RaghVi- Eternally Forever|TS-Tay Hai|Last Part, Page-14 - Page 7

Originally posted by: rikara94

Yup he did right but deep down he wanted to stop...

Next part will be her Pov as this one was his🤪

Yup i will try to post..but iss bar response acha nahi mil raha😭

Alag post kar

Itne topics hai , ek hi thread pe track rakhna mushkil hai karna 😵😂

Use this thread as index ❤️

But you write so well ❤️

I’d want you to continue writing on Raghvi

This was so beautifully written 🥺❤️

I am waiting for next part

Raghav is love 💗 🥺

Item thoda aaj k scene jaisa laga toh mujhe Aur bura laga raghav k liye 🤣😭😭

Want to see pallavi’s realisation now ❤️

Originally posted by: I-Got-You

Waiting for for next update

Raghav is ❤️ here

Thank you so much❤️

I will post next part soon👍🏼

Originally posted by: ImHemangi

plz update soon i can't bear this😭😭

😆

Yup I will post next part maybe tomorrow...

Thanks for reading👍🏼

Originally posted by: Neha054

👍👏

CVS steal this 😂

On a serious note , well written . I would like this to happen . After this I like the idea of her missing him , unable to adjust and live with Deshmukhs anymore and leave for Kolhapur , where he goes to bring her back

I so wish they steal this🤣

Thank you so much Neha...i'm so glad that you liked it🤗

Jo tune likha woh yahan toh nahi hoga but han show mein ho toh maza ayega

Originally posted by: ReemShah

Raghav got a panic attack--i hope someone arrives and helps him

I am so proud of Raghav's decision---he has fulfilled his promise

I can't bear the wait for the next update Jyoti so please post it soon

And this part was written so well👍🏼

Don't worry someone will reach on time and help him🤪

Han he didn't stop her...as he wanted to give her back all the things he had snatched👍🏼 but at the same time he is missing her😭

Thank you so much...i'm so glad that you liked it... And don't worry i will post next part maybe tomorrow👍🏼

Originally posted by: Amnnaa

Well written 👏. You conveyed his emotions and inner turmoil very smoothly. Can't wait to see what's in store for them. Please continue soon ❤️

Thank you so much ❤️ i'm so glad that you liked it🤗

About next...ammm...what about her pov?🤪

Yup i will post next part tomorrow..stay tuned👍🏼

Originally posted by: AppleOfEye

Ye kya kiya tune🙁 Cliffhanger pe kyu chod diya humko🥺 Hayee mera Raghav❤️❤️ Jaane diya Pallu ko❤️ Ab wapas kaise le aata hai biwi ko wo padhna hai😍 Jaldi jaldi update karna😎

I just loveee cliffhanger yar😆

Or mujhe chodna pdha kyunki uske aage mujhe Pallavi ka pov likhna tha🤪

Anyways i will update today itself...stay tuned👍🏼

Originally posted by: Mihika

I could feel his pain, his hesitation and most of all his love for her.

Beautiful...the emotions have come out really well the way you write.

Loved it.❤️

Your words literally made me smile🤗

Thank you so much...i'm glad that you liked it😳

I will update today... stay tuned👍🏼

Originally posted by: I-Got-You

Double post ho gaya comment 😆

Mujhe laga maine comment nahi kiya after reading

But kiya tha 🤣

Awwe how sweet🤣 i just loved your mistake🤪