MG:FF- LOVE..REVENGE.......REGRET!!! Part 5 PG 15 - Page 4

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Posted: 4 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: aparna3011

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very emotinal n painful update

maan lost his parents n become very hard n emotionless person

dadi asking sorry from maan's parents that she not able to protect maan's smile after them


Thank you 😊

Soon u will see changed maan

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Posted: 4 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: taahir004

Thanks for PM


Part 1


Emotional Start


Maan's parents are no more but the saddest part is

that he lost himself

he no longer believes in emotions as he thinks it makes a person weak

Maan has brought the business to a top level

and he has also become cunning in business

Dadima feels guilty as Maan lost his innocence protecting the family

and securing the business



Precap is Interesting


Maan gathering information about a girl


waiting to see if its Geet or someone else

Thank you 😊

Soon u will know whome he is searching dear

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Posted: 4 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: waterlotus.19

Serious yet truthful update!


Interesting precap!

Do update soon!


Thank you 😊

I will dear

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Posted: 4 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi..... any update this weekend?


Sorry dear not able to update buc im at my parents place so want to only spend some time with them

But yes net week i will update

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Posted: 4 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

welcome

are you updating?


Sorry next I will update dear

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Posted: 4 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Maanheart


Sorry dear not able to update buc im at my parents place so want to only spend some time with them

But yes net week i will update


ok... no problem.... enjoy! thanks

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Posted: 4 years ago
#37

Nice

maan made him self tough bz of his siblings and dadi but he is emotional from inside he miss his parent's and fr rest of family he show him self strong but for other he is hardcore

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Posted: 4 years ago
#38

hi, can we expect an update this weekend?

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Posted: 4 years ago
#39

great looking forward to the updates!! 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
#40

Thanks to all for ur lovely comments n likes hope i get more likes n comment for my ff .




Part 2



After finishing pooja a girl went tiptoes maan's room. She look for him everywhere n she spot him near his cupboard. Where he is searching something . She saw him lil tensed, which is total opposite to his natural . She smile knowing its only his right to make everyone tensed. She shook his head n call him softly bhai..!!


He stop n turn to see her standing near the door. He give her small smile.


She blink her eyes or slightly pinch herself , “did she see him smiling?”


Yes Aanie? Maan ask her searching something again in cupboard.


Wo bhai…she stop for a min n think” did bhai forget”? A sadness cripe in her face


Yes Aanie I’m listing maan said finding his thing


Hmmm….Aanie just mumbled she didn’t get word to say him or to remind him about todays day


When maan didn’t hear anything , he turned n see her lil scared


Seeing her scared maan lost remembering her words


(Show ur affection to ur loveone. Make them feel u love them rather then making them scared.


U don’t scare of me maan asked the girl sternly


Girl give him sweet smile pinching his nose n say no


Maan lifted his brown


because I know you love me and in love there is no fear girl said giving a quick pick on his lips


Maan narrow his eyes n said to himself “love my foot".!!)


He smile sadly knowing today’s “what she meant"?

He went near her hold her hand n make her sit on his bed n say with loving as he forward a big box toward aanie


Happy Birthday bachaa…!!!!n he kiss her forehead


A tear formed aanie eyes ,she took a box n hug him saying thank you..


I thought u forgot my birthday aanie said with teary eyes but the small smile present in her face


“How can I”? maan broke the hug and said wiping her tear from corner of her eyes


I know today is the same day we lost our parents which is black day for us he said clenching his fist


And also my birthday...aanie said as tear roll down from her eyes


Hmm…. he just get up n turn n watch his parents big portrait which is hanging in front of his bed


But it is also a special day when god send a beautiful angel for us he said with small smile which didn’t go unnoticed by aanie…


Maan turn n saw a bright smile on aanie face...Love u bhai aanie said hugging his bhai..


In Golden temple a girl is doing ardas for her mother soul in peace n for her lil sister long life.


After praying she went out side the temple n feed poor people n distribute blankets to them after that she went to darga


She do there sajda n tie a thread their.


She sit outside for sometime when she saw a small girl n his mother doing sajda


A tear drop fro her eyes remembering her mother.. y u left us maa girl said with teary eyes


I'm not a good maa i didn't fulfill my responsibility maa.. I'm failed...maa.. I'm failed.. maa use nahi baja saki barbad hone se ma , mai nahi protect kar saki use maa.. I'm failed maa... a girl said looking up the sky with teary eyes.


Or nahi tu use aage bacha paegi barbad hone se girl look at in front of her hearing fakir baba voice..


She wipe her tear n ask baba..what do mean baba??


I'm just telling u truth, future me bhi tu use uske pyar se nahi bacha pae gi baba said to girl


This time it will not happen baba chahe kuch bhi hojae me use bacha kar rahugi use..girl side with diterminly


Fakir baba smile smally n said chahe kuch bhi karle nahi rok pavogi use barbad hone se...n baba left from there


Girl shook his head n said no..this time not...n she left from their..


In Khurana mansion


After Aanie left Maan went near his cupboard and took out other box. He open that box n crase the pendent where his and her name is written.


He kiss the pendent n softly mumbled sorry and a lone tear escape from his eyes


Before he loss himself he put the box inside the drower n left toward his balcony.


But the whole seen not go unnoticed by aanie who came to call him for breakfast


Aanie (pov) : What is bhai hiding in his cupboard and their is tear on bhai face if I'm not wrong. I have to find out what he is hiding buc whatever it is bhai is change he never showed his affection toward us . He is not a person who is able to express himself but today he express his affection toward me.


(It is not that maan doesn't love his family. He love them from his bottom on heart but he is fail to express him self . He is man of words, he don't know àbout feelings after his parents left him n seeing this cruel world. But someone blossom feelings inside his heart. He know how to show his love , care , toward his family and its all because of her.


But the person who made this stone a heart, do not know where is she .)


She left from there guve his bhai a space and making a note in his mind that she will find out everything.


Precap: Same


Sorry for grammatic mistake. Do like n comment .

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