ShaKhi Proposal New FF - Page 5

Originally posted by: desislive

AMAZING XOXO

Thank you... Btw are you the radio station? who had called people to sing?

Originally posted by: desislive

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Is there Miral or Scott on the other end? Hi I'm Vaidehi who joined you that day.... @Patilvaidehi on twitter... glad to have your here to read....

Originally posted by: VaidehiPatil

They both are walking on the unknown streets of Goa. The night is getting darker and cozy. The sky has no stars today but some scattered clouds here and there playing hide and seek with the moon. Slow breeze blowing Anokhi’s long hair. The leaves of the tree shaking. The coolness in the weather increases.

Shaurya notices something about Anokhi. It looked as if she was hungry. But so was he. Both silently walk and Shaurya breaks the ice.

Shaurya : Kya hua? Bhook lagi hai?

Anokhi : (Looking at him with a small face) Haan.. Par aapko kaise pata?

Shaurya : Tumhe kehne ki zaroorat nahi hai Anokhi tumhe dekh kar samajh jata hoon main ki tumhe kya chahiye. Wait a minute I have something for you.

Anokhi : (Laughing) Nahi… PS nahi..

Shaurya : (Laughing back and shies away) Haan… Wohi… Protein Bar…

Anokhi : (Giggling) Ek baat batao PS yeh Protein Bar jeb mein leke kaun ghumta hai…

Shaurya : (Shying again with a smile) Main…

They both were giggling over this protein bar bond they had and this time unlike the previous both of them shared it half.

Anokhi : (Looking at the wrapper) Yeh toh khatam ho gaya… Abhi?

Shaurya : Abhi… Abhi yaha se thoda aur chalne pe ek beach side restaurant hai waha chalte hai?

Anokhi : (Tired of walking) Aur kitni door hai?

Shaurya : Kya hua Miss Bhalla? Itni jaldi thak gayi?

Anokhi : (In a tired tone) Haan PS thoda sa.. Aur woh aaj maine heels bhi pehne hai na.. Adat nahi hai mujhe..Toh pair bhi dard kar rahe hai thode..

Shaurya takes her to the corner of the road and makes her sit on the milestone. He gets down to his knees and removes her sandals. Anokhi is shocked to see him doing this.

Anokhi : Arey yeh aap kya kar rahe hai PS. Mere pairon ko kyu hath laga rahe hai aap… Please uthiye na aisa acha thodi lagta hai. Koi dekhega toh kya soche ga..

Shaurya : Yehi sochega ki dekho kitna khayal rakhta hai apni Girlfriend ka.

Anokhi : (Surprised and Blushing) Girlfriend….

Shaurya : Haan… (Teasing) Kyu nahi ho?

Anokhi : Nahi..

Shaurya : (Teasing her again) Acha nahi ho

Anokhi : (Blushing) Nahi matlab hoon.

Shaurya : (Teasing again) Nahi matlab hoon… Hoon matlab nahi… Arey saaf saaf batao na…

Anokhi : (Looks at him in his eyes) PS… (Shies away) Kyu chhed rahe ho...

Shaurya : (Pretending) Main.. Main kaha chhed raha hoon. Maine toh kuch bhi nahi kiya…

Meanwhile he removes her sandals and carries them in his hands. Also he gives his Sneakers to her. Anokhi trying to fit in those sneakers.

Shaurya : Dekho main janta hoon thode bade hai… But abhi adjust kar lo…

Anokhi : Woh toh thik hai PS but aap kya pehenoge?

Shaurya : Main kuch nahi…

Anokhi : (Amused) Aap nange paon chaloge? Nahi PS aap apne sneakers pehen lijiye main nange paon chalungi. Mujhe toh waise hi aadat hai. Aap ko yeh sab karne ki zaroorat nahi hai main theek hoon.

Shaurya : Maine kaha na main nange paon chalunga tum nahi. Main janta hoon tumhe shayad aadat hogi but aaj ke baad nahi.

Anokhi is mesmerised by this gesture. Her eyes are filled with tears of joy. She was being loved by someone to this extent for the very first time. She was not only being taken care of but also being protected, loved and understood. But since her man was walking bare feet how could she walk? She takes off the sneakers and carries them in her hand. And now both are walking bare feet on the road. Shaurya sees her doing this act and gets emotional. Without letting her know he quickly wipes off the tear drop which has stood at the corner of his eye.

Shaurya : Yeh kya kar rahi ho tum? (Feeling obliged) Tumhe yeh karne ki zaroorat nahi hai…

Anokhi : (Looking into his eyes with gratitude and wet eyes) Zaroorat to aapko bhi nahi hai PS mere sandals aise hath mein leke chalne ki....

Shaurya : Meri baat alag hai, Anokhi. Tum aise mat karo lag jayega kuch pair mein.

Anokhi : Isse pehle bhi bohot se raaston pe kaaton ko dekha hai PS, tab toh main akeli thi. (Teary eyed) Aaj aap ho mujhe sambhalne ke liye.

Shaurya : (Looking at her with misty eyes) Main hamesha rahunga.. I promise.

And they were walking on a complete empty road having some soulful conversations. Trying to gather themselves and a part of each other that they carried within themselves. They reach the beachside restaurant. It is a beautiful place for a date night. The entrance of the restaurant has some beautiful lighting hanging on the trees. The interior is decorated in a typical Goan style. An orchestra band playing the Goan music.

They get in so see no table is empty despite the odd hour of 11 pm. Shaurya goes to the manager to arrange a table for two asking Anokhi to wait aside.

Shaurya : Excuse me. Ek table arrange ho sakta hai do logo ke liye?

Manager : Sorry sir abhi toh sab full hai dekho kahi bhi jagah nahi hai. Thoda time lagega.

Shaurya : Kitna time fir bhi?

Manager : Sir kamse kam aadha ghanta toh lagega.

Shaurya : Aadha ghanta? Time toh dekho. It's already late, aur tum aadha ghanta bol rahe ho. Dekho na kuch arrange ho sakta hai toh…

Manager : Sir nahi kar sakte kuch thoda wait to karna padega. Please sir try to understand, aaj ek party hai yaha isliye thoda extra rush hai. Thodi der mein yeh log chala jayega phir aapki arrangement karwa deta hoon.

Shaurya : Thik hai par jaldi karo. (Leaves)

He comes to Anokhi and nods in no. She understands what he says.

Anokhi : Abhi?

Shaurya : Abhi kuch nahi chalo wapas apne hotel.

Anokhi : PS nahi…(Tired tone) Mujhse aur nahi chala jayega..

Shaurya : (Smiles) Arey mazak kar raha hoon.. Thoda sa waiting hai par koi nahi.. Chalo tab tak hum beach pe ghumte hai. Dekho mausam bhi bohot acha hai.

Anokhi : (Almost about to cry) PS nahi na.. Aur nahi chalna.. Please baith jate hai na yaha.. (Sits on the floor)

Shaurya : (Holds her hand and makes her stand) Arey chalo na thoda aage chal ke baithate hai.. Yaha aise entrance pe nahi. Chalo chalo chalo. Bas thoda sa aage. (Takes her along with him holding her hand).

They go a bit ahead on the beach towards the sea and find a place to sit where there is no one around. There is a mild breeze, the waves making noise as it approaches the shore, moonlight all over the sky making the atmosphere serene.

Anokhi : (Curiously) PS sach bataiye.. Aap mujhe yaha kyu laaye? Main dekh rahi hu kabse aapke dimag mein kuch chal raha hai.

Shaurya : Yes.. Miss Bhalla you guessed it right. Mujhe tumse kuch baat karni thi. Aaj jo kuch bhi hua. Main sach mein nahi janta tha ki Badi maa aise aa jayengi aur yeh aise enagagement ki announcement kar degi. Main unhe ye saaf saaf keh ke aaya hoon ki main kisi aur se pyaar karta hoon.. Shagun se nahi… Unhe shayad koi galat fehmi ho gayi hai.

Anokhi : (Gets emotional) Aap jante hai PS mera dil toot gaya jab maine woh sab hote hue dekha. Apni aankho se, apne birthday wale din; yeh sab na ek sadme ki tarah aaya mere samne. Main samajh hi nahi paa rahi thi ki kya ho raha hai mere sath.

Shaurya : I know Anokhi main janta hoon isliye tumse milne bhi toh aaya tha par tumne meri koi baat nahi suni. Main tumhe aise rote hue aisi tooti hui halat mein nahi dekh sakta. Aur meri samajh mein nahi aa raha tha ki kya karu… Aur

Anokhi : (Continues his sentence) Aur aapko gussa aa gaya aur gaadi leke nikal gaye. Aap apne gusse ko control kyu nahi karte PS. (In a concerned tone) Aap ne kabhi socha hai aaj kuch bhi galat ho jata aapke sath toh kya hota? Apna chodiye apni family ka sochiye. Aap Ki badi maa woh bohot pyaar karti hai na aap se. Unka kya hota? Shaan sir ka kya hota? Aastha ma’am ka kya hota? Kabhi socha hai aapne? Aur inn sabke sath. Mera kya hota? Aapko koi andaza hai iss baat ka?

Shaurya went into a process of realisation of what he had done. It was not a small mistake. It could have put his life at stake. He was understanding her concern and at the same time realising his mistake.

Shaurya : I’m sorry Anokhi. Dobara aisa nahi hoga. Tum thik keh rahi ho. Infact tum hamesha mujhse yeh kehti aayi ho ki mujhe apne gusse pe control rakhna chahiye aur main hi har baar yeh galti karta hoon. Lekin iss baar nahi. Aaj ke baad main kabhi aape se bahar nahi hounga aur apne gusse ko control karne ki koshish karunga.

Anokhi is happy that finally she managed to convince him to control his anger and now since that he has promised he won’t do it again because Shaurya never broke his promises.

Anokhi : PS aap yehi rukiye main bas ek minute mein aayi.

She goes running near the restaurant and from there she plucks a leaf of Areca palm plant which was planted at the entrance and turns the leaf into a ring by tying knots appropriately. She comes back to Shaurya again. He is confused as to what happened and why was she behaving like this.

Shaurya : (Confused) Kya hua? Kya kar rahi thi tum?

Anokhi : (Hiding the ring she made) Nahi kuch nahi. (Trying to change the topic) Acha PS aap mere liye koi gaana ga sakte ho abhi please?

Shaurya : (Confused again as to why she had a strange demand all of a sudden) Gaana? Abhi kyu? Uss din toh gaaya tha holi pe..

Anokhi : Uss din sab the na waha.. Woh students ke liye gaaya tha. Aaj, abhi, yaha mere liye gaiye na please. (She insists him a lot)

Shaurya : (Finally agrees) Acha thik hai batao kaunsa gaana sunogi?

Anokhi : Koi bhi jo aap chaho..

Both of them are sitting alone at the beach under the moonlight and Shaurya starts singing for her.

Shaurya : Hum chup rahe… Kuch na kaha… Kehne ko kya baaki raha… (Looks at her in a romantic way) Ho… Hum chup rahe…. Kuch na kaha… Kehne ko kya baaki raha… (They share an eye lock) Bas aankho hi aankho mein… Izhaar ho gaya…

Anokhi : (Pulls out the ring she made and continues with him) Hum sochate hi reh gaye… Aur Pyaar ho gaya…

Shaurya is surprised to see this gesture of Anokhi. He stands in the place where he was sitting and Anokhi kneels on the ground and asks him

Anokhi : PS… Maine kabhi nahi socha tha ki meri zindagi mein aisa koi din aayega… Ki main aisa kuch karungi but jabse aap se pyaar hua hai na main bhi badalne lagi hoon. Toh aaj main Anokhi Bhalla aap se poochti hoon Mr. Shaurya Sabherwal I love you the way you love me and I know it. So would you like to spend the rest of your life with me? (Showing him the ring she made)

Shaurya : (In a complete surprise. He is awestruck. He kneels down to her level) Anokhi, I love you too. (Kisses her on her forehead) Main tumhe propose karne wala tha aaj tumhare birthday but things turned around and see you just made it the way I wanted it to be. Infact tumhari yeh ring ne iss moment ko aur jyada special bana diya. You gave me that moment “Our Moment” which I always wanted to have. Thank You so much.

Anokhi puts that ring in his finger. He stands and makes her stand as well. They both hug each other. The hug of love, acceptance, appreciation and beyond all the respect for their relationship. Both of them walk hand in hand towards the restaurant. They get in and order food.

Shaurya : Baki toh nahi pata par ha yaha khana tumhe zaroor pasand aayega.

Anokhi : Woh kyu? Aap jante hai yaha kaisa khana milta hai?

Shaurya : Nahi janta toh nahi hoon par itna zaroor keh sakta hoon ki woh mere protein bar se zaroor tasty hoga.. (Giggles)

Anokhi : (Laughs) Ha woh toh hoga hi.

That was one of the sweetest proposal 🤗🤗🤗

Loved it

So cute updt

Anokhi's proposal was so sweet❤️

Cont soon

PS:Can u edit the page number of part on heading whenever u update

Originally posted by: Ariyatogether

So cute updt

Anokhi's proposal was so sweet❤️

Cont soon

PS:Can u edit the page number of part on heading whenever u update

Thank u so much darling... btw can you tell me how to do that?

Originally posted by: anjali9996

That was one of the sweetest proposal 🤗🤗🤗

Loved it

Hey thank you so much....

Originally posted by: VaidehiPatil

Thank u so much darling... btw can you tell me how to do that?

Just edit the title nd add page number of new updt

Neither. This is Chandra

Hey babe, Could you create an index??

Or just write the page numbers of the new updates after each update??