ShiVi SS- Ulajh kar tujhse- Part 6 pg 28(28.9.21)

The uneasiness he feels, the pangs in his heart, every emotion is described so effortlessly. Super excited for this one to unfold ! ❤️

ohh that is so intresting❤️... update soon

yes! I was waiting for you to come out with something new and you did with such a bang

a bit confused about what shiva is doing & thinking but this is just the prologue so I'm sure my doubts will be cleared as the story progresses 😆

wondering what his decision is?

update soon 🤗

Such a beautiful start, VP!

Emotional but Interesting 😍

Eagerly waiting for next update❤️

You are such an amazing writer that reading this you can connect with the characters' emotions so well!

Really looking forward to reading more 🤗

This is interesting....

Waiting for more of this..

Not feeling good about this story for now... what decision is Shiva making🥱

Waiting to read the first Chapter

Wow..you started something and this is mysterious with Shiva going away ..Raavi has not realised but shiva seems to have taken a painful decision..knowing you this would have an tornado of emotions ..jo karna please ending happy de dena

Hello, I am your ardent fan. From the time I have read Mine, you have my attention and my heart. I love reading all the writers in this forum, they sometimes have the most beautiful ideas, mind-blowing imagination and the naughtiest thoughts. But you my dear...you write poetry in prose. Every emotion captured in the most beautiful words. I do know how many time I am read Mine and your other works, but each time I read they create a havoc in my senses and stir my heart. So I wanted to dedicate this to you and thanks for writing...

Tumhare har shabadh mein bayan ehsaas

Saanson ka thaam leti aur dhadkan ko theej kar deeti

Khwaish ki kuch aur waqt un ehsaason mein doobein rehna

Bechaini mein khushi aur khushi mein bechaini ka ehsas delati

Ankhon mein gum aur hotho mein muskan lati

Bar bar har bar, jab hi kuch naya padhoon, mujhe tumhare thodsa aur hain Ghulam banati.

P.S.I hope not to have creeped you out...🤭😁🤭🤗