ShiVi OS: Putting the Pieces Together - Page 4

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Posted: 4 years ago
#31

This was simply amazing!⭐️🤗

I so wish something like this had happened in the show instead of all that stupid drama we are getting🤪

ShiVi conversation was beautiful, this shows that they need to communicate and express themselves instead of hurting on the inside, alone.

Raavi's nightmares were😭 and I'm glad that Shiva listened to her.

I am so tired today that I am just blabbing and not making any sense while writing this comment but please understand that I really enjoyed reading this one🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#32

Absolutely love this!!!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#33

Aaliya sweetie, this Os took my soul away. How passionate our ShiVi is in this Os.

Awesome post dr!!
just ethereal darling

I felt so into the Os that I couldn’t get out of it

Sirf iss OS ke escape world mein hain, baar aane mein mantoh bilkul nahi.
amazing

Do write more

Much love

Jen

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Posted: 4 years ago
#34

This has my whole heart!❤️ Literally every single thing I wanted to see. The way Raavi took care of his wounds. I'm sure Shiva must be aware. I am going to believe this happened in the show too because Krish had way more bruises and Shiva's seemed to have healed.


And then the nightmare and how he took care of her. I loved how you handled the manhandling part as well as deeper wound in her heart for the beizzati they had to suffer at hands of Dhara. And how well she put it. Loved how she made him see her pov. Especially with comparison to GauRa's relationship to show different perspective. Their conversation was so mature. And the fact that he understood that though he may not care, as his wife, she cares and her respect is tied to his respect. It's not seperate. Soon, this Teri aur Meri izzat will become humari izzat.


And loved how you used Huq. It was the subtle theme of this OS, and I loved it. The Huq with which she applies ointment, the Huq with which he calls her name and pulls her close to him and convinces her to open up about the nightmares, the Huq with which she asks his permission to speak her mind, the Huq with which he draws boundries for her impending actions in teaching every family members, and finally all the huqs that he gives her as his wife!


I absolutely loved it. I know you said you aren't sure of a sequel, but pretty please write one to this! Desperately need it to get through the weekend. And yes, thanks for giving us this! :)

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Posted: 4 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: vivpri

Loved reading this ❤️

thank you! ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: raindropsroses

Wowwwwwwww ❤️

I had a huge smile on my face from the start till the end of this! ♥️

Loved how much Raavi cared about Shiva.
And then when she huffs and tries to go back to sleep, I love how Shiva immediately asked her to talk to him. ♥️♥️♥️
And then the way Raavi explains and asks for her Haq 💯♥️
Beautiful OS!

Thank you so much! ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Transference

This is so beautiful ❤️

I had tears in my eyes reading this ☺️

That's a huge compliment, thank you! ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Scarysea

I loved this so much ..thank you for writing this ..I loves Raavi's care and I so wanted a nightmare scene ..itna kuch hua uske saath yaar..and that conversation was gold ..mai tujhe saare haq deta hu

Thank you so much! ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: ValleyOfPeace

Kuch likhne ke liye thank you🤣🤣🤣

Aaj ke episode ke baad jitne ffs Os Ss mile kam hain.

It was a very beautiful and sweet OS. Do continue and tell how she band bajaoing everyone!

Thank you! ❤️

I will try to continue once I get some ideas 😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: barbieflora

This is what we needed! Thank you❤️

Thank you! ❤️

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