RaghVi OS - And it starts *updated* - Page 2

Originally posted by: ReemShah

That was an unpredictable ending and quite shocking especially the last line

and how did Pallavi not manage to see the blood while she was holding him---he hid his pain from Pallavi perfectly well behind the smile

Although I would love to read a continuation on what happened---do write it if you wish.

But this os was cute and your version of their life post separation is really good

Not sure if it came in properly or not but I tried to reason that out in writing itself. I myself hate loopholes. Just try a read once again or else bad writing maybe.

Thnx. Severe time issues. Thats y restricted it to OS.

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

Now somethings need to be open ended right? So can't answer that.

Thnx a lot.

Originally posted by: Mihika

Arey...no. I wasn't asking anything here ... I interpreted that....you have done a great job as writer👏

My bad. thnx.

You are an all-rounder, wonderful VMs and beautiful writing👏

Thanks for the open ending, it gives us reader to imagine our kind of ending.👍🏼

Thanks for the PM😊

Originally posted by: ShrutikaSwaRon

You are an all-rounder, wonderful VMs and beautiful writing👏

Thanks for the open ending, it gives us reader to imagine our kind of ending.👍🏼

Thanks for the PM😊

Thoda sa zyada ho gaya. Anyways Thanks.

Yes. Thats the reason I like open endings.

Originally posted by: lateuser1234

Thoda sa zyada ho gaya. Anyways Thanks.

Yes. Thats the reason I like open endings.

I don't think, forum people will agree with.

If possible do read the heartbroken heartbreaker from Wattpad, superb writing and and the best open ending.

Originally posted by: ShrutikaSwaRon

I don't think, forum people will agree with.

If possible do read the heartbroken heartbreaker from Wattpad, superb writing and and the best open ending.

Will try to get my hands on that for my next travel.

It is awesome loved it ❤️🤗

But ending what's happened to Raghav are you going to continue it

Originally posted by: RAGHVIFAM

It is awesome loved it ❤️🤗

But ending what's happened to Raghav are you going to continue it

No. I won't continue. And regarding what happened to Raghav. This happened.

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Something died that day

But they said nothing was killed

No mourning ,no cries

Nothing unusual which truth defies

The smile is as big as always

The laugh is the real one

Still it wasn’t pondered

Never that laugh have the pure send off no one wondered

Shatters never shelter have known it for too long

Why that off doesn’t kept it to where it belong

But it ends ,was always meant to be

Something was lost which keeps the beats

It laughed a lot It preached

but don’t expect to be real Cause reality is screeched

Fakeness is what everyone wants

So that is what they get

It have to carry each and every ounce of Its regret

Surprised to see no one awestruck and That’s anyways good

cause that what It wanted as not they but It was a fool

Then again what would have surprised was never seen

As It knew something died that day

But everyone believed that nothing was killed

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Originally posted by: lateuser1234

No. I won't continue. And regarding what happened to Raghav. This happened.

-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-

Something died that day

But they said nothing was killed

No mourning ,no cries

Nothing unusual which truth defies

The smile is as big as always

The laugh is the real one

Still it wasn’t pondered

Never that laugh have the pure send off no one wondered

Shatters never shelter have known it for too long

Why that off doesn’t kept it to where it belong

But it ends ,was always meant to be

Something was lost which keeps the beats

It laughed a lot It preached

but don’t expect to be real Cause reality is screeched

Fakeness is what everyone wants

So that is what they get

It have to carry each and every ounce of Its regret

Surprised to see no one awestruck and That’s anyways good

cause that what It wanted as not they but It was a fool

Then again what would have surprised was never seen

As It knew something died that day

But everyone believed that nothing was killed

-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x--x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-x-