RaghVi story - The Perfect relationship? Part 1 Page 1

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Hello All,


I am reading a book called a name "Mindset" by Dr. Carol. Today I read a one chapter and this idea comes to my mind. I don't know it will be TS FS or SS. I will come to know once I will start writing 😆. Here is the teaser and let me know your view



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Pallavi Deshmukh daughter’s of Vijay and Sharda deshmukh and she has sister Mansi who is married to Rahul Sawant. She is happily married. Pallavi is pampered by her family and elder sister and she has dream about her prince charming. Her parents want her to settle down. She believes in love and wish to have love marriage.

Raghav Rao who has no easy past and had struggling life and he is living with his amma and sister and he loves them a lot and he doesn’t believe in love and marriage but his mom is forcing him to get settle.

Vijay Deshmukh is successful businessman and Raghav Rao is rising businessman. Her parents and his amma arranged their marriage. 2 opposite people get married. Will they have perfect relationship?



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Originally posted by: rinku95

interesting

continue soon


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Part 1


Pallavi Deshmukh


She is daughter of Sharda and Vijay Deshmukh. Pallavi is younger daughter. They pampered her a lot. Always protect her from any harm. She is his princess. He loves her dearly. He can do anything for his princess happiness. He can’t bear a single tear in her eyes. He always wanted her to smile and laugh. Sharda also love her daughter dearly and can do anything for her kids’ happiness but she is not like Vijay. She always careful and never allowed Vijay to spoil their daughters. She always teaches discipline and life of lesson. Thanks to this balance Mansi and Pallavi were well manner and good hearted person. They value people and never have ego and highness for their rich family status. Mansi is also love her sister and always protective towards her and never allowed any guys to come close to her except one guy their best friend Mandar.


Vijay and Sharda love their kids and always try to bring happiness for their kids specially Pallavi. She was saved from all kind of sadness and tragedy. Vijay never allowed anything wrong to touch her. Pallavi is unaware of real life world because she was always protected by her parents. They try to fulfil all dream of her life. Well the bad thing is that their one decision is going to change her life and shatter her only dream to marry her best friend Mandar.


Pallavi has no many male figures in her life except her father, brother in law and her best friend Mandar. Just like her father and brother in law Mandar is also protective about her. She has other male friend but thanks to over protectiveness they keep distance and keep their feelings towards themselves. It doesn’t bother Pallavi because she knows they love her that’s why they behave like this. But just like others she also wanted to live like freedom. She hardly leave alone someone is always there with her. She is in love with her best friend Mandar but he never reciprocates her feelings. It hurts but she also knows it is because of Mansi. She tried many time to convey her feelings towards him but he refuse to recognise that. He was always with different kind of girls every month he changed his girlfriend which hurts Pallavi but she is not going to give up her love because of his stubbornness.


As Pallavi never face bad anything in life and always live in her fairytale world. Her parents have love marriage. She also wants her marriage life like her parents. Her mom eyes sparkles when she saw her dad and her dad forget all stress of whenever he is with her. He has eyes only for her and her for him. She witnesses her parents and her sister and jiju’s beautiful and happy relationship. She always want same life partner just like her dad and jiju. She lives in fairytale world. One day her prince charming will come and take her away. Their life will be full of love and happiness and will have beautiful kids. She wants a life partner who looks at her like her dad look at her mom. Her parents never had a fight. Since childhood she saw how her dad treats her mom. They are soulmates. They are truly made for each other. Even her sister is lucky who got such lovely life partner her jiju. He treats her sister like a queen. Whenever she looks at them she prays to god to give her prince charming soon.


She believes that just like her parents and her sister, her love story is going to be same. It is sign by god that she is going to marry Mandar. She is not ambitious girl. Her only ambition is to get married and live life like her parents and complete her bucket list which she made for her life partner. That is why she is not ready to give up on Mandar even after his stubbornness. She knows her love is going to win and she is not going to give up because she is Vijay Deshmukh’s daughter and when it comes to what she wants she never leave that. Like father like daughter.


She is 23 years old and after her college she is helping her father in his business. After college they have one routine that their friends will meet at least once time in a month and stay in touch like this. She and Mandar hardly spend time together as he is always busy with his new girlfriends. It hurts her that he has so many girlfriends and here she was always waiting for him but she always say to herself that at the end her love is going to win and Mandar will be her and she will make him apologise for troubling and hurting her like this. This time he is with her new girlfriend kamya which is surprisingly long term girlfriend more than a month and as per rumour they are getting serious but Pallavi knows that this is not true. Kamya is going to London for vacation so Mandar will be here and she is going to try last time to win her love. she can’t wait to spend her time with Mandar and she decided to make Mandar accept his feelings towards her.



Well all this people don’t know things are going to change specially for Pallavi. Unintentionally they are going to hurt Pallavi and shatter only one dream of her. she is going to hurt by her knight in shining armor.


Well this is life which is not fairy tale.


In canteen


Today is the day of their get together


Amruta : So Pallavi how is new exam going in life?


Amruta is close to Pallavi and only she knows about Pallavi feelings towards Mandar, her other friends don’t have any slightest idea about her feelings.


Nikhil : what exam now? Hardly i had already completed my college exam now new exam


Amruta : no stupid this exam is only for Pallavi no one else


Nikhil : what do you mean?


Amruta : nothing when right time will come you will come to know


Mallika : so Pallavi what is your plan for your future?


Pallavi : nothing


Mallika : we know you are reserved person and you never have any boyfriend why?


Amruta : (dreamily) because she is waiting for her someone special who is going to take her away from us and they will live happily ever after with their kids


Pallavi : (blushing) shut up Amruta


Amruta : why? I am not wrong and this is your dream i mean to say only dream


Mallika : really! You never told us about that. Is there someone special in your life which you didn’t tell us?


Pallavi : there is nothing like that mallika


Amruta : she is right as of now she has no any someone special her life but very soon she is going have him in life. This vacation is going to change her life and someone special is going to come in her life


Mallika : how did you know ?


Amruta : because my heart say so and my intuition too and she is going to be with her love of life


Nikhil : hehehe Pallavi and love marriage no chance. She is going for arrange marriage


Pallavi : no i am going for love marriage


Mallika : so Pallavi tell us about your dream man


Nikhil : there is no dream man


Mallika : shut up Nikhil. Ignore him Pallavi and tell us what kind of dream man you have in your mind. Don’t be shy and tell us


Pallavi was blushing and close her eyes and she opens her eyes and saw Mandar was entering in canteen and was flirting with girls and playing and laughing with others. She closed her eyes and imagining Mandar and starts narrating about her love


(At other side of Mumbai in his office he enters in his office)


He is tall, fair and handsome


(he is tall but wheat skin. He is not handsome but good looking)


Wherever he goes people die to talk to him


(when he enters in his office his employee started to ignore him and try to concentrate on their wok)


Wherever he goes only smile and happiness spread


(his employee are scare of him and all happy atmosphere turn in to gloomy)


Smile never leaves his face


(he hardly smiles or should say he doesn’t know how to smile)


He talks with her about anything or everything with her


(don’t talk too much i dont like when people waste their time with talking non sense)


He respect everyone and everyone respect him


(his employee feel he doesn’t respect him)


Even if he leaves from there people just talk about him in good way


(his employees are bad mouth about him)


He never shouts on anyone


(he is shouting at his employees)


He is charming and have positive aura about him


(wherever he goes people wants to stay away from him)


He is same as my age


(he is 27 years old rising businessman)


Nikhil : (interrupting her) what about beard? Now a day it is fashion


Pallavi : no ewww i hate beard, he has clean shaved and short hair. Properly cut


(he has light beard and his hairs are also long and curly and messy, his phone ring)


He is my best friend and His name is (slowly) Mandar Sawant


(no I am Raghav Rao)


He is going to love me and never going to be with anyone else and never going to hurt me


By saying this she opens her eyes and saw Mandar was there but he was with her, kamya, her smile disappeared and hurt replace in her eyes and Pallavi left from there. Amruta notice that.


Mallika : (confuse) why did she left like this


Nikhil : may be because she was shy


Mallika : shut up Nikhil


Amruta : no he is right. Let me go and check with her


Pallavi was in common room and upset and Amruta console her


Amruta : hey Pallavi dont cry


Pallavi : what should i do? It hurts to see him with someone else


Amruta : you know Mandar right. He is like this. I am sure he also loves you. Give him time


Pallavi : I am going to confess my love to him but I am scare what if he will reject me


Amruta : if he rejects you it will be his loss not yours and i will suggest you to move on. I know it is your dream to marry him but sometimes life has another plan for us which are better than our own plan. So stop crying and go fight for your love if he is your no one will stop to unite you both but if not no one will unite you two both


Pallavi : but i don't want to loose him


Amruta : you cant loose him until he is yours. You know what Pallavi life is like gamble and you have to take risk. Either he is your or not. Confess and see what happens and move on. Even i want both of you together but let see what happens


Pallavi : this is only my dream if i loose this nothing will left in my life.


Amruta : hey Pallavi if one dream will break another new dream will appear


Pallavi : i wish i was like you brave and strong


Amruta : you are strong. I am experienced when it comes to relationship that is why i am saying don't tie it until it is needed.


Pallavi : thanks Amruta


Amruta : now smile and let’s go and remembered i will be here for you always


Pallavi : I know


They both hug and left.


Lately at home her marriage talks started. One day her parents talk to her about one guy some Raghav Rao. They like him and want her to get married to him only if she will be ready for this. They will arrange the meeting and after that they will take decision. This makes her scared. She desperately needs to talk to mandar. She has to make him realise. She decided to talk to mandar today only. She called him so many time but he was not answering. She decided to go sawant house and confront him. She gathered courage to talk to him. She decided what she will say and also imagine that mandar will also accept her and they will tell their parents and will get married. She is smiling imaging this. When she reached at his home there was no one. She walked towards his room and she heard some faint noises. She thought he might be at home and this is right time to talk to him but when she reached at his room she was shocked to see the scenario. There were Mandar and Kamya on the bed. Mandar was shirtless and Kamya was kissing him. It breaks Pallavi and she ran from there.


She was at Amruta place and crying her heart out. Amruta tried to console her but everything was in vain. She thought it is better to let her cry so she will feel better in morning. She informed her parents that Pallavi will stay with her.


Precap :-


Pallavi and Raghav will meet and Mandar decided to confess his feelings to pallavi

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Update soon 😊this is amazing ❤️

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Awesome update soon

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Wow--nice update--please update soon

the perfect relationship is not always what we feel is perfect for us---so excited to know how Raghav(opposite to Pallavi's dream man) and Pallavi start their relationship

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This is amazing. Please continue soon

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Originally posted by: Kavita99

Update soon 😊this is amazing ❤️


Thanks dear 😊

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Originally posted by: rinku95

Awesome update soon


Thanks dear 😊

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Originally posted by: ReemShah

Wow--nice update--please update soon

the perfect relationship is not always what we feel is perfect for us---so excited to know how Raghav(opposite to Pallavi's dream man) and Pallavi start their relationship


Thanks dear 😊

yes there is nothing perfect in this word except the word itself 😆

Let see how will they come out from this

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