ShaKhi Proposal New FF - Page 2

Originally posted by: Aimsha

Thanku for the update please update next part soon waiting eagerly for the next update

Thank you so much for showering love ❤️❤️

Yup the next part is coming real soon 🤞🏻🤞🏻

Hi Vaidehi, welcome to the forum ⭐️

I've already read the story when you posted the links on twitter & this was such a heartwarming plot 🤗

How Shaurya & Anokhi ended up at the end has my heart, their trust & love for eo was so adorable to read & how they returned back was cute 💛

Not gonna speak further since others have to read the rest. Hope you'll write more, really enjoyed this one. Sensible & sweet 😊

Originally posted by: Coffee_Chips

Hi Vaidehi, welcome to the forum ⭐️

I've already read the story when you posted the links on twitter & this was such a heartwarming plot 🤗

How Shaurya & Anokhi ended up at the end has my heart, their trust & love for eo was so adorable to read & how they returned back was cute 💛

Not gonna speak further since others have to read the rest. Hope you'll write more, really enjoyed this one. Sensible & sweet 😊

Thank you so much for showering your love ❤️❤️❤️

Really means a lot... Inspite of reading it earlier you still took out time to appreciate 🤧🤧 I'm obliged 😘😘

Finally! Your writing is here too😍✨ Vaidu!!!!!!! Love love!!!♥️♥️♥️

Oh.. Im excited!

Hi Vaidehi! If I'm not wrong you are the same one from twitter right? I do stalk you guys there 😁

Welcome to IF! And congratulations on your first ShaKhi fanfic here!

Originally posted by: BhagyashreeS

Finally! Your writing is here too😍✨ Vaidu!!!!!!! Love love!!!♥️♥️♥️

You guys wanted me to come here.. so I'm here on public demand

Originally posted by: AK_2010

Oh.. Im excited!

Hi Vaidehi! If I'm not wrong you are the same one from twitter right? I do stalk you guys there 😁

Welcome to IF! And congratulations on your first ShaKhi fanfic here!

Yes m the same girl from twitter.. honestly m blushing to know that you people stalk me.... Means a lot... Thank you so much...

Originally posted by: VaidehiPatil

Hi,

My name is Vaidehi and I am new to this forum. In fact I've joined today. So I'm putting up an OS in a script format. Please help me by giving your reviews on this. Thanking you people in advance. Love Love.

Screenplay

Scene 1:

After Anokhi shuts the door on Shaurya’s face, he is heart-broken and so is Anokhi. The sudden announcement of his engagement with Shagun had come as a shocker to both. Shaurya couldn’t handle himself seeing tears in Anokhi’s eyes and in a very angry mood he leaves the place.

He goes to the parking, takes his car and drives rashly. While driving the only thing he could remember was the tears in Anokhi’s eyes and he felt responsible for her miserable state. Further he had not been given an opportunity to explain himself. He is constantly thinking about what had happened during the day and while thinking he is trying to call Anokhi.

Here on the other hand a broken Anokhi is not in any condition to answer calls. She prefers ignoring them and is mourning over her pain. But Shaurya has not yet stopped calling. He is trying his level best to communicate with her.

The clock was ticking 8:30pm. And Anokhi receives a call from an unknown number. She doesn’t want to answer any calls but seeing an unknown number she tries to gather herself and answers the call.

The person on call: Hello, Anokhi ji baat kar rahi hai?

Anokhi: Haan ji. Par aap kaun baat kar rahe hai?

The person: Mujhe aapka number iss phone se mila hai. Ye jinka phone hai unka accident hua hai aur woh behosh ho chuke hai. Unke sar se kafi khoon bhi beh raha hai. Yeh koi admi hai aur woh behoshi mein aapka naam leke sorry bol rahe hai.

Anokhi is taken aback. She couldn’t believe her ears. She had understood it was Shaurya. She gasped.

The person: Hello, Anokhi ji? Hello

Anokhi: Jii haan ji main hu.. (Trying to control her emotions).. Aap please mujhe jaldi se address bhej dijiye main abhi aa rahi hu.

The person: Haan main aapko address bhejta hoon, aap jaldi aa jaiye inki halat bohot kharab hai.

Anokhi was already broken with what had happened and now after this news she was shattered.

She is searching for Babli but she is missing. She tries calling but her call is unreachable.

Anokhi: (praying to lord) Hey mata rani yeh kya ho gaya.. Please mere PS ka dhyan rakhna unko kuch mat hone dena please. Ek toh yeh Babli di bhi pata nahi kaha hai aur phone bhi nahi lag raha hai.

She texts Babli about Shaurya and leaves the place

On her way she is panicked, tensed and worried at the same time. She tries calling Ahir but in vain. She reaches the location only to see people gathered around Shaurya’s car. She is now scared and her thoughts knew no direction. Somehow she takes a step forward to see the car had brutally hit a tree. There was a major dent on the car and Shaurya inside the car was bleeding and unconscious.

She is shocked to see him in this state. Goes numb for a second or two and then gets back to herself. She asks a few people around to help her get him out of the car. Sitting at the middle of the road, the night getting darker and Shaurya’s head on her lap. Her pain knew no boundaries today. She still tried her best to handle herself and holding Shaurya’s face she tried waking him up and in between she could hear some whispers.

Shaurya: (In an unconscious state murmuring) I’m sorry Anokhi.

Anokhi is crying and trying to get him back to consciousness.

Anokhi: PS uthiye an PS please aankhe kholiye. Dekhiye main aa gayi hoon please ek baar ankhe kholiye na. PS please dekhiye na meri taraf. PS please mujhe bahut ghabrahat ho rahi hai PS please aankhe kholiye na. (Looking at the crowd and shouting out loud) Please koi paani laao.

Someone gets water. She sprinkles water over his face and Shaurya starts gaining consciousness. He is slowly opening his eyes, he’s feeling the pain of the wound.

Shaurya : (In pain) Aaah… Ahmmm

Anokhi gets a bit happy to see him coming back to his senses.

Anokhi : PS dekhiye na ek baar yaha. Main hoon aap ke sath. Main aapko kuch nahi hone dungi. Aankhe kholiye please. Yaha dekhiye PS. (She wipes the wate on his face and caresses him with love.)

And now finally his eyes open. He looks at Anokhi. She has been crying, tears rolling down her cheeks, her face scared.

Anokhi now has a sense of relief that Shaurya has gained consciousness. She is holding Shaurya’s face in her hands, looking at him with a sense of gratitude to have him back.

He tries to get up from her lap and slowly he gets up and turns towards her. He is trying to understand what all had happened till now.

Anokhi: Mata rani tera lakh lakh shukar hai tune PS ko kuch nahi hone diya.

Stay tuned!! The next part would be updated real soon. Waiting for your reviews. Take care. Happy Reading.

Shaurya is looking at his lady love now who has been thanking the lord for having him back safe and sound. He felt the love which he was longing for. He felt loved, he felt wanted. For the very first time in his life someone wanted to have him. Being abandoned by his parents, burdened by the love of his uncle and aunty who always kept on reminding him every now and then that they had done a huge favor on him by loving him. And now he had someone in his life who loved him unconditionally and without asking anything in return.

Here Anokhi who had no control over her emotions at this very moment hugs him tight. A complete bone crushing hug. Her love knew no limits today. She had lost and found her love on the same day. In a fraction of second she would have lost him forever. But since they were destined they ended together.

This hug was a symbol of having the one they loved the most in their respective arms. Anokhi is happy to have Shaurya back safe and sound and Shaurya glad that she had come to save him and that she loved him exactly the way he longed to be love for his life. Both being loved in the right way.

People on the street went back leaving these two alone. After this hug she makes him sit back in the car.

Anokhi : (Concerned) Aap thik ho na PS? (Feared) Pata hai main kitna darr gayi thi…. Meri jaan nikal di thi aapne. Aise koi karta hai kya? Aap itne bade ho samajhdar ho aur aise bacho jaise gaadi chala rahe the….

Shaurya : (Cuts her in between) Bache gaadi nahi chalate.. Unhe allowed nahi hai…

Anokhi : Aapko mazak suj raha hai… (In a serious tone depicting fear) Yaha meri jaan nikal gayi thi yeh sochke ki najane kya hua hoga? Kaise hua hoga? Jab woh call aaya mujhe… Main yaha tak kaise aayi hu main khud janti hoon...

Shaurya : (Again cuts her) Aise kaise jaan nikal jati tumhari. Woh toh yaha hai na mere pass… Aur dekho kuch nahi hua hai mujhe… I’m fine…

Anokhi : Fine ka toh aap rehne hi do… Hey mata rani dekho kitna khoon beh gaya hai. (Searching) First Aid box kaha hai?

Shaurya : Pata nahi yahi pe hoga. Par maine kaha na tumse uski koi zaroorat nahi hai. Main

Anokhi : Chup; ekdum chup. Abhi main aapki ek nahi sunne wali. Itna khoon beh gaya hai. Behosh the aap PS aapko yeh sab normal lagta hai kya? Abhi aap bilkul chup rahoge aur jo main keh rahi hu woh sunoge aur jo kar rahi hoon woh karne doge.

Shaurya becomes silent. No one had treated him with this right earlier. Only Anokhi had this right. Only she had the power to make him go silent and listen to everything being told. Anokhi gets out of the car and finds the first aid box in the carriage. She comes to the place where Shaurya is sitting and opens the box. Taking a small ball of cotton and putting some amount of antiseptic liquid over it, as she is about to apply this on Shaurya’s wound he holds her hand and says

Shaurya : Yeh kya kar rahi ho tum? Main nahi lagane wala yeh sab. Maine kaha na thik hu main kuch nahi hua mujhe.

Anokhi : PS aap darr kyu rahe ho kuch nahi hota isse..

Shaurya : Kisne kaha main darta hoon. Suno main na Shaurya Sabherwal hoon samjhi, main darta warta nahi hoon kisi se. (Fumbling a bit) Woh toh yeh antiseptic se thoda sa jalta hai isliye. Yaad hai uss raat college ke bahar gundo kisne bachaya tha tumhe? Main nahi darta..

Anokhi : (Murmuring) Haan gundo se bachate hai aur antespetic se darte hai.(Giggles a bit).

Shaurya : (Trying to hear what she said) Ek minute kya kaha tumne? Kya kaha abhi?

Anokhi : (Fumbles) Maine.. Maine kuch bhi toh nahi.. (Changes the topic) Arey PS kuch nahi hoga. Main ek dum dheere se lagaungi aapko pata bhi nahi chalega; aur jalega bhi nahi. Yaha dekhiye meri taraf.

And with a lot of care and affections Anokhi dresses his wound.

Shaurya : Aaaggghhh… Dekho maine kaha tha na… Jalta hai yeh mujhe nahi lagwana.

Anokhi : (Trying to calm him) Sorry PS bas thoda sa hi bacha hai… (She blows some air out of her mouth to give him a soothing effect; she could see the pain he had. So she tries diverting him) Waise aap ko pata hai PS mujhe bhi na bachpan mein inn sab cheezon se bohot drr lagta tha fir na mummy ji mujhe malam lagane ke kahaniya sunaya karti thi. Main unn kahaniyon mein kho jat thi aur mummy ji ka kaam bhi ho jata tha.

Shaurya is completely engaged in what she was saying. He could partially feel the pain but Anokhi had engaged him in talks making him intrigued.

Anokhi : Dekhiye ho bilkul waise hi jaise abhi maine aap ko malam lagaya aur aapko pata hi nahi chala. (Smiling a bit at a confused Shaurya who was still wondering that it was already done.) Aap na bilkul bachche ho PS.

Shaurya : (Coming back) Oh hello, main koi bacha nahi hu samjhi. Tum hogi bacchi main nahi. (Murmuring) Ek toh pata nahi kya laga diya itna jal raha hai upar se bacha bol rahi hai.

Anokhi : Aapne kuch kaha kya PS?

Shaurya : Nahi toh maine thodi kuch kaha… Tum bolne kaha deti ho kuch kehne ke liye..

Anokhi : (Getting offended) Main.. Main bolne nahi deti.. Waah! Matlab aap aise gusse mein kuch bhi karo, fir aake aapko sambhalu bhi main aur fir main hi bolne nahi deti.. Mujhe na baat hi nahi karni aap se.

Shaurya : (Understanding that he has offended her) Acha sorry. Suno na please sorry main aise hi mazak kar raha tha. You know I’m a changed person now. Toh thoda..

Anokhi : (Cuts him in between) Toh kya toh? Badal gaye hai toh kuch bhi kahenge? Uss din Babli di ke samne Stupid bol diya.. Abhi yeh..

Shaurya : (Trying to persuade her) Arey sorry bola na maine. Firse bol raha hoon sorry… Bas? Abhi chale wapas?

Anokhi : (Nods in assertion) Haan… Par jayenge kaise? Aap drive kar paoge?

Shaurya : Dekhte hai.. Thoda dard toh ho raha hai… Tum aao na gaadi mein baitho…

Anokhi gets inside the car. Shaurya tries to start but the car doesn’t start. He tries again but in vain. Both of them were confused as to why the car was not starting. After multiple failed attempts both of them get out of the car.

Shaurya : Lagta hai gaadi kharab ho gayi hai. Toh hume shayad koi taxi ya kuch aur dekhna padega.

Anokhi : Haan.. Woh sab toh thik hai par yaha door door tak na koi auto nazar aa raha hai na koi taxi. Aur humara hotel bhi kafi door hai yaha se.

Shaurya : (Looking at the clock. It showed 10 pm) Kafi late bhi ho gaya hai. Auto aur taxi ka intezaar karenge toh subah ho jayegi. Ek kaam karte hai…

Anokhi : Kya PS?

Shaurya : Yaad hai uss din Kapurthala se Chandigarh wapas aate waqt hum raasta bhatak gaye the?

Anokhi : (Cuts hin in between) Hum nahi aap PS (smiles looking at him)

Shaurya : Acha thik hai correction… Main rasta bhatak gaya tha… Aur woh humari unofficial long drive hui thi. But aaj mauka bhi hai gaadi bhi kharab hai… Toh aaj main tumhe ek official long walk pe leke chalta hoon.

Anokhi : (Smiles at him) Haan toh fir chale?

Shaurya : Haan chalo.

Awesome❤️

Loved ShaKhi moment

Official long walk😆sounds really good

Banjar zameen par baarish!

Thank you Vaidehi!

I have been missing that fumbling bumbling silly Shaurya Sabherwal and this was such a joy to read 😍😍 Shaurya is a total baby!