RaghVi OS: A Wet Beginning of Love

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RaghVi OS: A Wet Beginning of Love

Raghav couldn't understand how to convince his wife. He knows that what he did was wrong. Yeah, he committed a sin. But he wants a chance to mend it. He will show her that he can be a worthy husband for her. He can give the world to her.

He tried every way to get near her heart but she remained unmoved. He tried to be as serving as possible . But she was stern in not accepting him. He now stopped giving reaction to him. She seems so empty now.

He can't understand what to do now. He feels that he will be unable to convince her in this lifetime. He already thinks of her as his wife not only for his amma but for himself. He wants to give chance to this marriage. Now will this marriage even work?

He went to pool in a robe to have a bathe and to cool his heart. He needs to think what will be his new move. He unrobed himself and went inside the pool. The coolness of water engulfed him cooling his mind and reliving him of all tension. He swam inside thinking of everything from the start.

He stopped swimming and settled at the bay where he had some juice. He pushed his wet hair back and wiped his face off water. He took the drink and started drinking.

He saw his wife coming to the pool. He looked at her like a predator. He was thinking how to trap his prey. She looked at him and turned away. He thought does she hate him this much to even turn herself by the looks of him. He couldn't tolerate it anymore, "Pallavi , abhi mai itna bura ho gaya kya , tum mere chehra tak nahi dekhna chathi ho"

"Aisa..Aisa kuch nahi..hai Raghav"

She tried to go away. But she slipped on the water outside and fell inside the water. She was startled by the sudden fall. She started struggling inside the pool. Raghav saw this and immediately went near her.

He immediately lifted her off water . She looked flushed and held his nape in fear. She started catching her breath. She had her eyes closed in fear. She had clutched his shoulders tightly.

He looked at her flushed face. Her face was dripping water. She looked delicate and precious. When did she became so precious to him?! Her red lips were trembling under fear, her little button nose and her closed eyes, all were alluring.

She opened her eyes and pushed on his chest to let her down. He let her down. She went away at the corner of the swimming pool.


main to bas teri chaahat mein, chahoon rehna sada

main to bas teri kurbat mein, chahoon rehna sada

saaya bhi tera main, hone na doon juda..

main tay kar liya.

He looked at her back. She was wearing backless blouse. Her milky back wet with water droplets were exposed to his gleaming eyes. She looked so small and petite. She looked vulnerable. And also seeing her like this, he wanted to protect her. He wanted to engulf her in his big arms keeping her safe from the world. An unknown feeling brimmed his heart. He walked towards her


tere ishq pe, tere waqt pe, bas haq hai ik mera

teri rooh pe tere jism pe, bas haq hai ik mera

bas haq hai ik mera, bas haq hai ik mera..

He gently turned her around. She looked at him. The moment they looked her breathe hitched. And he lost in her hazel brown eyes. He tucked her hair which were in her face. And he pulled her closer by her waist. her soft body crushed against his hard one. She started breathing heavily. He was aroused too by her breathing.He put his hands on her waist and gently lifted her . By lifting her,he put her on the surface. She looked mesmerized.


main to bas teri chaahat mein, chahoon rehna sada

main to bas teri kurbat mein, chahoon rehna sada

She suddenly came out of her trance and ran away. He smirked at her retreating figure. His wife was not completely unaffected by him. He loved this new discovery.

yaadon mein tujhko rakhoon

baatein bhi teri karoon

itna deewana hoon tera

raaton mein jaaga karoon

din bhar bhatakta rahoon

main to yahan se bas wahan

He went up and pulled his robe. He ran to his room where his wife will be there. He saw his wife was looking for a towel seriously. She looked distorted. She couldn't see the towel beside the table. He took the towel and went near her with a smirk.


tere ishq pe, tere waqt pe, bas haq hai ik mera

teri rooh pe tere jism pe, bas haq hai ik mera

bas haq hai ik mera, bas haq hai ik mera..


main to bas teri chaahat mein, chahoon rehna sada

main to bas teri kurbat mein, chahoon rehna sada

He pulled her close and then made her sit on the chair beside her the dressing table. Before she could say something, he put the towel on her head and started wiping her hair. She looked at him through the mirror. She was lost in his eyes.


baahon mein tujhko rakhoon

dhadkan main teri sunoon

aa itna nazdeek aa zara

jisme duaayen rahein

hardam wafaayen rahein

doon tujhko aisa ik jahan


He looked at her with his hungry eyes. He removed the towel from her hair and tucked her hair at one side. He went down to wipe her back where water was dripping. As the towel touched her bare skin, she hissed lowly. His fingers touched her bare back, she closed her eyes and held the dressing table. She looked so small and mesmerizing. He couldn't belive that she was his. And he was hers.

tere ishq pe, tere waqt pe, bas haq hai ik mera

teri rooh pe tere jism pe, bas haq hai ik mera

bas haq hai ik mera, bas haq hai ik mera..


Suddenly comb fell down startling both. She was broken from her trance. She took the towel from him and ran to the bathroom. While he stood there smiling at her retreating figure.


main to bas teri chaahat mein, chahoon rehna sada

main to bas teri kurbat mein, chahoon rehna sada


He was on cloud nine to know that his wife is affected by him in something. He looked at the mirror and smirked. He now knew the way to his wife's heart or atleast to grab her attention to him. The only way , he could think was SEDUCTION


The end ~

This idea is from the latest BTS!! Hope everyone likes it!!😳

And this is also dedicated to twitter gc ppl who asked me to write on this


BGM song: chaahat (bas haq hai ek mera)



Edited by christobelle - 4 years ago


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Posted: 4 years ago
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Thank u so much for this OS❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️loved it ...this much toh sikku can do yaar😭😭😭😭

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We knew way before him that he affects Pallavi more than she'll ever admit...

It was so sizzling... I wish he'd taken next step in the pool itself...☺️

The song though❤️... He's officially obsessed with her hair... And the way you wrote this piece was toe curling... Loved it...

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This was sizzling hot☺️☺️

Loved it❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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ULTRA-Hawt!!!


Thanks for writing on the BTS☺️ ....

Somehow I believe that if Raghav comes to the same conclusion as here that Seduction is what will get Pallavi to turn towards him, she'll never be a match for how he'll actually slowly get in her mind & heart .


Raghav has that capability & flair where he can literally Snare her into this Web & Ohh, I would love to see it happen....ITV par toh kabhi nahi milna yeh....But Thanks for fulfilling this wish❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Unres.....

This was hot....☺️

Ab to episode ka wait ni ho raha😆

Vimala this is beautiful ❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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chris, i must say you are too crisp in writing such sizzlers...akhir dimag ke ghode duad pade ..wow i must say this pro sizzling...universe plz read this we want this...totally felt ...❤️😛

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Posted: 4 years ago
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hoooooo wow loved it

can so see this happening

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Pretty good writing 👍 Pleasing and enjoyable❤️ Bas jaldi khatam hogaya

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Posted: 4 years ago
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first of all thank you so much for writing an os from the bts-- this one was awesome--now i can't wait for the makers to show us what they are bringing to us in that track

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