Aasman se pare- a Sai Joshi SS chap 15 page 57 - Page 10

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Oh this was so beautiful!! So its virats enemy attacking Sai to try to make him weak....very nicely written update. Look forward to more.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: ssoujanya

Very nice.....

Interesting.....

So the reason behind Virat not shedding tears is his Vaada to Sai..... but still what happened to her is mystery...

I have doubt...why did you mention this story as Sai Joshi FF????

Excited for next part.... please give soon..

thankyou❤️

Cheekukabeej ki story and no mystery? Is it possible?😆

Because it is her story❤️

Will surely do🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: Nja91

Oh this was so beautiful!! So its virats enemy attacking Sai to try to make him weak....very nicely written update. Look forward to more.

bold: awww. Thankyou❤️❤️

Thankyou for this beautiful comment.

Will surely update soon🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
#94

Oh my God!

The strength of emotions you portrayed is incredible. The last lines took my breath away!

Very interested in seeing the undercurrents develop. The family dynamics look very intriguing!

Do tag me when you update, please!

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Posted: 5 years ago
#95

Update 3 and 4..

Both were fantastically written...

So Viru isn't crying because his promise to her... Aww😭

Here he is not crying coz of vaada and in ghum he is crying because of that stupid vaada🤣

Cheeku's story without mystery.... Impossible😳

Excellent!!👍🏼

Who's that man !??

Excited about next update ....

Please continue soon💜😃

Happy writing👍🏼

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Posted: 5 years ago
#96

Aww, vadha boy of sai dominated Gopi bahu's brother in him... I feel horrible for virat yaar... Bechara... And someone slit her neck, padake he Mera haath slip hogaye... I can seriously understand what virat is going through...story is getting interesting day by day... Now I am giving dumki u better update quickly😡😡 sorry sorry just kidding🤣🤣

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Posted: 5 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: AparnaRenu

Oh my God!

The strength of emotions you portrayed is incredible. The last lines took my breath away!

Very interested in seeing the undercurrents develop. The family dynamics look very intriguing!

Do tag me when you update, please!

aww. What an encouraging and kind comment❤️❤️

Thankyou so much🤗

I'll do.

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Posted: 5 years ago
#98
Thanks❤️
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Posted: 5 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: sairat07

Update 3 and 4..

Both were fantastically written...

Thankyou so much

So Viru isn't crying because his promise to her... Aww😭

Here he is not crying coz of vaada and in ghum he is crying because of that stupid vaada🤣

So true🤣

Cheeku's story without mystery.... Impossible😳

Yup❤️

Excellent!!👍🏼

Who's that man !??

Jagtap😆

Excited about next update ....

Please continue soon💜😃

Happy writing👍🏼

thankyou so much🤗
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Saichintalli

Aww, vadha boy of sai dominated Gopi bahu's brother in him...


Arre don't compare him to Gopi vau yaar. I hated how she used to speak, "maaaaanjeeee, maaaaiiiiiine bartan dhooooo liyeeeeee😳

Meanwhile I used to be like


I feel horrible for virat yaar... Bechara... And someone slit her neck, padake he Mera haath slip hogaye... I can seriously understand what virat is going through...story is getting interesting day by day... Now I am giving dumki u better update quickly😡😡


Thankyou. Omg. Someone save me. Virat. No. Neil. Come save your precious little cute, Cheeku ka beej.


sorry sorry just kidding🤣🤣


Phew, Neil, no need to come. She was kidd..., No I mean come fast. Come fast😳😆


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