ShaKhi OS: Crime of Passion - Page 6

I have unresed 😎

I can't stop rereading your OS. Its awesome... It flows from one sentence to another effortlessly and has an elegance wrt language. Do you have any more of OS or FF or anything? I would love to read more of your work.

Originally posted by: MeeraWrites

Loved it. ❤️

Anokhi's hostel room is the ShaKhi shipping adda.

Loved the way they cleared their misunderstandings.

Shaurya's saaf safaai consciousness is making it hard for ShaKhians. 😆

I truly never want ShaKhi to leave her hostel room! That is where all the magic happens 🤣 Also seriously this day saaf safaai is the only thing on my mind 😆

Thank you so much for reading 🤗

Originally posted by: Mahaali2905

Just one word beautiful ❤️ story loved it

Thank you so much for reading ❤️❤️❤️

Originally posted by: mahiaana

Hayoooo rabbbaaaa kya piece hei yeh! Ufffff!

Now I wish ki yeh main jama rakh deti and actual MU sequence shuru hone ke baad ake padhtie. It was so emotional at the same time freaking hot!

Shit that vase 🌚 tujhe abhi hi tutna tha kya????? Yeh vase nahi actually devi hei jo vase bankar agayi cookblock karne. Pura feel mei chali gayi thi and vase ne feelings ki poput bana di.

Anyway it was beautiful 😍😍😍 maine tumhari aur bhi ff/os padha hei shakhi pe. So as usual you did an outstanding work ❤❤❤❤

hahahaha I feel like we will all need to have lots of stories to get us through the upcoming MUs track!! Thank you so much I was trying to balance the passion with emotion because I can never resist with adding an emotional element 😆

hahahaha I wish Devi also gets shattered like the vase if that's the case 🤣 hahaha from this point forward no vase will stop shaurya i'm sure

Thank you so much for your extremely kind (and hilarious) words and I'm glad you enjoyed!! Also your DP is making me die!!

Originally posted by: ..RiMi..

I am so excited to read your work Sru 😳 Pehle I thought "crime " Matlab its ShauHir 😳 (Kidding)

OMGGGGG I SHOULD HAVE DONE SHAUHIR!! HOW COULD I MISS THIS PERFECT OPPORTUNITY

Lets start with Live review because i love doing that 😎

OMG Shaurya is at her door 😎 *excited*

Anokhi isn't opening... the door... hmm ... I know that wont be for long.

It lasted for a whole minute before this girl went and opened the door and then locked it behind her after he came in

Oh .. God.. 🤣 he really started knocking like that ?🤪 He is such a baby!!!!

He won't leave until he does what he came to do ☺️

I loved their bickering. Both of them made valid points and its so obvious that they have mutual feelings for each other but both are trying to hide it. 😆

I am ready for the taunting to commence in the show you know! I want them to both be super salty and vaguely taunt each other just to hide their feelings/pain and the other is like i have no idea what you're saying but imma taunt you nonetheless

Ooooo he grabbed her 😎

I loved how he hovered his lips close to her and waited for her approval...THAT IS BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN!

We are all about consent here!!!

Aahhhhhhhh THAT KISS!

Okay.. HE WANTS TO KISS HER ON MORE PLACES!! ☺️ I am so excited!

THERE IS A LOT OF SURFACE AREA TO COVER!!!

Omg her nails ☺️ her moans and his arousal ☺️ I can never get enough of kissing against the wall bits 😎☺️

If I had one wish, I would have not allowed that 🤬 Vase to be made 😡 😡

lol this would have become 18+ if not for that vase 🤣

God! That was such an intense argument and reconciliation ❤️

Shaurya confessed

Loved Anokhi's reaction! ❤️ cutie pie

I didn't even know that I would get to this emotional part but then was like damn we going there 🤪i just can't handle thinking about the upcoming MUs too long so I'm just avoiding

I loved distracted Shaurya in the end It would have been pretty messy had they not stopped 😎

There would be only one functioning bed in that hostel room if they hadn't stoped ☺️

I absolutely loved the OS 🤗

THANK YOU SO MUCH ❤️❤️❤️ I LOVED THIS LIVE REVIEW! I gave you live responses back 😎

replies in red!!!!

Originally posted by: sunshine890

So beautiful!!!!

I wish their misunderstanding gets resolved like this .Quick and Smooth. With no third party involved.

Their emotional conversation and cofession ❤️❤️❤️

Thank you for writting!

Thank you so much for reading and commenting!! I think when these two actually talk, things have a way of coming out in frustration and they solve their problems by themselves! I have faith that will happen in the show too but until that breaking point, it'll be a long ride!!

Originally posted by: infinitie

Akanksha ❤️

omg come here you gorgeous human being 🤗 thank you so much for the extremely high praise!! Dude the control you have over words and the way you are able to weave them to touch emotions, I feel like I'm always blown away by you! I'm working with characters who are so beautiful on their own and you know how much I love them. I can only hope that my pieces can do some justice to the layered characters we have all fallen for.

I'm desperately waiting for the day that these two cling to each other and stake their claim to each other! They are so intensely connected to each other that I just can't imagine them staying apart for too long and not just sorting everything out.

Thank you so much for your comment and for showering me with so much love, seriously love you so much ❤️❤️❤️

Shrut 🤗

I read this again today ! Came here to search specifically for this ! Can't hold myself back from commenting again! I feel nostalgic. What a beauty this was Shrut! What a beauty.

Till we are not getting any ShaKhi let's hug each other and cry ! 😭💔