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Posted: 4 years ago
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You are a magician Cheeku🤗

Cuz, this so felt like me, this is exactly how I behave when I feel miserable, this touched my heart immediately❤️

It was so amazing to see Virat and Ashwini aai.

Loved it💗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Wow just wow.... So lovely u have capacity to write all geners Yara... Wow... No words ... I really loved that dialogue... Faisla Lethe vakth niyath sahi hona hai.so well said👏

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shristhi2002

You are a magician Cheeku🤗

Cuz, this so felt like me, this is exactly how I behave when I feel miserable, this touched my heart immediately❤️

It was so amazing to see Virat and Ashwini aai.

Loved it💗

how did I miss this comment

Silly me😒

Sorry

Bold: Aww thankyou❤️

I'm glad that it could resonate with you Shristhi❤️

This ma beta jodi is not given enough footage in the show or maybe I'm just being greedy😆

And I loved your comment❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Saichintalli

Wow just wow.... So lovely u have capacity to write all geners Yara... Wow... No words ... I really loved that dialogue... Faisla Lethe vakth niyath sahi hona hai.so well said👏

thankyou so much🤗

Bold: it's because I can't master one thing🤣so I try to do everything😆

Italics: I know right. That's how we can be at peace with ourselves and our decisions.❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: cheekukabeej

Virat turned and tossed in bed but found no respite. He sat up and came out of his room. He kept walking briskly until his feet reached towards the door. He put his hand on the knob but a voice called out his name.

"Godu!" Ashwini called out to him and something made him tear up.

Why does it always happen? I can be strong in front of the whole world but one call from you aayi and I turn into that little kid who wants to complain about the whole world to you. Feels like you will swing your magical wand and everything will be fine again.

Virat smiled despite the tears and turned.

"Ho aayi!"

"Kya hua? Kuthe?" A worried Ashwini asked with concern coming towards him.

Virat started walking towards her too.

He looked straight into her eyes and felt all the burden coming back to his heart.

"Aa...yi" he felt his voice unintentionally heavy. He tried to compose himself but was failing miserably. Still he tried to stand straight.

Ashwini touched his cheek and he couldn't handle anymore as tears streamed down his face.

"Kya hua Godu?" Ashwini became anxious.

Virat couldn't speak. Ashwini took his hand and led him to the couch. She made him sit there and she herself sat beside him.

"Ab bata."

"Kuch nahi aayi. Bas..." Virat lied down in her lap and closed his eyes, "...thoda sa thak gaya hu."

"Jo kuch bhi hai. Yaad rakh. Main hu." Ashwini put her hand on his head.

"Janta hu Aayi. Ek tu hi to hai. Meri Jadu ki gudiya." Virat opened his eyes and looked in the distance, "lekin bade hote hote pata chal jata hai ki jadu wadu jaisi koi cheez nahi hoti duniya mein."

"Koi tension hai?" Ashwini asked caressing his head gently.

"Tujhe yaad hai aayi. Main fourth standard mein fail ho gaya tha."

"Arre. Tu fail thodi hua tha. Tu to..."

"... Net practice kar raha tha." Virat completed it for her smiling, "yahi kaha tha tune. Yaad hai mujhe" his smile disappeared suddenly, "aaj lagta hai tera Godu phir se fail ho gaya hai."

"Aisa kyun bol raha hai?" Ashwini kept her calm hiding her worries.

"Sab kuch hath se phisal raha hai Aayi. Aisa lagta hai jaise kuch bhi mere bas mein nahi hai."

Ashwini kept caressing his head without interrupting him.

"Maine to hamesha se jo bhi faisle liye hamare parivar ki bhalai ke bare mein sochkar hi liye. Ye sochkar ki wahi sahi hai. Phir bhi sab kuch hamesha bigad kyun jata hai aayi? Main kyun hamesha katghare mein lakar khada kar diya jata hu? Aur mujhe katghare mein khade karne wale log mere apne hi kyun hote hain? Kya mujhe faisle lene chhod dene chahiye?"

Ashwini wiped his tears but kept on caressing his head in a single motion.

"Nahi Godu! Pata hai Insaan jo bhi faisle leta hai us waqt mein yahi such kar leta hai ki wahi sahi hai. Par un faislon ka anjam faisle lene wale ke nahi, waqt ke hath mein hota hai. Tu apne aapko us cheez ke liye kasoorwar thehra raha hai jo tere hath mein hai hi nahi."

"Phir kya hai mere hath mein Aayi?" Virat sat up straight and looked into his mother's eyes for his answers.

"Insaan ke hath mein sirf itna hota hai ki faisle lete waqt uski niyat sahi ho. Baki sab..." Ashwini looked up," ...ooparwale ke hath mein chhod dena chahiye." She looked ahead and found Virat smiling.

Suddenly he felt like a fourth grader again who came with a problem to his Aayi. And his Aayi swung her magic wand and everything was perfect again.

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Here is your OS🤗


How did I miss this one?! This hit deep, truly.

The scene where Ashwini feeds Virat, where his defences are totally down in front of his mother, was one to.the key scenes that gave an insight into how vulnerable he is as a young man.

I just felt as if I got to watch another such scene...it really played out in front of my eyes! Beautifully written and such heartfelt dialogues!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: cheekukabeej

thankyou so much🤗

Bold: it's because I can't master one thing🤣so I try to do everything😆

Italics: I know right. That's how we can be at peace with ourselves and our decisions.❤️

actually this os is like a message which we have to implement I our lives❤️

You are master in all geners

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Posted: 4 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: AparnaRenu


How did I miss this one?! This hit deep, truly.

The scene where Ashwini feeds Virat, where his defences are totally down in front of his mother, was one to.the key scenes that gave an insight into how vulnerable he is as a young man.

I just felt as if I got to watch another such scene...it really played out in front of my eyes! Beautifully written and such heartfelt dialogues!

I'm glad I wrote this.

That was such a touching scene. Ashwini and Virat don't really have that many scenes. I wrote this for Deepika. Virat as a character actually deserves to show his vulnerability and who's better than a mother❤️

Bold: awww. Thankyou much🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Saichintalli

actually this os is like a message which we have to implement I our lives❤️

You are master in all geners

so true❤️

Ohh. That's... So... Sweet. Bas bhi☺️ mujhmein ghamand aa jayega. Wo alag baat hai mere Papa kehte hain wo namumkin hai🤣

Edited by cheekukabeej - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Very heart warming. Loved it. Virat and Ashwini, his Jadu ki gudiya❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: fatssrilanka

Very heart warming. Loved it. Virat and Ashwini, his Jadu ki gudiya❤️

thankyou❤️❤️❤️

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