ShiVi OS ft. family~ His proxy - Page 4

Originally posted by: helen_of_troy

Amazing OS! You balanced out everything so well here. <3 Please keep writing! I am loving all ur work 🤗

thank you🤗🤗

This is the most loved OS of mine...❤️

It was just so beautifully written 😊

Loved every dialogue and the scene...❤️😘

Awesome 😎👍

Originally posted by: ashsamik

This is the most loved OS of mine...❤️

It was just so beautifully written 😊

Loved every dialogue and the scene...❤️😘

Awesome 😎👍

Thanks a lot🤗

Beautiful os, no words for it👏

Every os of your is different and awesome👏

Loved how Raavi showed Devta their place, loved the dialogues and slaps😈

Krish is cute, love his one liners and the way he teased Shivi😆

Gaura were so proud of Shivi😊

Jandardan was a surprise , he doesn't like Dev but like Shiva😆

Shivi's chipkali romance and romance in room were hot❤️

Waiting for your next os

Wow, finally read it. What a beautiful os. I really enjoyed how you wrote about all of the frustration that we have all been feeling about Dev through Raavi. It was such a perfect way to show that shes Shiva's wife.

The development of Shiva's feelings and how they didnt hesitate to go to each other when they both realized their feelings was so beautiful.

Also Krish was such a highlight in the 2nd half!😆 The way he started singing had me laughing. He really does have the advantage ( or disadvantage, depending on how you look at it) for seeing everything!

Again, beautiful os!!

Omg really loved the os pliz continue writing like this ❤❤❤❤🔥🔥🔥🔥

Originally posted by: katheriene

Beautiful os, no words for it👏

Thanks a lot🤗

Every os of your is different and awesome👏

Loved how Raavi showed Devta their place, loved the dialogues and slaps😈

Krish is cute, love his one liners and the way he teased Shivi😆

Gaura were so proud of Shivi😊

Jandardan was a surprise , he doesn't like Dev but like Shiva😆

Shivi's chipkali romance and romance in room were hot❤️

Waiting for your next os

Soonish, in fact already posted😆

Originally posted by: ms.ObseSSeD

Wow, finally read it. What a beautiful os. I really enjoyed how you wrote about all of the frustration that we have all been feeling about Dev through Raavi. It was such a perfect way to show that shes Shiva's wife.

I was thinking to write this since long, but it was getting delayed, finally I managed to finish this. 😆

The development of Shiva's feelings and how they didnt hesitate to go to each other when they both realized their feelings was so beautiful.

Also Krish was such a highlight in the 2nd half!😆 The way he started singing had me laughing. He really does have the advantage ( or disadvantage, depending on how you look at it) for seeing everything!

Well, he's free right now, so he could do that I guess🤣

Again, beautiful os!!.

Thank you🤗

Originally posted by: Jazzsingh20

Omg really loved the os pliz continue writing like this ❤❤❤❤🔥🔥🔥🔥

thank you❤️

Wow...what a beauitful os

The way you described the feelings...i read it already thrice...this is mindblowing ❤️