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Sheena

@Sheena_Row

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Posted: 17 years ago

#11

Very nice...new beginnings, we always look forward to them because they are so hope filled, always looking for a rainbow on the horizon - I only wish that the ending are meaningful too!

When someone dies, we always think, he/she had a fulfilling life, they closed all the loops - in JB's case, there is no new beginning until they tie all the loose ends and move on to their new life!

Great job, Shruti!
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Sanam

@sanam84

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Posted: 17 years ago

#12

Shrut read it...n u know na kabhi kabhi i dont understand wot u sayin...but sumhow understand 😆 confused mat ho yaar...

it was good...a new beginning...acha hai...but i wud also hope no couple has to go thru that....when one gets married it sud be the begining...and then stay together till the end...i mean jhagde hongen but it sud not escalte where u need to make a new begining...Hai na...u get wot i am sayin...

loved the way u potrayed JW's feeling of guilt n regret...then Bani's forgivness...and mostly the pain of loosing their kids 👏 👏

good work Shrut...keep them comin

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Shruti Chopra

@shrutichopra

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Posted: 17 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: sanam84

Shrut read it...n u know na kabhi kabhi i dont understand wot u sayin...but sumhow understand 😆 confused mat ho yaar...

Obviously I understand this trait of not understanding but still understanding it completely... we both have it remember😉

Ab tu confused mat ho😆

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Vishakha_Sakhi

@Vishakha_Sakhi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#14

Hi Shruti Di, beautifully written SS. 👏 I love the way you took JW down from his "pedestal of perfection" and prortayed him as a human being!
I hope you write more soon.

P.S If you do ever decide to write books I'll surely buy 'em and I guess so would all those who read and replied! 😉

V...

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sukhjinder kaur

@siumi

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Posted: 17 years ago

#15

Hey Shruti,
Again a wonderful ff, really enjoyed it and I loved it's ending, A new beginning of a new life. 😊 😊
Waise app apna FF Life, kab post karahi hai??

For your ss 👏
Take care. 😃

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RANJANA_RRJ

@RANJANA_RRJ

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Posted: 17 years ago

#16

Hey Shruti,
I loved the ss. It's really beautiful and you showed the human JW and BW perfectly!!

Thank you for making us dream about a new beginning for our favorite jodi!

Bye
Ranjana

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nikita28

@nikita28

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Posted: 17 years ago

#17

Hiya,

A very beautiful short story.

Nikita

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