ShiVi OS: Putting the Pieces Together - Page 7

Originally posted by: emah04

Brilliant OS…

So beautifully written

if you can please continue…I would at least love to see how Raavi gets back at Rishita…

Thank you! ❤️

I will continue once I get some ideas 😆

Originally posted by: Foxii

Amazing ❤️

Shiva Raavi ke liye Sabkoo Jawaab dega...

They have given eachother the Haq❤️

Thank you for writing this

thank you so much! ❤️

Originally posted by: maanmeet1

loved the conversation......it was beautiful.........

thank you! ❤️

Originally posted by: MeDHellsAngel

Dil jeet lia yar tumne.

Sach mein. Itni pyari OS haye

Sabse acha mujhe laga jo Raavi ne dhara ke or apne rights ka bola. Loved it.

Amazingly beautiful❤️

Thank you so much for such a beautiful comment! I'm so glad you loved it❤️

Originally posted by: kitm

Very sweet and beautiful 😍😍😍

Loved shivi conversation 🥰🥰🥰 much needed ❤️❤️

thank you! ❤️

Originally posted by: bhavna101

This was simply amazing!⭐️🤗

I so wish something like this had happened in the show instead of all that stupid drama we are getting🤪

ShiVi conversation was beautiful, this shows that they need to communicate and express themselves instead of hurting on the inside, alone.

Raavi's nightmares were😭 and I'm glad that Shiva listened to her.

I am so tired today that I am just blabbing and not making any sense while writing this comment but please understand that I really enjoyed reading this one🤗

Thank you so much, Bhavna! ❤️

I'm wishing for some meaningful conversations between ShiVi too.. hopefully soon. We just need these writers to turn their attention away from DevTa and Dhara for a change 🤪

Originally posted by: Annabethchase

Absolutely love this!!!

thank you! ❤️

Originally posted by: CarpediemRose

Aaliya sweetie, this Os took my soul away. How passionate our ShiVi is in this Os.

Awesome post dr!!
just ethereal darling

I felt so into the Os that I couldn’t get out of it

Sirf iss OS ke escape world mein hain, baar aane mein mantoh bilkul nahi.
amazing

Do write more

Much love

Jen

Jen 🤗

Thank you so much for such a beautiful comment! I'm so glad you loved this one ❤️

I just hope we get good ShiVi scenes in the show too soon

Originally posted by: Mountains_Lakes

This has my whole heart!❤️ Literally every single thing I wanted to see. The way Raavi took care of his wounds. I'm sure Shiva must be aware. I am going to believe this happened in the show too because Krish had way more bruises and Shiva's seemed to have healed.

And then the nightmare and how he took care of her. I loved how you handled the manhandling part as well as deeper wound in her heart for the beizzati they had to suffer at hands of Dhara. And how well she put it. Loved how she made him see her pov. Especially with comparison to GauRa's relationship to show different perspective. Their conversation was so mature. And the fact that he understood that though he may not care, as his wife, she cares and her respect is tied to his respect. It's not seperate. Soon, this Teri aur Meri izzat will become humari izzat.

And loved how you used Huq. It was the subtle theme of this OS, and I loved it. The Huq with which she applies ointment, the Huq with which he calls her name and pulls her close to him and convinces her to open up about the nightmares, the Huq with which she asks his permission to speak her mind, the Huq with which he draws boundries for her impending actions in teaching every family members, and finally all the huqs that he gives her as his wife!

I absolutely loved it. I know you said you aren't sure of a sequel, but pretty please write one to this! Desperately need it to get through the weekend. And yes, thanks for giving us this! :)

Thank you so much for such a beautiful comment! 🤗

And thank you for recognizing the theme of the OS being the 'haq' that they have/wanted on each other ❤️

I will continue as soon I get some ideas 😆, not sure I can get it done this weekend though!

Amazing os 💯💯💯💯💯🤩🤩🤩🤩