This is not Love- MG || Thread II (*Epilogue* Page 137) - Page 38

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Posted: 2 years ago

That was😂😂,

Waiting for next...

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Omg enjoyed the 3 updates. 

Suspense,comedy Drama sab kuch 😁

In Awe with Maan. He went to Doc for Geet. Ab Yeh Pyaar nahi tho kya hai 😍

Maans mom trying to convince Maan and loved the way he put his foot down. 

Bechari Geet surprise dena chahti thi khud embarrassed ho gayi 🤭

Chalo looking forward for next 

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Posted: 2 years ago

part 76

Geet went to see Maan's doctor? Why not just ask him straight?

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Why did the doctor easily agree to share information? Did he recognize her name?

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part 77

Like we suspected, he was seeing the doctor to help her.

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part 77

Maan did a good job answering his mom. He set her right. Not that she listened.

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The plan went totally wrong. She had no idea the mom was going to walk in.

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part 78

Mom has gone away and the devil slayer is here. Let the fun begin.

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Part 79

 

Maan makes a tiny drink.

 

Gulps it and knocks on Geet’s door

 

M- Now get out you pesky timid rat

 

Geet is like rat kisko bola bey...uthke khadi huyi...then stops herself

 

Geet sits back

 

G- Is your mom still there?

 

M-Nope. Only devil slayer is here

 

He says smugly

 

Geet giggles

 

Geet Door kholti hai for Maan to enter

 

Maan ko dekhte hi Geet ka wo emotions ka dam tutt jaata hai….that she was controlling in herself since the doc visit

 

She clasps to him tightly

 

Today with extra need, extra affection, extra love, extra care and extra apnapan

 

Maan is like isse kya ho gaya

 

M- Geet?

 

G-Hmm

 

M- Are you sick?

 

G-No

 

M- Then have you lost it more?

 

He asks very sincerely and seriously while suppressing a chuckle

 

Geet is like kyaaa??? Maaro isse maaro! Achaaayi ke layak hi nahi hai ye

 

But then she hugs him again burying her face into his wide shoulders

 

G- You are the best, Maan!

 

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They cozy up

 

Maan takes off his shirt

 

Geet’s phone rings

 

She jumps to take the call

 

G-Sorry I have to take it

 

Geet takes up the call eagerly

 

But her expressions quickly change into disappointment

 

Geet poore ghar mein ghum ghumke baat kar rhi hai toh Maan ko bass 1-2 words hi sunayi de rahe hain

 

She looked visibly upset with each passing moment

 

Even in the verge of breaking into a tear...where her voice faltered while arguing on the phone

 

Geet phone rakh ke mudti hai toh she finds herself colliding with Maan's broad chest

 

She can’t help her tears

 

Saamne Maan ka broad kandha dikha hi toh she buries her face onto his chest

 

Maan is wondering ki kya hua

 

Geet aise kabhi asoo toh nahi bahaati hai

 

He wonders ghar pe sab theek toh hai naa uske

 

Maan pats her head gently

 

G- I am not crying! Don’t look at me!!


M-Yup. Okay. I know

 

Kuch der baad Geet apne aap chup hoti hai, rubbing her tears off her red face vigorously

 

Maan is still there

 

He is waiting patiently for Geet to share what happened

 

Maan sits beside her, offering her a glass of water

 

She drinks it up

 

He gently puts his warm hand on hers to reassure her

 

G-You know....no...you don’t know about her...there's my friend...she...is also a doctor like me...she is very nice...hardworking...ambitious too

 

He nods

 

G-and also very pretty....I mean people say so...so I guess she is modest too....and nice & hardworking...as I said…so something really bad has happened to her...you know 

 

M-Oh. What happened?

 

He frowns

 

M-To her

 

Her adds playing along with her pretense

 

G-Well...since you are asking....she applied for this dreamj ob under her Dr xyz...you know about Dr xyz? He is my- her inspiration...her idol

 

Maan nods in affirmation

 

G-She worked really really...very hard for that…I know coz she works with me in the ER…she really wanted that…she even went into the lastround...her everything was exceptional

 

Tears show up again on her eyes

 

G-Are you listening?

 

M-I am, Geet. Then what happened?

 

He asks gently wiping her tears, so that she doesn’t roughly mow over her eyes

 

G-Then ...then...she did everything in her power to do well...and she knew she would get it....but...but…but now results are out and she didn’t get it

 

She breakdown in tears

 

G-I worked so hard for it….it was my dream. Maan!

 

G-He doesn’t deserve it. He was the head doctor's son that's why!

 

G-I hate this world!

 

G-All my life ...I looked up to Dr xyz as my idol...het urned out like this

 

She is sobbing again

 

He is caressing her hair, holding her firmly yet gently

 

M- Do you want me to do anything about it?

 

Geet could suddenly envision a holster being unbuckled and gun slowly getting drawn

 

She lifts her head off his chest to look at him

 

G-What will you do?

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Posted: 2 years ago

Loved it dear

Awesome and beautiful😍✨❤

Geet ke bantering😂😂 too cute

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon😊