ShaKhi Proposal New FF - Page 3

Originally posted by: anjali9996

Awesome man

Loved it

Thank you so much.. Glad you loved it

Originally posted by: Ariyatogether

Awesome❤️

Loved ShaKhi moment

Official long walk😆sounds really good

hehe thank you... I hope you enjoy the upcoming part as well

Originally posted by: AK_2010

Banjar zameen par baarish!

Thank you Vaidehi!

I have been missing that fumbling bumbling silly Shaurya Sabherwal and this was such a joy to read 😍😍 Shaurya is a total baby!

Ya man even I miss him so much... Hopefully we have him back soon... Thank you so much for reading... Glad you enjoyed....

Loved this update vaidehi and the previous one too

Shaurya's longing for unconditional love and care which he got from anokhi.

I always wanted shaurya's accident scene to turn out like this. But nevertheless i can imagine shakhi through and through.

Loved their convo and the way she shuts him up.

❤️ update soon

Knock knock....

Dost ki biwi here?

Originally posted by: wamavasant

Loved this update vaidehi and the previous one too

Shaurya's longing for unconditional love and care which he got from anokhi.

I always wanted shaurya's accident scene to turn out like this. But nevertheless i can imagine shakhi through and through.

Loved their convo and the way she shuts him up.

❤️ update soon

Hey thank you so much for showering love... Glad its turning out they way your people wanted it to be... and yes the next part is coming very soon... May be by day end or tomorrow.... stay tuned❤️

Originally posted by: Priyashi03

Knock knock....

Dost ki biwi here?

Arey biwi ki dost tu bhi hai yeha??? great.. good to see you....

Originally posted by: VaidehiPatil

Arey biwi ki dost tu bhi hai yeha??? great.. good to see you....

Originally posted by: VaidehiPatil

Shaurya is looking at his lady love now who has been thanking the lord for having him back safe and sound. He felt the love which he was longing for. He felt loved, he felt wanted. For the very first time in his life someone wanted to have him. Being abandoned by his parents, burdened by the love of his uncle and aunty who always kept on reminding him every now and then that they had done a huge favor on him by loving him. And now he had someone in his life who loved him unconditionally and without asking anything in return.

Here Anokhi who had no control over her emotions at this very moment hugs him tight. A complete bone crushing hug. Her love knew no limits today. She had lost and found her love on the same day. In a fraction of second she would have lost him forever. But since they were destined they ended together.

This hug was a symbol of having the one they loved the most in their respective arms. Anokhi is happy to have Shaurya back safe and sound and Shaurya glad that she had come to save him and that she loved him exactly the way he longed to be love for his life. Both being loved in the right way.

People on the street went back leaving these two alone. After this hug she makes him sit back in the car.

Anokhi : (Concerned) Aap thik ho na PS? (Feared) Pata hai main kitna darr gayi thi…. Meri jaan nikal di thi aapne. Aise koi karta hai kya? Aap itne bade ho samajhdar ho aur aise bacho jaise gaadi chala rahe the….

Shaurya : (Cuts her in between) Bache gaadi nahi chalate.. Unhe allowed nahi hai…

Anokhi : Aapko mazak suj raha hai… (In a serious tone depicting fear) Yaha meri jaan nikal gayi thi yeh sochke ki najane kya hua hoga? Kaise hua hoga? Jab woh call aaya mujhe… Main yaha tak kaise aayi hu main khud janti hoon...

Shaurya : (Again cuts her) Aise kaise jaan nikal jati tumhari. Woh toh yaha hai na mere pass… Aur dekho kuch nahi hua hai mujhe… I’m fine…

Anokhi : Fine ka toh aap rehne hi do… Hey mata rani dekho kitna khoon beh gaya hai. (Searching) First Aid box kaha hai?

Shaurya : Pata nahi yahi pe hoga. Par maine kaha na tumse uski koi zaroorat nahi hai. Main

Anokhi : Chup; ekdum chup. Abhi main aapki ek nahi sunne wali. Itna khoon beh gaya hai. Behosh the aap PS aapko yeh sab normal lagta hai kya? Abhi aap bilkul chup rahoge aur jo main keh rahi hu woh sunoge aur jo kar rahi hoon woh karne doge.

Shaurya becomes silent. No one had treated him with this right earlier. Only Anokhi had this right. Only she had the power to make him go silent and listen to everything being told. Anokhi gets out of the car and finds the first aid box in the carriage. She comes to the place where Shaurya is sitting and opens the box. Taking a small ball of cotton and putting some amount of antiseptic liquid over it, as she is about to apply this on Shaurya’s wound he holds her hand and says

Shaurya : Yeh kya kar rahi ho tum? Main nahi lagane wala yeh sab. Maine kaha na thik hu main kuch nahi hua mujhe.

Anokhi : PS aap darr kyu rahe ho kuch nahi hota isse..

Shaurya : Kisne kaha main darta hoon. Suno main na Shaurya Sabherwal hoon samjhi, main darta warta nahi hoon kisi se. (Fumbling a bit) Woh toh yeh antiseptic se thoda sa jalta hai isliye. Yaad hai uss raat college ke bahar gundo kisne bachaya tha tumhe? Main nahi darta..

Anokhi : (Murmuring) Haan gundo se bachate hai aur antespetic se darte hai.(Giggles a bit).

Shaurya : (Trying to hear what she said) Ek minute kya kaha tumne? Kya kaha abhi?

Anokhi : (Fumbles) Maine.. Maine kuch bhi toh nahi.. (Changes the topic) Arey PS kuch nahi hoga. Main ek dum dheere se lagaungi aapko pata bhi nahi chalega; aur jalega bhi nahi. Yaha dekhiye meri taraf.

And with a lot of care and affections Anokhi dresses his wound.

Shaurya : Aaaggghhh… Dekho maine kaha tha na… Jalta hai yeh mujhe nahi lagwana.

Anokhi : (Trying to calm him) Sorry PS bas thoda sa hi bacha hai… (She blows some air out of her mouth to give him a soothing effect; she could see the pain he had. So she tries diverting him) Waise aap ko pata hai PS mujhe bhi na bachpan mein inn sab cheezon se bohot drr lagta tha fir na mummy ji mujhe malam lagane ke kahaniya sunaya karti thi. Main unn kahaniyon mein kho jat thi aur mummy ji ka kaam bhi ho jata tha.

Shaurya is completely engaged in what she was saying. He could partially feel the pain but Anokhi had engaged him in talks making him intrigued.

Anokhi : Dekhiye ho bilkul waise hi jaise abhi maine aap ko malam lagaya aur aapko pata hi nahi chala. (Smiling a bit at a confused Shaurya who was still wondering that it was already done.) Aap na bilkul bachche ho PS.

Shaurya : (Coming back) Oh hello, main koi bacha nahi hu samjhi. Tum hogi bacchi main nahi. (Murmuring) Ek toh pata nahi kya laga diya itna jal raha hai upar se bacha bol rahi hai.

Anokhi : Aapne kuch kaha kya PS?

Shaurya : Nahi toh maine thodi kuch kaha… Tum bolne kaha deti ho kuch kehne ke liye..

Anokhi : (Getting offended) Main.. Main bolne nahi deti.. Waah! Matlab aap aise gusse mein kuch bhi karo, fir aake aapko sambhalu bhi main aur fir main hi bolne nahi deti.. Mujhe na baat hi nahi karni aap se.

Shaurya : (Understanding that he has offended her) Acha sorry. Suno na please sorry main aise hi mazak kar raha tha. You know I’m a changed person now. Toh thoda..

Anokhi : (Cuts him in between) Toh kya toh? Badal gaye hai toh kuch bhi kahenge? Uss din Babli di ke samne Stupid bol diya.. Abhi yeh..

Shaurya : (Trying to persuade her) Arey sorry bola na maine. Firse bol raha hoon sorry… Bas? Abhi chale wapas?

Anokhi : (Nods in assertion) Haan… Par jayenge kaise? Aap drive kar paoge?

Shaurya : Dekhte hai.. Thoda dard toh ho raha hai… Tum aao na gaadi mein baitho…

Anokhi gets inside the car. Shaurya tries to start but the car doesn’t start. He tries again but in vain. Both of them were confused as to why the car was not starting. After multiple failed attempts both of them get out of the car.

Shaurya : Lagta hai gaadi kharab ho gayi hai. Toh hume shayad koi taxi ya kuch aur dekhna padega.

Anokhi : Haan.. Woh sab toh thik hai par yaha door door tak na koi auto nazar aa raha hai na koi taxi. Aur humara hotel bhi kafi door hai yaha se.

Shaurya : (Looking at the clock. It showed 10 pm) Kafi late bhi ho gaya hai. Auto aur taxi ka intezaar karenge toh subah ho jayegi. Ek kaam karte hai…

Anokhi : Kya PS?

Shaurya : Yaad hai uss din Kapurthala se Chandigarh wapas aate waqt hum raasta bhatak gaye the?

Anokhi : (Cuts hin in between) Hum nahi aap PS (smiles looking at him)

Shaurya : Acha thik hai correction… Main rasta bhatak gaya tha… Aur woh humari unofficial long drive hui thi. But aaj mauka bhi hai gaadi bhi kharab hai… Toh aaj main tumhe ek official long walk pe leke chalta hoon.

Anokhi : (Smiles at him) Haan toh fir chale?

Shaurya : Haan chalo.

They both are walking on the unknown streets of Goa. The night is getting darker and cozy. The sky has no stars today but some scattered clouds here and there playing hide and seek with the moon. Slow breeze blowing Anokhi’s long hair. The leaves of the tree shaking. The coolness in the weather increases.

Shaurya notices something about Anokhi. It looked as if she was hungry. But so was he. Both silently walk and Shaurya breaks the ice.

Shaurya : Kya hua? Bhook lagi hai?

Anokhi : (Looking at him with a small face) Haan.. Par aapko kaise pata?

Shaurya : Tumhe kehne ki zaroorat nahi hai Anokhi tumhe dekh kar samajh jata hoon main ki tumhe kya chahiye. Wait a minute I have something for you.

Anokhi : (Laughing) Nahi… PS nahi..

Shaurya : (Laughing back and shies away) Haan… Wohi… Protein Bar…

Anokhi : (Giggling) Ek baat batao PS yeh Protein Bar jeb mein leke kaun ghumta hai…

Shaurya : (Shying again with a smile) Main…

They both were giggling over this protein bar bond they had and this time unlike the previous both of them shared it half.

Anokhi : (Looking at the wrapper) Yeh toh khatam ho gaya… Abhi?

Shaurya : Abhi… Abhi yaha se thoda aur chalne pe ek beach side restaurant hai waha chalte hai?

Anokhi : (Tired of walking) Aur kitni door hai?

Shaurya : Kya hua Miss Bhalla? Itni jaldi thak gayi?

Anokhi : (In a tired tone) Haan PS thoda sa.. Aur woh aaj maine heels bhi pehne hai na.. Adat nahi hai mujhe..Toh pair bhi dard kar rahe hai thode..

Shaurya takes her to the corner of the road and makes her sit on the milestone. He gets down to his knees and removes her sandals. Anokhi is shocked to see him doing this.

Anokhi : Arey yeh aap kya kar rahe hai PS. Mere pairon ko kyu hath laga rahe hai aap… Please uthiye na aisa acha thodi lagta hai. Koi dekhega toh kya soche ga..

Shaurya : Yehi sochega ki dekho kitna khayal rakhta hai apni Girlfriend ka.

Anokhi : (Surprised and Blushing) Girlfriend….

Shaurya : Haan… (Teasing) Kyu nahi ho?

Anokhi : Nahi..

Shaurya : (Teasing her again) Acha nahi ho

Anokhi : (Blushing) Nahi matlab hoon.

Shaurya : (Teasing again) Nahi matlab hoon… Hoon matlab nahi… Arey saaf saaf batao na…

Anokhi : (Looks at him in his eyes) PS… (Shies away) Kyu chhed rahe ho...

Shaurya : (Pretending) Main.. Main kaha chhed raha hoon. Maine toh kuch bhi nahi kiya…

Meanwhile he removes her sandals and carries them in his hands. Also he gives his Sneakers to her. Anokhi trying to fit in those sneakers.

Shaurya : Dekho main janta hoon thode bade hai… But abhi adjust kar lo…

Anokhi : Woh toh thik hai PS but aap kya pehenoge?

Shaurya : Main kuch nahi…

Anokhi : (Amused) Aap nange paon chaloge? Nahi PS aap apne sneakers pehen lijiye main nange paon chalungi. Mujhe toh waise hi aadat hai. Aap ko yeh sab karne ki zaroorat nahi hai main theek hoon.

Shaurya : Maine kaha na main nange paon chalunga tum nahi. Main janta hoon tumhe shayad aadat hogi but aaj ke baad nahi.

Anokhi is mesmerised by this gesture. Her eyes are filled with tears of joy. She was being loved by someone to this extent for the very first time. She was not only being taken care of but also being protected, loved and understood. But since her man was walking bare feet how could she walk? She takes off the sneakers and carries them in her hand. And now both are walking bare feet on the road. Shaurya sees her doing this act and gets emotional. Without letting her know he quickly wipes off the tear drop which has stood at the corner of his eye.

Shaurya : Yeh kya kar rahi ho tum? (Feeling obliged) Tumhe yeh karne ki zaroorat nahi hai…

Anokhi : (Looking into his eyes with gratitude and wet eyes) Zaroorat to aapko bhi nahi hai PS mere sandals aise hath mein leke chalne ki....

Shaurya : Meri baat alag hai, Anokhi. Tum aise mat karo lag jayega kuch pair mein.

Anokhi : Isse pehle bhi bohot se raaston pe kaaton ko dekha hai PS, tab toh main akeli thi. (Teary eyed) Aaj aap ho mujhe sambhalne ke liye.

Shaurya : (Looking at her with misty eyes) Main hamesha rahunga.. I promise.

And they were walking on a complete empty road having some soulful conversations. Trying to gather themselves and a part of each other that they carried within themselves. They reach the beachside restaurant. It is a beautiful place for a date night. The entrance of the restaurant has some beautiful lighting hanging on the trees. The interior is decorated in a typical Goan style. An orchestra band playing the Goan music.

Awesome part

Loved Shaurya's love towards AnokhiHe was walking bare foot nd then she too❤️

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