Unmistakable [RaghVi OS] - Page 5

Originally posted by: SONIA441

Arre, Don't Worry! Just try to think of it as another OS. Maybe some kinda business/life lesson that Raghav's teaching her when he sees her in a shop or sth. Like he gave advice during Mansi's sangeet for that School Lady na😉 .... Maybe this might help. Just trying to encourage awesome writers like you 🙈♥️

I am not worrying, I have no motivation whatsoever to do so. Would suggest you put this on EDT for better and more worthy writers to pick up dearie! 🤗

Originally posted by: Bee222

Always 🤗

Well I'm not into smelling stuff like Raghav 😆 But I do love mangoes 😆

Ahh, Sairat. I should've guessed from the "pati encouraging higher studies" convo. This reminded me more of TiaVeer than Yuvi/Ashi though... remember Ranveer and Arjun? 🤪

Lol. Yes, I genuinely thought Virat is supporting her to become a doctor, and boy, I could not have been more wrong about it. Major disappointment it turned out to be! Lessons learned ~ Read up about domestic violence and avoid any Chavans if possible. I do remember Ranveer/Arjun, but idk, never really liked Tia too much tbh. Was more of a fan of the trio ~ Ashi, her Thakur and Psycho, and the Aasma songs 😆

Originally posted by: Me000w

Hello folks! Tannu here

This is MY story that I have copied off another forum, and modified the names, coz it sorta seems to suit RaghVi too, if they DO go for the MBA track! 😆

The title is from a Backstreet Boys song that I love ~ Unmistakable

Hope you like it. Would appreciate any criticism and/or feedback

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This coffee shop is their place. For the four of them – Pallavi, Raghav, Farhad & Keerti. Not anyone else. Especially not the guy standing in line talking to Pallavi as she grabs them all french fries to share. Raghav grits his teeth as the guy-Tejas, he thinks. It's Tejas, who he caught staring at Pallavi from across the room-places a hand on Pallavi's elbow and leans down to whisper in her ear. "Anna?" His gaze snaps to Farhad, who's watching him carefully, concern in his eyes. "Are you okay?" Farhad asks him.

Raghav blinks, confused until he realizes he's been staring-glaring-in Pallavi's direction. Not at her of course, but Farhad doesn't know that. He's about to change the subject by asking where Keerti went, but quickly remembers that she couldn't make it today because she was conducting her Excel bootcamp. It's just him and Farhad and Pallavi. And Tejas. Great. "I'm fine." He sends his brother-like-friend a strained smile, gaze drifting passed him as Pallavi laughs, her head tossed back and eyes bright. His heart squeezes in his chest, but he shoves the bitter feeling down. Pallavi can talk to whoever she wants; he's not actually her husband.

Besides, she would kick his ass if she knew he was sour over her talking to another guy. Hell, he should kick his own ass for acting like a jealous husband. Farhad looks at him in disbelief. "Are you sure? Because you've been staring at Pallavi with this weird look on your face for a while now." Raghav frowns. "I wasn't looking at Pallavi weirdly. I'm just wondering why the line is so long today," he bluffs. Technically, he wasn't looking at Pallavi with that expression. He was looking at Pallavi and Tejas like that. There's a difference.

Farhad shakes his head, a slight smile on his face. "I wasn't talking about today," he murmurs. "Hmm?" Raghav turns back to Farhad, clearly having missed the question. Farhad waves him off with a shake of the head, turning back to the case file in front of him. Raghav quirks a brow, but something stops him from replying. Pallavi giggles. It sounds happy and airy and it's what he thinks sunshine would sound like if it had a noise. On one hand, he's shocked-completely stunned by the soft sound-because Pallavi never giggles, least of all around strangers, but on the other hand something warm floods through him, bubbling in his chest and creeping onto his face.

Oh, and he knows exactly what it is. He's liked Pallavi for a long time now, he just hasn't worked up the nerve to tell her yet. And that's a huge problem in itself, because he's pretty sure the word "love" is practically written across his face whenever he sees her-which is a lot-and he's pretty sure people are beginning to notice-including Amma, Farhad, Harish, Reddy, Krishna and Keerti, who take turns looking at him whenever he talks to Pallavi.

Raghav's thought process is shattered as Pallavi's gaze slides to his and she smiles-not a smirk-a real, true smile. His heart skips a beat. She turns back to Tejas a second later, laughing at something he says, and places a hand on his shoulder, leaning closer to him. Raghav looks away. Clearing his throat, Raghav reaches into his bag, blindly grasping for a file to distract himself with, and practically slams it onto the table, startling Farhad, who peers at him over the case file. He sneers, shoving the file to the side and running a hand over his face, gritting his teeth. "What is wrong with you today?" Farhad asks, frowning at him. Raghav sighs. "Nothing, it's just Monday." Farhad's frown deepens. "It's Friday." Raghav groans, cursing under his breath.

A sly grin tugs at Farhad's lips "Does your bad attitude by any chance correlate with Pallavi-"A tray of fries is dropped between the two guys unceremoniously, cutting Farhad off mid-sentence. Both of them startle, Farhad dropping his box and Raghav whipping around to face his baiko as she slides into the seat next to him, grinning at the two of them. "Sorry it took so long. There was a long line," Pallavi explains briefly, giving them a noncommittal shrug.

Pallavi shoots him a look, but he pointedly ignores it. "Saree ka Dukaan, you were talking to THAT guy," he says to her sourly, keeping his eyes on the fries. Pallavi shrugs. "Yeah, he's a nice guy, my classmate ~ Tejas Mhatre, funny too, it is so nice to get to talk to someone in my language after a long time, you know?" she tells him. “He might be younger to you, RIGHT?” “Nope, he’s a year or two younger than you maybe, assuming that you are ACTUALLY 27, not 30, but we are the same age. That’s why we vibe.” Raghav has to fight back an eye roll-because Raghav doesn't roll his eyes. "He must be," he grumbles, "considering how much you were laughing." Pallavi raises a brow at him, lips quirked up in a smile.

"We were talking about you and how you helped me to pursue my dreams despite everything else," Pallavi tells him, lips twitching as she recalls the memory. Raghav groans, ducking his head in embarrassment. He doesn't even want to think about what happened to his feelings in the past 15 minutes or so. "Oh," he replies softly. She smirks. "Are you, how do you say it in your Don terms..oh chuck it..lemme just use normal words..J-E-A-L-O-U-S, Ghamandi Rao?" It's a joke, he can tell, but he takes the bait anyway.

"And what if I said I was?" he asks softly, turning to face her directly, his knee bumping hers under the table. Across from them, Farhad chokes on his donut in surprise, coughing. Pallavi shakes her head slowly, her eyes almost sad. "Then I would say you're being silly," she says, sending him a little smile. "We were just talking and I'm not your REAL wife." Raghav takes a deep breath, steeling himself. "And what if, hypothetically, I wanted to change that?" he asks, voice wavering slightly. The last thing he wants to do is send Pallavi running for the hills because she doesn't like him the same way. Pallavi grins, leaning into him, lips brushing his ear. His heart lunges into his throat and he freezes, heart beating out of control.

"Well, hypothetically, I would tell you to ask me out properly."

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Unmistakable ~ Backstreet Boys

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Bh6s78QkxDc

I really really liked it ❤️. It seems like a very real and realistic plot 👏

I totally see your point. Sometimes it's just better to have a story as it it.☺️ Best of luck for your exams, you'll surely rock them as well🤗

Originally posted by: Me000w

I am not worrying, I have no motivation whatsoever to do so. Would suggest you put this on EDT for better and more worthy writers to pick up dearie! 🤗

No probs Dear!! All the best for your Exams too🤗

Originally posted by: Bee222

Aww dearie 🤗 First of all, best of luck for your exams! Seeing how you're so particular about everything, I know you're gonna rock them ⭐️

Secondly, writing is all about bringing your own wishes and imaginings to life, so you should only ever write for yourself. Don't feel pressured! ❤️

But also for yourself, sometimes consider taking a step beyond your comfort zone as well 😳 The first time is always difficult, but you'll never get better until you try, right? 😳 Trust me, it feels good to take that step. No matter how much you feel it sucks, you're one step closer to achieving something new ❤️

All the best! 🤗

Thanks for the kind wishes 🤗

I did not wanna leave anyone in the dark or breed false hopes about another chapter when I am not good at continuation and/or have absolutely no interest in it whatsoever, hence I penned it down as a message. I appreciate honesty and giving clear expectations to others, do not deem it fair to be pushed into doing something irrespective of intentions, and have tried to be as polite as possible in conveying it, hence expecting people are not offended with my stance. Would be highly thankful if people would be understanding and accept that at face value. Thank You.

@Bold: You're gonna make someone a nice fortune cookie someday!

Originally posted by: GoldenHour

I really really liked it ❤️. It seems like a very real and realistic plot 👏

I totally see your point. Sometimes it's just better to have a story as it it.☺️ Best of luck for your exams, you'll surely rock them as well🤗

Thanks for reading and your kind wishes 💫

Glad you liked it 💕

Originally posted by: SONIA441

No probs Dear!! All the best for your Exams too🤗

Thanks for your kind wishes 🤗

Originally posted by: Me000w

Lol. Yes, I genuinely thought Virat is supporting her to become a doctor, and boy, I could not have been more wrong about it. Major disappointment it turned out to be! Lessons learned ~ Read up about domestic violence and avoid any Chavans if possible. I do remember Ranveer/Arjun, but idk, never really liked Tia too much tbh. Was more of a fan of the trio ~ Ashi, her Thakur and Psycho, and the Aasma songs 😆

Well, my granny has watched the bengali versions of all the current SP shows, so I wasn't keeping up hopes for any of them (I'll give it to SAAKK though — much better leads than the original, and the story seemed slightly improved too). Ghum I did watch during the post-shaadi phase, the Sairat scenes seemed cute and refreshing. But the Chavans were just plain intolerable, I don't think I have ever been this put off by an ITV family before 😣😣

Tia, I found her such a turnoff initially, total spoilt girl 😆 But she really grew on me. I loved how simple and straightforward she was, no resorting to tricks and twists like Ashi 🤪 I loved her bonding with her dad as well as with Ashi's mom, and I positively loved TiaVeer ❤️

I loved the trio too, obviously 😆 Such a riot watching them 😆 Everything about that show was so good

Originally posted by: Me000w

Thanks for the kind wishes 🤗

I did not wanna leave anyone in the dark or breed false hopes about another chapter when I am not good at continuation and/or have absolutely no interest in it whatsoever, hence I penned it down as a message. I appreciate honesty and giving clear expectations to others, do not fit it fair to be pushed into doing something irrespective of intentions, and have tried to be as polite as possible in conveying it, hence expecting people are not offended with my stance. Would be highly thankful if people would be understanding and accept that at face value. Thank You.

@Bold: You're gonna make someone a nice fortune cookie someday!

Of course, like I said, write what you want 👍🏼You're not bound to anyone's expectations here, so no reason for anyone to feel offended. I hope my words didn't offend you either, I was only speaking as a friend 😳 I know if I ever wanted to try something new, the forum would be the place I'd choose to do it, simply because I'm allowed to make mistakes here... that's a huge weight off my shoulders. I can just have fun and experiment. But to each their own ❤️ I'm very happy with this os as it is, and you know it. Even if I wanted a continuation, the author's decision is always final 👍🏼

@bold: I love fortune cookies! I'm taking that as a compliment 😆

Originally posted by: Bee222

Well, my granny has watched the bengali versions of all the current SP shows, so I wasn't keeping up hopes for any of them (I'll give it to SAAKK though — much better leads than the original, and the story seemed slightly improved too). Ghum I did watch during the post-shaadi phase, the Sairat scenes seemed cute and refreshing. But the Chavans were just plain intolerable, I don't think I have ever been this put off by an ITV family before 😣😣

Well, I was watching GHKKPM due to Gadchiroli track, loved both Sai Joshi and Virat Chavan there, Sai and her Abba's unique father-daughter bonding, and how they dealt with Jagtap there. Then the marriage happened, and ruckus started hence I left watching it. Abusive AF household that was.

Tia, I found her such a turnoff initially, total spoilt girl 😆 But she really grew on me. I loved how simple and straightforward she was, no resorting to tricks and twists like Ashi 🤪 I loved her bonding with her dad as well as with Ashi's mom, and I positively loved TiaVeer ❤️

Ashi might be resorting to tricks and twists, but she also stood up for what she truly believed in, irrespective of whether alone or for others. Have never seen her back down from a challenge or sit and blame her circumstances for how she turned out to be. She even called out Yuvraj for continuously using his dad's privileges, even when he claimed he was not a fan of his father and some of the others like Arjun deserved someone like her and Maria to see the mirror. That was similar between her and Ranveer. Sonia Ray as a single parent is a true inspiration! Whatever I have watched of the show, yeah, she is a nice person, but the couple was too lovey dovey for me to digest, personal preference! The moment I did respect her a lot is when she saved Ranveer's dad's school in Sanganer even after she knew he lied to her and he was guilty over the ordeal of thinking his dad died due to Mr. Ahuja. Dil ki Ye Dhadkan tops my list on Remix songs, after Mast Mast Hai Sama, Remix Title Song and Baad Mein Jahaan ❤️ Love Station is also nice, but only when one is in a good mood 😆

I loved the trio too, obviously 😆 Such a riot watching them 😆 Everything about that show was so good

Yes, that show was awesome!! 15+ years have passed since then, yet it remains in memory ❤️