RaghVi- Eternally Forever|TS-Tay Hai|Last Part, Page-14 - Page 6

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CVS steal this 😂

On a serious note , well written . I would like this to happen . After this I like the idea of her missing him , unable to adjust and live with Deshmukhs anymore and leave for Kolhapur , where he goes to bring her back

Raghav got a panic attack--i hope someone arrives and helps him

I am so proud of Raghav's decision---he has fulfilled his promise

I can't bear the wait for the next update Jyoti so please post it soon

And this part was written so well👍🏼

Well written 👏. You conveyed his emotions and inner turmoil very smoothly. Can't wait to see what's in store for them. Please continue soon ❤️

Originally posted by: Shri_12

He let her go and did the right thing. Now waiting for her to come back to her home, to him.

Great start, waiting for more. Update soon 🤗

Yup he did right but deep down he wanted to stop...

Next part will be her Pov as this one was his🤪

Yup i will try to post..but iss bar response acha nahi mil raha😭

Originally posted by: rikara94

Yup he did right but deep down he wanted to stop...

Next part will be her Pov as this one was his🤪

Yup i will try to post..but iss bar response acha nahi mil raha😭

Keep posting dear. Responses will come. Also I think TS should be done on separate threads. Do post your link in EDT and ATs.

Originally posted by: Shri_12

Keep posting dear. Responses will come. Also I think TS should be done on separate threads. Do post your link in EDT and ATs.

No no...I made this thread as a series of one or two shots...and named it Eternally Forever...

Whenever i will write, will post in this thread only

Originally posted by: I-Got-You

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Yeh kya hai behan?🤪

I could feel his pain, his hesitation and most of all his love for her.

Beautiful...the emotions have come out really well the way you write.

Loved it.❤️

Originally posted by: rikara94

Yeh kya hai behan?🤪

Double post ho gaya comment 😆

Mujhe laga maine comment nahi kiya after reading

But kiya tha 🤣