Life beyond quest | Completed - Page 21

Originally posted by: Deevu

Wow superb!!!!!!

Here also u kept the suspense alive 👏

Beautiful

One of the best Stories I have read on the his forum u write so well ❤️

Please do write more

Waiting for the next ss

Thanks 💜

Originally posted by: Sairat

Hi Sherry;

As promised here is what I felt about this topic..it is what that should happen in show; but who are we kidding..

This is the plot..i planned for one of my stories but..due to lack of time and incessensed offscreen drama I have discontinued my story and its line.

Coming to your story..the reason was i wanted to see how you end it and I feel it was marvellous; the choice of words to the in depth chatacterization and execution was amazing..

If possible please send your story line to Vankar..and then we might get some good dialogues.

Thanks so much 💜

You should definitely write and give it your own twist. What we write here of more or less what we all want to actually happen in Ghum. But unfortunately, we mostly het disappointed.

Will love to read your version some day soon!

Awesome story, you completely surprised me with mohit and Karishma news, because all other three but not Karishma... Dum like kaku🤣🤣

I know this is emotional and serious chapter , but when I hear khet mama, I have to stop reading and laughed for 5 min, no not because of khet but because of mama, jealous chavan, aniket ko mama bhanadhiya upar se intha intense situation Mei bhi Mama ke upar stress karna nahi boola🤣🤣

Aww happy family.... Plz call Jaya to chavan family in serial also, so that he do solid bezzathi of Didi which Didi actually feels like bezzathi and leave to her maika as she said in starting of the serial🤣

And I really don't want Kaku and ninad redemption to be so easy.... they have see the whole family very very happy before their eyes.

Awesome awesome awesome chapter yaar

Originally posted by: Saichintalli

Awesome story, you completely surprised me with mohit and Karishma news, because all other three but not Karishma... Dum like kaku🤣🤣

I know this is emotional and serious chapter , but when I hear khet mama, I have to stop reading and laughed for 5 min, no not because of khet but because of mama, jealous chavan, aniket ko mama bhanadhiya upar se intha intense situation Mei bhi Mama ke upar stress karna nahi boola🤣🤣

Aww happy family.... Plz call Jaya to chavan family in serial also, so that he do solid bezzathi of Didi which Didi actually feels like bezzathi and leave to her maika as she said in starting of the serial🤣

And I really don't want Kaku and ninad redemption to be so easy.... they have see the whole family very very happy before their eyes.

Awesome awesome awesome chapter yaar

Thanks so much 💜

Girl, I just read this full story on one go and I have to tell you, as of now, this is what Ghum even show version will be for me. I am saving it for re-read whenever I want to be off the show.

It's amazing. Everyone deserves happiness they just need to take right steps towards it and that's what everyone in CN did slowly by moving away and building a new family for themselves with love.

I am glad kaku realized what she lost in the end.

Wish Ninad also left her and stayed back saying for so many years I was without my own son and wife's life, now I want to be part of my grandchildren 's and maybe during that journey they will forgive him and accept him back as their father.

Pakhi deserved the treatment, loved her beizatti in all chapters 🤣.

Thank you for completing the story and hope you will write more SS in future.

wow i hope kaku made right choice

Originally posted by: sukri

Girl, I just read this full story on one go and I have to tell you, as of now, this is what Ghum even show version will be for me. I am saving it for re-read whenever I want to be off the show.

It's amazing. Everyone deserves happiness they just need to take right steps towards it and that's what everyone in CN did slowly by moving away and building a new family for themselves with love.

I am glad kaku realized what she lost in the end.

Wish Ninad also left her and stayed back saying for so many years I was without my own son and wife's life, now I want to be part of my grandchildren 's and maybe during that journey they will forgive him and accept him back as their father.

Pakhi deserved the treatment, loved her beizatti in all chapters 🤣.

Thank you for completing the story and hope you will write more SS in future.

Thank you so much for those beautiful words💜

Thank You Note

Hey All,

Thank you so much for all the encouragement and love that you have showered. It’s not even been a month when after a lot of contemplation I had put up my first piece of fiction. I had my apprehensions about writing on a public platform. But here I’m not even a month down the line and already 2 stories old(+2OS). Your words of appreciation have been the driving force.
I intended to complete this particular story in 6 chapter and with a weekly update. But I then did that in a week and did pace up the flashback. The suspense of “whoz at the door” was not supposed to be out till the 5chapter”. But I felt I was in trouble if I didn’t give it out already
I’m completely overwhelmed by your responses. Thank you so much for all your likes and such beautiful words and lovely comments 💜

Love 🥰

Ps - Sorry I may not have been able to tag everyone. But this note goes out to each of you who have read my stories, liked, appreciated and commented on them.

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