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Posted: 4 years ago
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RaghVi OS : Bheegi Bheegi

"yeh kahan gaya Raghav" said Pallavi, who was waiting for Raghav .

"Bas yeh cake Ghamandi Rao ko pasand aa jaaye. Par yeh aadmi ka koi baroosa nahi. Kabhi kabhi ache mood mai rehtha hai. Kabhi ghuse mai rehta hai. Hope usse yeh cake pasand aa jaaaye"

She saw Raghav staggering at the entrance. Raghav saw the cake and said "yeh cake.. ab yeh cake kisliye.. mere liye toh nahi hoga.. mujhe toh koi pasand nahi karta"

"Raghav .. Raghav .. sambalo"

"Mai kyun sambalun.. mai Raghav Rao hun"

He threw his coat on the cake and said " yeh cake bhi mere liye nahi hai.. yeh biwi bhi mera nahi hai.. mera amma bhi meri nahi.. mera behen bhi mera nahi"

" Raghav yeh kya bakwaas kar rahe ho tum"

"Mai sach bol raha hoon. Koi mere saath nahi rehna chathe. " Pointing at Pallavi , he said " aur tum toh mujse nafrat karti ho na. Chalo jao mujhe chodkar"

He staggered back and said "kisi ko bhi mai pasand nahi. Toh kyun mere saath rehte ho. Jao sab mujhe chodkar jao sab"

He was about to fall when Pallavi rushed to him. He said "mai Raghav Rao hun maine kisse se help nahi li. Aur aage bhi nahi lunga.. mai akele tha.. mai akela rahunga... Kyunki Raghav Rao ko koi zaroorat nahi hai".

He took hold off her and said "jao yehan se . Tum toh ek maheene mai jaa rahi thi na.. jao na.. abhi jao.. mujhe koi nahi chahiye.. tum nahi jaongi.. toh mai jaatha hoon"

He took the coat to leave when the cake fell down and was destroyed. He saw it and said "ops, cake gira diya. Phir se meri galti hai. Pallavi maine tumhari cake bhi kharab kar di.. tumhari zindagi ki tarah.. mai ek chance bhi nahi deserve kartha na.."

Pallavi took hold off him and thought she had to get him concious. Raghav said "tum mujhe cho raha hai.. mujhe.."

Pallavi said "chup bilkul chup ab"

Raghav kept a finger on his lips n said "chup mai.. Raghav Rao chup nahi hotha.. chup karvatha hai"

"Itne nashe mai bhi iska ghamand nahi jaa raha"

She took him to the shower and pushed him under the shower head. She pulled on water tap. Raghav was suddenly hit with water.

Raghav shirked and said " Yeh Raghav Rao pe kon pani dal raha hai.. "

"Tum yehan raho"

Raghav pulled her "tum kahan jaa rahi hoo.. mujhe chodkar"

Pallavi looked into his eyes and saw raw pain. She never saw his eyes this closely before


bheegi bheegi si hai raaten

While she continued to stay in the shower looking at his eyes which showed pain of being lonely. She wanted to console him


bheegi bheegi yaaden

bheegi bheegi baaten

bheegi bheegi aankhon mein kaisi nami hai


He said in a pitiful tone "mai akela pad jaaunga. Mat jao mujhe chodkar... Mat jao.."


aa ha ha ha aa ha

aa ha ha ha aa ha


aa ha ha ha

sapnon ka saya palkon pe aya

He said "tumhe patha hai mera ek hi sapna hai. Bas mera bhi parivaar ho"


pal mein hasaya pal mein rulay


phir bhi yeh kaisi kami hai


aa ha ha ha aa ha

aa ha ha ha aa ha


aa ha ha ha

na jaane koi kaisi hai yeh zindagaani zindgaani

Pallavi looked at him and see his longing for his family. Raghav said "mai akela nahi rehna chahta .. Pallavi "

Raghav has a lone tear in his eyes. Pallavi extended her hand and wiped his tears


kahaani adhuri kahaani


na jaane koi kaisi hai yeh zindagaani zindgaani

kahaani adhuri kahaani


aadhi aadhi jaagi aadhi aadhi soyi

aankhen yeh teri toh lagta hai royi


As soon as he felt her warmth. He snuggled his face in her palm. Pallavi was about to remove her hand. When Raghav's face fell on her shoulder. She could feel the warmth of the tears from his eyes.


lekar ke naam hamara

my name in your heart


aa ha ha ha aa ha

aa ha ha ha aa ha


aa ha ha ha

rutha rutha rab chhuta chhuta sab

She took him to the room and made him sit on the chair near dressing table


toota toota dil tere bina ab


kaise ho jeena ganwara



aa ha ha ha aa ha

aa ha ha ha aa ha


aa ha ha ha

na jaane koi kaisi hai yeh zindagaani zindgaani

kahaani adhuri kahaani

na jaane koi kaisi hai yeh zindagaani zindgaani

kahaani adhuri kahaani


She took his towel and gave him the towel . When she was abt to take her. Raghav pulled her on his lap. Raghav said " tum bhi toh beegi ho"



bheegi bheegi si hai raaten

bheegi bheegi yaaden

bheegi bheegi baaten

bheegi bheegi aankhon mein kaisi nami hai

aa ha ha ha aa ha

aa ha ha ha aa ha

aa ha ha ha

na jaane koi kaisi hai yeh zindagaani zindgaani

kahaani adhuri kahaani

na jaane koi - 2 hamari adhuri kahani

na jaane koi yeh zindagaani zindgaani


He started wiping her hair gently. With his one hand securely holding Pallavi by waist . Raghav kept wiping her hair. And Pallavi didn't move as she didn't want to hurt him. Pallavi asked " aaj kya hua hua tum kyun itna upset ho"

When she turned for answer . Raghav popped his hand on her nape. Pallavi tried to move away from his hold. But he had strong hold on her. She saw her phone on the table.she took it and called Farhad and told him to come to the room.

Farhad came to the room and saw Pallavi sitting on Raghav's lap and his face covered by her nape. Pallavi said "Farhad , plz help karo. Mai hat nahi paa rahi hoon"

Farhad tried to wakeup Raghav but couldn't . So removed the hold of his hand gently. Farhad said "bhabhi mai anna ko sambal tha hoon. Aap jaakar rest karo"

Pallavi nodded and went away giving a final glance to Raghav

Morning, Pallavi went to Raghav with lemon water. Pallavi said "good morning"

Raghav grumpily got up at her voice and he had spillting head ache and saw himself naked. He asked "kya hua?"

Pallavi thought to tease him, "tum bolo kya hua hoga?"

"Pallavi mere kapde kahan hai.. aur hua kya"

Pallavi while acting shy, "tumhe yaad nahi kya?"

She sat near him. And said "tumhe sach mai yaad nahi"

Raghav smirked, and pinned her down. Raghav said "toh kal raat ka repeat demo kare hum dono.. kahin mujhe yaad aa gaya toh"

Pallavi blushed and said" Raghav.."

Raghav bent down near her face n blew air on her face making her hair on her face go away.

Pallavi became nervous and said "Raghav chodo mujhe"

"Kyun kal raat ko kiya tha.. toh aaj kyun nahi?"

"Raghav kuch nahi hua tha.. Farhad ne hi tumhara kapda badla tha..chodo mujhe ab"

Raghav lifted himself away from her n left her. She immediately ran away from him.

Raghav saw his naught wife running away and smirked. Raghav said to himself , " jo bhi ho meri biwi ke tarah koi itna cute nahi ho sakta "


The end ~


I felt the shower scene execution very short. And wasn't much liking that. So created my own version


BGM: bheegi bheegi raatein bheegi bheegi



Edited by christobelle - 4 years ago


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Posted: 4 years ago
#2

👏🥳🤪🤣😆🤗👍🏼😎😛😲😉😊☺️😳❤️😈😊👏🥳


Those emojis depict my current emotions after reading your OS


Loved it👍🏼

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Posted: 4 years ago
#3

Amazing 🥳❤️

Shower scene feels complete now ❤️


Morning after is 🥰 😍


Your OS-Es have such a domestic touch to them 😍🥰

It’s amazing ❤️


Keep writing ❤️✌️


Btw just a suggestion: Plz give some colour to lyrics so that they won’t be confused with OS text 😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
#4

Loved it. Ur version is just superb. Wish this had happened in the episode

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Posted: 4 years ago
#5

Same thoughts i was having after watching match awaited shower sence it could be more better

Thanks for this os you 🤗

Love it ❤️

Now I'm feeling happy 😊😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
#6

i agree it was short but den they might show it later.....

your version i loved

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Posted: 4 years ago
#7

Very cute OS Chill, really better than the scene today ... You really made me feel better after today's episode and also I really really love your song selection!

Great work ❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#8

This os is an amzing reecreation of today's scene--due to time crunch in the show--we can't see a longer version

Raghav here--🤣--confident and pinned her down(i thought he was naked)

drunk Raghav is super cute

but this was so lovely--and song was good too--made my day

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Posted: 4 years ago
#9

pause at start of scene in hotstar.... mute it. Play song in youtube and press play in hotstar. Song goes with the scene quite good.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#10

wow.... Fantabulous OS!!!

beautifully penned

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