Shivi Drabbles: Wistful Tales-Ch 1/ Pg 3 [06/06/2021] - Page 6

Originally posted by: RainbowChaser

Such a classic piece! The language is beautiful ❤️

Merci 🤗

Originally posted by: NephilimByHeart

Loved it... ❤❤write next part soon.

My favourite scent is when you fry malpuaas ☺☺reminds me of my childhood when every special ocassion was celebrated with it.

Thank you so much 🤗

I shall try to write, maybe by next weekend when I have free time.

Malpuaas... Um mm those sound yummy. Sugared malpuas fried in delectable ghee ❤️Best scent ever. Thank you for sharing 🤗

Originally posted by: bhavna101

This was really beautiful and so very unique.

It was an interesting piece and I loved reading it.

Eagerly waiting for the next one now.

Thanks for sharing your feedback. I will only update once you update your stories 😆🤗

Originally posted by: kitm

Loved it ❤️♥️...... beautifully written 😍😍

Waiting for next 😊😊

Thank you 🤗

Will try update over the weekend.

Originally posted by: CheerlessIM

Amazing part 💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯

Loved the update ❤

Cont soon

Ye kahani hamari bhi to ho skti thi 💯💯💯💯🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩

Thank you so much for the appreciation 🤗

Well, this series will have a lot of yearning moments from Shiva . Hope you like them.

Originally posted by: Transference

Thanks for sharing your feedback. I will only update once you update your stories 😆🤗

I am going to update soon

So be ready😆😉

I'm loving it❤️

Kya he bolun ab toh.. Bas update dena jaldi jaldi🤍

Omg omg 😍😍😍😍 what was that magic!! I went through all her emotions and all those scents whilst reading this... I loved the portrayal of her complex feelings. Their conversation was very insightful almost as though going through their chaotic past, present and future!!

I have no words...

Going to go read it again and can't wait for the next piece!!

This was lovey ❤️ 🤗

The funny thing is I have zero sense of smell- so I totally cannot relate to Raavi 🤣 When I got pregnant, my nose suddenly started working in overdrive , and i was completely overwhelmed. I was nauseous my entire pregnancy, but thankfully my super smelling power left me after I popped out my little one. So I really don’t have memories associated with smell.

But your words were enough to weave magic I was completely transported to the terrace. The imagery was very detailed and helped create a vision for me, even if it was not strongly tied to the smell.

And oh the angst and the what-ifs between Shiva and Raavi. These concepts get properly explored only in FF. I have rarely seen ITV do justice to such charged and complicated emotions.

Kudos to your writing. I am waiting for the next one

Originally posted by: funny_fubar

This was lovey ❤️ 🤗

The funny thing is I have zero sense of smell- so I totally cannot relate to Raavi 🤣 When I got pregnant, my nose suddenly started working in overdrive , and i was completely overwhelmed. I was nauseous my entire pregnancy, but thankfully my super smelling power left me after I popped out my little one. So I really don’t have memories associated with smell.

But your words were enough to weave magic I was completely transported to the terrace. The imagery was very detailed and helped create a vision for me, even if it was not strongly tied to the smell.

And oh the angst and the what-ifs between Shiva and Raavi. These concepts get properly explored only in FF. I have rarely seen ITV do justice to such charged and complicated emotions.

Kudos to your writing. I am waiting for the next one

@bold..same goes for me. I do associate some things with smell though 😊😊