MG:FF- LOVE..REVENGE.......REGRET!!! Part 5 PG 15 - Page 5

Originally posted by: Maanheart

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Part 2

After finishing pooja a girl went  tiptoes maan's room. She look for him everywhere n she spot him near his cupboard. Where he is searching something . She saw him lil tensed, which is total opposite to his natural . She smile knowing its only his right to make everyone tensed. She shook his head n call him softly bhai..!!

He stop n turn to see her standing near the door. He give her small smile.

She blink her eyes  or slightly pinch herself , “did she see him smiling?”

Yes Aanie? Maan ask her searching something again in cupboard.

Wo bhai…she stop for a min n think” did bhai forget”? A sadness cripe in her face

Yes Aanie I’m listing maan said finding his thing

Hmmm….Aanie just mumbled  she didn’t get word to say him or to remind him about todays day

When maan didn’t hear anything , he turned n see her lil scared

Seeing her scared maan lost remembering her words

(Show ur affection to ur loveone. Make them feel u love them rather then making them scared.

U don’t scare of me maan asked the girl sternly

Girl give him sweet smile pinching his nose n say no

Maan lifted his brown

because I know you love me and in love there is no fear girl said giving a quick pick on his lips

Maan narrow his eyes n said to himself “love my foot".!!)

He smile sadly knowing today’s “what she meant"?

He went near her hold her hand n make her sit on his bed n say with loving as he forward a big box toward aanie

Happy Birthday bachaa…!!!!n he kiss her forehead

A tear formed aanie eyes ,she took a  box n hug him saying thank you..

I thought u forgot my birthday aanie said with teary eyes but the small smile present in her face

“How can I”? maan broke the hug and said wiping her tear from corner of  her eyes

I know today is the same day we lost our parents which is black day for us he said clenching his fist

And also my birthday...aanie said as tear roll down from her eyes

Hmm…. he just get up n turn n watch his parents big portrait which is hanging in front of his bed

But it is also a special day when god send a beautiful angel for us he said with small smile which didn’t go unnoticed by aanie…

Maan turn n saw a bright smile on aanie face...Love u bhai aanie said hugging his bhai..

 In Golden temple a girl is doing ardas for her mother soul in peace n for her lil sister long life.

After praying she went out side the temple n feed poor people n distribute blankets to them after that she went to darga

She do there sajda n tie a thread their.

She sit outside for sometime when she saw a small girl n his mother doing sajda

A tear drop fro her eyes remembering her mother.. y u left us maa girl said with teary eyes

I'm not a good maa i didn't fulfill my responsibility maa.. I'm failed...maa.. I'm failed.. maa use nahi baja saki barbad hone se ma , mai nahi protect kar saki use maa.. I'm failed maa... a girl said looking up the sky with teary eyes.

Or nahi tu use aage bacha paegi barbad hone se girl look at in front of her hearing fakir baba voice..

She wipe her tear n ask baba..what do mean baba??

I'm just telling u truth, future me bhi tu use uske pyar se nahi bacha pae gi baba said to girl

This time it will not happen baba chahe kuch bhi hojae me use bacha kar rahugi use..girl side with diterminly

Fakir baba smile smally n said chahe kuch bhi karle nahi rok pavogi use barbad hone se...n baba left from there

Girl shook his head n said no..this time not...n she left from their..

In Khurana mansion

After Aanie left Maan went near his cupboard and took out other box. He open that box n crase the pendent where his and her name is written.

He kiss the pendent n softly mumbled sorry and a lone tear escape from his eyes

Before he loss himself he put the box inside the drower n left toward his balcony.

But the whole seen not go unnoticed by aanie who came to call him for breakfast

Aanie (pov) : What is bhai hiding in his cupboard and their is tear on bhai face if I'm not wrong. I have to find out what he is hiding buc whatever it is bhai is change he never showed his affection toward us . He is not a person who is able to express himself but today he express his affection toward me.

(It is not that maan doesn't love his family. He love them from his bottom on heart but he is fail to express him self . He is man of words, he don't know àbout feelings after his parents left him n seeing this cruel world. But someone blossom feelings inside his heart. He know how to show his love , care , toward his family and its all because of her.

But the person who made this stone a heart, do not know where is she .)

She left from there guve his bhai a space and making a note in his mind that she will find out everything.

Precap: Same

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Wonderful update dear

I think maan cheated the girl lil sister

And now feeling guilty

Is she geet Or someone else

Watting for update dear

Pls update soon

 Y maan in guilty and whom maan loved and left 

  Girl praying fr her little sister is this is same girl whom maan is missing and having tear fr her 

 Annie saw him putting box in cupboard and want to know the reason

Nice update..

Continue soon..

thanks for the pm and update

hope you are well

Part 2

splendid update... brilliantly written

what was Maan searching for?

of cos Annie was shocked seeing Maan smiling

was Maan thinking about Geet?

but from the character sketch Maan and Sameera are together

how did Maan and Geet meet? 

adore the past moments 

seems like he did not love Geet

he realises now....

eager to know his past

well Maan did not forget Annie's bday

wonderful moments between them

liked how he assures her

I think that the girl doing prayers is Naintara

the baba tells her she cannot save Geet from what is meant to happen

Naintara is determined to save her

did Maan hurt Geet?

where is Geet now?

Maan kisses the pendant and says sorry and is in tears

Annie's curiosity is understandable

she wants to know who changed Maan

hope she finds Geet

Intriguing precap

please update asap

thanks 

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very emotional 

Part 2 

Curious Update

There has been a girl with Maan that spoke about love 

as if she was in love with Maan and also felt that he too loved her 

but seems like he had no feelings of love 

than there is a girl probably the elder sister praying for the safety of her younger sister

are the girls Sameera and Geet  ? 

and who is the person that Maan holds a pendent and he also kissed it 

as if he misses that person and loves that person 

I'm so confused 

Annie's birthday is the same day of her parents death anniversary 

however Maan showed her some affection but now she wants to find out

what happened to him and what is he hiding 

hi....hope you are well?

will you be posting Part 3?

thank you