thats why she is denying for the marriage...

One fine day purvi is all set to leave the haveli forever 😫😫 but she hasn't told kids about this because she knows if they come to know about it they'll somehow stop her and now she doesn't want to wait here and disturb sakshi and Mukhi life........
At night when she makes kids sleep in deep deep lap of sleep, she makes her way out of the house 😢
She bids a goodbye👋 to everyone.
Mukhi is unable to even look at her his eyes brimming with hot tears 😢😢all the flashbacks running around them...

Purvi leaves the haveli.... Mukhi is unable to sleep he jerks up at night and suddenly started sobbing.. Sakshi asks him the try to forget purvi now as if he remembers her then , she might also sit and sobb...... 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭Its heart's connection......

Its morning and kids wake-up wanting to meet their dear haathi but she didn't turn up . They think she must be busy with some work. But now its evening stil they haven't seen even a glimpse of her this shocks them😧😧so they go to find her.....
They run in every single corner of the house but find her nowhere... They go to her room but they find the room empty completely empty ... Both Juhi Manas check her cupboard but don't find a single cloth of haathi... They get tensed as hell so try to find other things but the room is as clean as the new .. ...

Juhi think about something and search for the special thing of haathi which is her kanha ji but it was missing now both were afraid also shocked so they ran towards Sakshi and ask about purvi but she gives them a very very lame reason to which they don't believe and ask her to tell the truth........

Manas runs to other direction where Virendra was sitting with some files trying to read but was busy in memory of purvi🥺🥺 . Manas comes and watches his baba carefully he sees something which he had never seen in Baba's eyes.. that is TEARS .. He asks him why he is crying to which Virendra reply he isn't crying something went into his eyes so water is coming .... Manas denied to believe it.....

Even if Manas is very young and small he could make out the difference between his Baba's tears and water......

At last both the came across the harsh truth of haathi leaving them forever😫😫😫😫...... They both cry and cry and cry unable to think what to do after her...... Everyone tried to make a reason for her sudden departure but they believed none.... They skipped their dinner and just sobbed in her name 😭😭
Everyone pacified them but all the effort were in vain. 🥺
Everyone decided to leave them alone for some time they would recover by themselves.

Just then Vir himself arrived at the kids room with the meal in his hand. He slowly entered the room he got terrifying scene seeing his two little munchkin in so much miserable condition of both.... he feels sad and sorry for them.

He tried to chill out but the sadness captured his antics too. He felt depressed but he had to stay strong for his kids for his Bawari....

He moved towards them both laying on the bed and crying very much... he made them sit besides him. They both immediately hugged him and cried hard again he tried to calm down... He kissed both several times on their hands and forehead but still they were crying.....
The loss was too that big for them

Their cry made him more weak he felt.... He too wished to sobb bitterly but he couldn't 😫😫😫😫😫😫.

Juhi Manas finally stopped and were calm and quite besides their Babbbar Sher but again they missed their Haathi warm hug and her sweet voice...
He fed them dinner and said "Dekho ib rona band karo aur meri baat suno. Haathi tumhe chodkar kahi nhi gayi woh toh hum sab ke saath hi hai... Bilkul humare paas...

Manas asked him with innocence "par baba woh toh apna samaan leke chali gayi hai na 🥺🥺

Vir answers " Bacchon woh ek kaam se gayi hai issliye apna sara saman le kr gai hai "

Juhi asks "kaisa kaam hai jo hume bina bataye, sara saman le gai???

Vir " Tum dono ko pata hai na ki woh college jana kitna acha lagta hai toh woh college gai hai;bade wale dusaare College mein..... Jaha usse ... jo chahiye woh padhne milega ... aur usse ek achha jeevan bhi milega......

Kids "Baba kya hum unse baat nhi kr sakte??

Vir gets emotional but again control himself and tells " Agar tum log usse bar bar baat karke pareshaan karoge toh kese apne kaam kar payegi., isliye usse phone karna nhi hai.... Jis din uska kaam ho jayega.... Us din woh tumse milne aayegi🥺🥺...

Listening to this kids were relived but Vir knew that this would never happen but somewhere in his heart he felt SHE Would RETURN 😌😌

Vir assured kids and they too thought not to disturb their dear haathi as they both knew how much she loved studying📚✏ so they slept with with a thought that their haathi will have to return to them... They thought they both will pray wholeheartedly to let her study complete soon........

They both slept hugging vir... He was getting weak unable to stop thinking about her... Her memories flashing.... Making him to cry hard....

He saw JM hugging tight him and slept with a new dream but he cried a lot 😭😭😭 he was very sorry for the lies he told his kids but he was helpless😫😭😭😭😭
This thing hurted him that kids will now always believe him bit he wouldn't have told this then it would be difficult to handle them...........

Thoughts kept on running around him.... As if they were the arrows shot from different direction and were attacking him........

He too slept there with kids .... With her memories his heart and mind 🥺🥺🥺



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Posted: 4 years ago
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Even though emotional and sad ..seperation creates depth of love..it was well shown in your writing

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Sampu...so now even you are in the league of writers.

U have really done a good job..that emotional connect was something we all yearn for..and you brought it so well in the story.

It was like not mukhi..neither kids...it was me who was feeling his loss and kids loss....

Best line was...somewhere he knew SHE WOULD RETURN.....do continue this and make their hathi..his love....his bawri..his sab kuch..return to their life and fill it with more happiness.

I visted forum to check for wu..and i got to read this...🤩

I think..i will sleep contended now..to wake up to read update of episode.

Well done🤘🏻

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wow Sampada! This was heartbreaking yet beautiful 😍


You've portrayed Vir's pain so well...and also the way he handles the kids!!

Please continue karo🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jaspreet96

Sampu...so now even you are in the league of writers.

U have really done a good job..that emotional connect was something we all yearn for..and you brought it so well in the story.

It was like not mukhi..neither kids...it was me who was feeling his loss and kids loss....

Best line was...somewhere he knew SHE WOULD RETURN.....do continue this and make their hathi..his love....his bawri..his sab kuch..return to their life and fill it with more happiness.

I visted forum to check for wu..and i got to read this...🤩

I think..i will sleep contended now..to wake up to read update of episode.

Well done🤘🏻

Thankyou di for your kind words 🤗♥️

Next coming soon 🤘

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Sampu yr this was too good

I felt the pain something that I don't want to see

Pls continue yr

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Very emotional 😢 n beautifully written story 😍👌 thanks for the tag ❤

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Sampada🤗

Office hours are just coming to an end here and I finally had time to read and enjoy this!

I am sure you reflect many of us here who wanted Purv to walk out! I really, really wish Saba had shown something along these lines.

Love the way you have captured the emotions. ❤️

Eagerly waiting for the next part. Is it coming soon??😆


Thanks for tag!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: nycgal

Sampada🤗

Office hours are just coming to an end here and I finally had time to read and enjoy this!

I am sure you reflect many of us here who wanted Purv to walk out! I really, really wish Saba had shown something along these lines.

Love the way you have captured the emotions. ❤️

Eagerly waiting for the next part. Is it coming soon??😆


Thanks for tag!

Shree di thanks for your kind and supporting words 🤗♥️next part coming soon🤘

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Posted: 4 years ago
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2 Purvi's Determination 😩😩🥺

Here purvi had left her soul behind with her Babbar Sher, Khargosh & Genda....

She found it hard and was unable to control herself....

She was living in a Working Women Hostel she sat down with a thud....hundreds of memories running her mind 🥺🥺🥺lost in Vir and kids.


She opened her phone..... Her wallpaper

[Imagine karlena 😅😂]


She cried hard 😭😭holding the phone close to her ♥️🥺😫😩
She sobbed the whole night .... unable to sleep, unable to calm down, unable to digest the whole thing....
But all she did was for the welfare of her loved ones ; her near and dear ones😢😭😢

Purvi's monologue :

Humne jo bhi kiya acha hi kiya hai.... Par hum apne man ko kese samajhaye ?? Ki Mukhiji aur bacchon ke bina hi ab aage ki zindagi gujaar ni hai...... Humara man maan hi nhi raha, har ek pal bass un sabki yaad aati hai 😭😭

Par agar hum ye kadam nhi uthate toh sakshi ji ko kitna bura lagta... Abb woh apne pariwar ke saath humesha khush rahenge aur issi baat se hum bhi bojh me nhi rahenge 😢😭😢

Pata nhi bacche kitna pareshaan kar rahe honge Mukhiji aur Sakshi ji ko.... Kitna ro rahe honge..... Pata nhi aese kyu lag raha hai ki woh dono hume yaad kar rahe honge aur ro ro kar bura haal hogya hoga 😭😭😭

Hey bhagwaan pls humare genda aur khargosh ko yeh sab samjh ne ki himmat dena aur mukhiji ko bhi 🙏🙏

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She prayed to kanhaji and tried to sleep but all in vain...... Sleep was not ready to come just the memories of them.. The sweet and sour 🥺🥺 Their happy and sad moment... She was lost on those and slept unknowingly 😫😫😫
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Next morning she woke up and decided to do something for a living....... Sakshi had offered her finance for the living but Purvi had refused to accept it... She wanted to do everything on her own 😌😌 Purvi was girl with self esteem and self confidence..... She believed in

*nothing is impossible*

But now that she felt very low and lone she wanted a shoulder to support her.... She thought of someone..... None other than Mama sarkaar ;;;
He was only one on whom she can trust blindly. She for a min she thought to return to her village but again she had memories of how they lived in miserable conditions.... What people will say to her and her parents???? What will they say to mukhiji???? How will her parents react????
Again she will be a burden on somebody.... No... Now she cannot be that. .. She has to be independent and must stand up on herself... She had this strong determination......

......

To be continued...

Edited by Sampada001 - 4 years ago

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